Anonymous (You) had caught Fluttershy with another stallion, and though you had to wait for an opportune moment, it finally arrived. With her away for a day in Canterlot with friends, you release all your pent up frustration by destroying any memories of you two in her home. Having not enough to move out of Ponyville, but enough to rent a small place, you cannot escape the eventual confrontation.
When the time comes, you hope you can find a new life, even though the truth will hurt everyone and destroy relationships that could be more fragile than you realize. However, you have vowed to see it through to the end, and with that push forward into the unknown of your story.
Only thing is, why do you keep trying to fight the wanting in you to make it work? Make it last? One way or another, you will either leave Pony-Ville and everything with it behind. Or some-pony is going to convince you to stay.
I'm faving... I want to see where this goes.
uhhh... why would fluttershy cheat?
i know this is fiction but still.
not gonna give it a down vote or up vote yet.
Beyond the sickening writing style of Second-Person (Satan's POV of choice), your plot is extremely meh/boring.
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Hmm, I'll keep reading, interested to know what made fluttershy act so out of character.
I like this!
I'm intrigued, but even if it doesn't happen, I want to be the first to call it. That it was a total misunderstanding, there was no sex, and shit got broken for no reason.
3711936 holy crap Axe! How's it going bro?
3712787 it is going manly, how about you giant space machine of destruction?
3712926 Still prefer assassinating lonely heroes
finally a story were fluttershy is the jerk, i mean i love her chatter but when every body makes her seem good as gold it becomes boring. Any way good job
You better continue this damn story. I like it.
Next chapter?
different, that is for sure. ill keep my eye on this one
*pokes*
still alive?
Please continue
Hey wrighter! I was wondering if you were ever gonna continue this? If your gonna cancel it I we as wondering if I could take it over so that everypony doesn't get disappointed that it stopped on a good part. I'm not begging or trying to take credit for your work, this I promise. You will be credited for the work and stuff, but I just don't want any pony to be upset that such a good idea died. Pease msg me back!
~NS
Rip good story. You had such potential.
That moment when you just cant let go
I don't know why they bother when they just upright abandon these things, especially on the first, and only, frigging chapter.
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Nope.