Discord has been given a second chance to change his chaotic ways after he is transformed back to his baby self after he is defeated by the elements of harmony. The main 6 has the task of taking care of him until he has fully proven himself to the princess he has changed his ways.
Page generated in 0.156 seconds
Total duration
853 users online
1,707,436 hits today, 2,707,512 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Just Sayin.
27.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m1d1twmdvK1r6syygo1_500.gif
awww and daww
This is interesting, although the only problem I can find is you have to start new paragraphs for every new speaker. Other than that it's interesting enough to track.
My god, all of my bits.
It seems rushed and a bit forced but with some more time I can see this becoming a very good story.
I'll be keeping an eye on it.
more of that please ^^
See above dawwwwwwwwws and awwwwwwwwwws. Earned a track, I mean a favorite, I mean a favetrack, er...I...maybe... ARRRGH! I CAN'T FIGURE OUT FAVORITES AND TRACKS SINCE THEY BUCKING CHANGED IT!
...Just kidding.
A bit rushed, but DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW
*Hivemind approves*
Keep in mind that Discord is not actually evil; he causes chaos because he is chaos, it's just what he is.
Baby Discord is so Cute!
*tom cruise voice* I want th e dawwwwwwwww
For the record, this is the cheesiest concept ever, and completely unrealistic, "She used her magic to fully transform him back into adulthood. He looked over himself, and a wicked smile grew across his face. He looked at the alicorn and smiled. Celestia wasn't influenced by his evilness at all."
...and I love it.
Nice job Twilight you woke up Discord!
I for one am not trusting Twilight with looking after Discord. Give him to Fluttershy or maybe Pinkie Pie but not Twilight and certainly not Applejack! 
414027
You will see later what happens, don't worry.
I'm in for da lolz. And da chaos.
The picture......AWWWWWWWWWW*grabs baby discord and hugs him to death* HE IS SO CUTE!!!
414077
That was my reaction when I found the picture. I really want a Discord plush.
414197 WHy settle for a mere plushy? If you could get an ACTUAL discord baby*like in my little dashie or any of those other fics that so taunt us because they make us want to get real live baby ponies to care for* I know you would take the chance. I know I would
414266
I would bring Discord. I would bring him everywhere.
414423 Baby Discord in a wittle baby carriage wearing a bonet
does that not sound funny and just admorable*if in a silly sort of way* Maybe him shaking a rattle and sucking on a pacifier :P Add in a baby Luna, Celestia and Nightmare Moon and you got yourself some worlds funniest homevideo moments :P
Hehe oh my Fluttershy is in for a real hoof full.
He can come home with me, I'll take him!!!
more!!!!!! 
Not a bad story so far. However there were a few grammar mistakes and general confusion as the chapter seemed to go by a tad too fast. Like does Discord contain all of his past memories or is he a clean slate? Because at the beginning he remembers the mane 6 but doesn't act like he remembers nor is he confused about whatever the heck happened to him considering that Celestia had to come in and tell him what she did.
Maybe a little more description could be added to get rid of the rushing of the story. A proofreader could probably help with the grammar stuff and catch the confusing points as well. This story could easily be improved upon but I still like it and look forward to the next chapter.
414447
OH MY GOD thats too adorable
417742 I know isn't it. Why doesn't someone make a fic like that? Little Dashie is cute but come on. A my little celestia, Luna, nightmare, discord would be just D'awwwwwwww!
417874
i know!!! I think I am gonna do that too!!!
418039
YES! Glad I could give an idea :D
New favorite story
update soon
418065
Anytime :)
414016
....
.....
....
Awww Discord ^_^
And the update comes
discord best baby
I SHALL READ DIS LADER WITH ME AND MY CAPS LOCKS. they should add a luna emote soon
420533 IKR a trixie emotion but no Luna
Another good chapter
This one cleared up a few of my previous questions nicely. It still seemed a tad rushed though and there we're a few grammar errors here and there but this chapter is a lot better than the last.
I can't wait to see what they do next with the lil guy~!
I NEED MOAR IF I DUNT GET MOAR I WILL HAVE A DORABLE ATTACK AND DIE! *has dorable attack* ...
Celestia, you're such a troll.
421949
isn't she?
421961
Everything's looking great I love me some adorably tiny Discord. The only thing I'd suggest is fixing the layout you might want to put a space between each time a character talks and If you wish to show that one of them is thinking some thing put it in italic.
Sorry if this isn't to helpful I'm usually the one receiving advice not giving it.
You're doing good and Discord is so cute. If possible you should correct the erros others are commenting on so this will be even better.
P.S. I bet first thing the next morning Discord gets hungry and the girls have to find something for him to eat. I can't wait to see what kind of mess they'll get themselves into.
I just noticed in the part where Celestia takes him out of the crib it says "He used her magic" typo?
Awesome! Now off to read said update.
423776
I am going to do a quick error check because I had to type these with wordpad and now i have a better spellchecker :)
Just a little thing that will help readers follow conversations easier; try using a new line for every speaker. Very good story aside from the confusing speech.
Discord? Walking about Ponyville? I know he's a baby now, but he's still Discord, and everypony's still afraid of him.
This will not end well.
425830 i dont think they know it is Discord there are others of the Species of discord just not nearly as famous