I'm so sorry. We opened the box...
Please. Don't make the same mistake we did...
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ObsidianPony
British derp writer who derps and writes but mostly derps
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oh Twilight... you never were one to listen to random pieces of paper that tell you to do things- oh wait. you do. all the time. so why stop now? are you bipolar? I think that's it. Lesson Zero was a warning, people.
and as for the story... I liked it. I would think this would be more fit for a longer, multi-chapter story chronicling more about what went wrong as the Elements went about getting the keys. but as it is, I enjoyed it.
Well they're screwed
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Probably could do but I already have multiple ongoing stories, just wanted to give this concept a whirl.
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oh I understand completely. and like I said, it's fine as is.
Well that was... interesting... I like it.
What came from the box sounds awfully familiar, but I can't remember what it is.
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The idea was that it was the Pony of Shadows from episode 3 gaining a physical form.
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Yeah I know that, but I was referring to the idea that the Pony of Shadows would not stop until it had brought about true, total harmony by wiping out anything that could potentially cause disharmony ever again.
I'm sure that I've heard something similar before, but not in a fic. But I just can't remember where, and was recently.
So awesome... Hoping that you did not fall asleep with a prophetic dream last night as your inspiration.
On a better note, yay doctor!
Damn it Twilight!
Wow....just wow.
Twilight, you dumb bitch.
Is the pony of shadows similar to the snow horese from the play?
The Pony of Shadows is similar to the ultimate weapon from Pokemon X/Y. Once unlocked/used, it will destroy everything to end the disharmony and create a new world.
3575618 You mean the Windegoes?
3575824 Yeah, them. I forgot their name.
Daaaaaaaammmmnnnnn.
This was dark and incredibly good.
~Skeeter The Lurker
And le shite hits ze fan.
I just... what? No. Just... no. Why couldn't Doctor Whooves go back in time to take the chest to another spot. He can take minutes to write, but not a second to go back in time?
The more I think about this, the more my brain hurts. Unless you explained everything in the story, then ignore me. I'm extremely sleep-deprived. 
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You'll notice that I never said Doctor Whooves had a Tardis in this story.
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That sounds like something out of Doctor Who or Spider-Man, or something like that, with a lot of recurring big-time villains.
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I've seen a lot of things that use the idea, couldn't tell you which one I got the idea from but almost certainly it was from something I watched/read/played recently.
Heh, for a second I thought the box held the Triforce or something like that. I mean that's how the story for it goes anyway.
Reminds me of RainbowBob's Discord story where Twilight uses a reforming spell on him.
3577687 Ok. That was me acting like a stupid person. You'll be surprised at just a few hours lack of sleep can affect your mental skills. I live in Australia, so my time might be different to yours (depending on where you live).
3575797 ... why did you bring pokemon into this perfectly good story?!
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I was merely pointing out a similarity.
I'm sorry, I didn't mean to cause offense
Twilight, Rarity, Applejack, Flutter shy, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash DONT OPEN THE BOX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DESTROY IT
Glad i finally decided to give this a read and it was worth it. Never would have thought of this concept. Puts my idea to shame. anyway, good job and continue writing,mate.
Makes sense. In canon, the keys were found by the element bearers coming to understand the elements in a way that enriched their lives and the lives of others. Thus, the keys the obtained were manifestation of that realization, and they unlocked the gentler force of harmony. But had they attained the keys through cruelty, they might unlock something just as vile as what spawned those keys. An interesting, if horrific possibility.
Though it also makes me wonder what made the bearers like that. Did the pursuit reveal them for monsters, or did the greed of the rest of Equestria force them to become monsters? After all, they might have thought they'd release Harmony to the people and end their greed and violence, thus justifying their own need for violence.
Went back in time to the wrong timeline eh?
I definitely sense a time loop.