The days go by, the same as they always do. You go through the day without a care in the world. Well, mostly.
You do care. You care for her. For the girl who's always been by your side. She's your best friends, and you hope you're hers. Thing is, she's bullied daily. Every day. Whether it's from some immature group of boys, to Sunset Shitter, she's always berated and picked on. Her friends care deeply for her, but sadly, are in next to no classes with her, and rarely see her.
You talk with her often though. Well, you don't really 'talk' like everyone. Being mute was always just something you never thought about.
But if only you could say something to her. Something to lift her back up. To let her know she's not worthless.
If only you could.
Here’s a theme I think could work for the story. Got a better one? Let me know in the comments. This is Not the End, by Fieldwork.
Rated 'T' for mild swearing. A few bombs are dropped here and there, but it's nothing TOO serious.
Hey, if you liked the story, you think you could add it to a group or two?
Damn. You got me good.
Nice story very cute
this was so sweet
im looking forward to more
Hot damn! Where the fuck is the feature!?
Liked! Favorited! Followed!
That love man, this chapter was soo emotional and full of love and friendship I really love this story you write soo I will like, favorite and follow for next updates and more incredible story's
I don't know why there are so many dislikes! Really well written and sweet. Great job, I can't wait to read more ;)
God, the feel was so amazing. This story was obviously well thought out. To all the people who disliked it.... [youtube= â–º 1:13â–º 1:13 m.youtube.com/watc... Dec 7, 2013]
Two things.
1) I love the story.
2) We can be mute 2nd person protagonist buddies!
This is the greatest story I have ever read on here without a doubt. Never has a story made me feel so many emotions while reading it. This should be on the front page so that everyone can read it.
That fucking BITCH!!!
Wonderfully written!
Just listening to this in the background and I think it fits well. I love the work you're doing. Keep it up, please!
All the feels!!
I think its good
Don't be makin' promises you can't keep, cause I'm sure it'll be put to test, and it might break.
I love it. But I didn't know I was a badass, putting people to sleep 'n shit.
4114585 Yea that is a good point actually... I hope that will get explained in future chapters
Not a crappy chapter at all
it was actually very sweet
4114654 hehe I agree it was simply amazing I love fluttershy she is one of my favorites and FriendlyTwo3 you did a awesome job on this story and I hope to read more in the future!! :D
My friend good to see you back in action welcome back FriendlyTwo =)
And hey FriendlyTwo3 if I may ask and I don't want to sound like a jerk when I ask this but why we're you gone for so long we all missed your amazing writing?
5004915 Just lost the drive to write for a long time. I'd look it over, begin to write, and come up with nothing. I wrote most of this chapter in school, so I guess that's why
Dude...
Theres a word for this......
Depressing-yeah thats it.
5007019 well like I said before FriendlyTwo3 you deserve a medal you know how to take dark and romance and create something Heartwarming and Depressing which is some key elements in a story like this so round of applause for you good job
5007520 Thanks
That means a lot
5007619 oh it's no problem that's what friends are for right? To congratulate their buddy's when they done a great job and this calls for a celebration and this celebration is for you FriendlyTwo3 enjoy
5007315 My friend that's the main point it is supposed to feel depressing fluttershy has been bullied for quite a while in this and your her only friend she can be with during school hours..but the good thing is that with you next to her you always have her back and never leave her behind and a example of that is when you get the text where she explains that she had a crush on you but sadly she can't keep living on like this so you feel a..as you could Say a certain adrenaline rush as you run to her house and kick down the door and stop her just in time for her to not drink the poison..so yes it can be depressing but it shows how much you should value friendship
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Bravo! I must tell you that this is one of my favourite story's so far
My friend thank you for such a stupendous story you really took dark and turned it into...a beautiful flower and watched it as it turned into a fragile rose of perfection and feels so thank you sir and thanks for making my day
*Looks at that, then looks at the song i heard while reading this chapter* "Fluttershy likes death metal?"