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Yea, the name is Siegfried. I just waltzed right in to Equestria, no real idea how I got here it just blended right in. I was walking a trail at night and exited Everfree Forest to find this lil' purple unicorn staring at me. Huh, well it could be worse. She could've had a craving for human stew. Well, this is my story and I hope they can tell me why the hell am I here in a world with ponies as the dominant race. ...what, dragons too, Oh crap.

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a tad unrealistic, but interesting nevertheless

This is a good story. The actions of the human involved are genuine enough, yet unique when compared to most other HiE fics. I can see someone acting like that if they are rational enough. Even if it is unrealistic to some it's not over the top. Good job.

wham! surprise cliffhanger attack! lines n stuff takes 72 damage

This latest chapter was hell to do. I was having such a hard time getting it to make sense and not seem like a filler, but I fear that's what I did. Ah well, I wanted to be done with this chapter so I can really start having fun with the story. If you stick around I hope to entertain you all more with the real idea I had for this. And also thanks to all those who added my story to their favorites. A very special thanks to all of you who are commenting on this story, I really appreciate any critics, and words of praise are always welcomed. I hope to have a new chapter out before the weekend, so wish me luck.

I do feel it was rather filler-ish, but one that would have been desperately needed if you wanted to continue the story. Still, really good story and loving it so far :twilightsmile:

To High_Wind: You know each chapter you seriously give me a case of the giggles, and I'm really thankful for the positive feedback I get from you via the images or video. Your awesome man, thanks for everything


To lines n stuff: Thanks, I really enjoyed it but I wanted to write so much in to one chapter I felt I would ruin the story with excessive chatter that was unnecessary.


Thanks everyone again, I really am enjoying writing this now after I got past the whole "introduction phase" of the story. I feel like I'm writing myself in to a wall each chapter and coming out of it and it's really fun for me. I actually have a lot of ideas for this story but I'm just letting my creative senses lead me. Thanks again to all likes an' comments, you all rock!

This particular chapter had me stumped on the interactions with Angel, but I liked how it came together. Next chapter should be up in like two days. I had half of it done but was trying to edit and work on the next chapter at the same time. Comments, Critics, and Cookies are appreciated. Oh, and likes/favorites are too. See ya' in two days.

Angel admitting defeat? Impossibru!
Good chapter, continue.:moustache:

hilarious. really liking this story

Alright, I was trying to read the whole thing before commenting, but I really feel one thing must be addressed in this chapter before I give my full impressions at the end:

During the court audience/interrogation scene, you never indicate who besides Siegfried is speaking. I had no idea it was supposed to be Blueblood asking the questions until after the questioning period was over, and that makes a significant difference in imagining the tone of them. You should put in at least some indication that he was the speaker, at least at the beginning of the barrage of questions.

>>Jet Magnum
To be honest, it is a bit of my weakness when I have to write dialogue and have quite a number of people in a setting. Trying to keep the reader from becoming confused as to who is speaking is a bit difficult for me, I'll work on it. Thanks for the advice.

So I know I'm really late with this chapter. I was attempting a new writing style and was re-evaluating where I wanted this story to take direction. Honestly I may need to add some tags for this story, I have some new insight on how I want this to proceed. Thanks for all those who added this to your favorites while this was on hiatus, it kept the fire embers in my head burning. Also thanks to those who have been following, I hope to see your comments on this, since I know I made you wait. Sorry. :fluttercry:

Better late than never. Good chapter, worth the wait. :twilightsmile:

Twilight. I think I'm in love with one of your friends, but I need your advice.":trollestia:"Also, I need to write a letter to the Princess. I found a timber-wolf pup, and I want to keep it.":eeyup:
he said that as casual as can be i was just like. lawl whut!?:rainbowhuh:

Hmm sounds like somepony already called dibs

1808510 or some 1 passed away...

Wow that is totally unexpected, I almost given up this chapter because I thought I know how the story goes,most of the HIE story the mare will say Yes, I even thought they only meet just a few days or weeks, and I hormone, not love. I looking forward for your next chapter:moustache:

Screw cool! Danger levels rising!
so basically "well fuck im going for it"

p.s.
You’ve got more nerve than I do, if Rarity rejected me… I don’t know what I’d do. Sorry Ziggy, I wish I knew what to say but the only thing I can think of is: tough break.”
fuck you spike! that's why your noponys fav pony

what is this craziness of a love rejection in a HiE? That scene alone just made this much more interesting.

wow a human getting rejected.... YAY.

HiE fic, human gets...REJECTED?!?!!?! :pinkiegasp: This suddenly got ALOT more interesting. can't wait for more!

Well, he get rejected, I wonder if in a future another pony will show interest on him, man Spike will be mad if suddenly Rarity reject him because she is interest in Siegfried

Always been a sucker for HumanXFluttershy
Never any good ones out there, y'know?

somehow I think her rejection has to do with her parents and not her true feelings. I for one would love to see them together.:fluttershysad:

It's very respectable that you decided the main character should develop a relationship with their love interest before they actually started dating; no one seems to do that anymore.

back from the grave and the wait didn't disappoint.

This has trollestia written all over it :trollestia: :trollestia: :trollestia:

Well, well, well, its looks like Celestia found someone that can drop the formalities and express his opinion to her, not as a princess but as mare. If in the end things don't work out for him and Shy, I think he can have a shot with Celestia.

I like this Celestia, slightly Trolestia, usually the author make her like a complete and cruel jokester that only want to make fun of everybody. Here instead you portray her as Celestia truly is, a mare that can take a joke and be a little flirty and want to help those how are in trouble, that is how the real Celestia act, and I like that you put that way, you are possible the first that could make a Trolestia that I like a one that can joke but knows that where and when and do it as a good friend and not some insensitive bitch.

P.S: Did he and Celestia could or may become close friends? Perhaps she would become his confident?

Oh and she never answer him? Did she is dating someone?

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Believe it or not readers, I left that intentionally blank. I have been playing with the idea of her exposing a past relationship or just her showing not many are brave to ask a princess out. To be honest, I don't know which one intrigues me more. However, I do plan to have that question answered in this story. So rest assured, he does get an answer, just not yet~

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Oh right, I can't wait to see.

By the way, what you mean by: "or just her showing not many are brave to ask a princess out." ?

Is like she accept and they go on a date, or what?

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All in due time, I came back from a hiatus only 'cuz I was struggling with a lot of things. THAT added to I've been really expanding on where I want to take this story and you have a bit of a break. I'm back for a good long haul though, so I hope to bring you more chapters.

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That does not answer my question. What did you mean by that sentence?

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Hello. You may not be aware of this but, the title for your story is extremely similar to that of http://www.fimfiction.net/story/37599/wild-card

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Huh, so it is. And upon looking further in to it, he has some chapter titles which I was saving for later.

Thanks for the heads-up, although my story is nowhere near as completed as theirs is, I must admit that it does bring a certain light to any plans I had.

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Yea me being one of the editors of the story kinda gives me the urge to correct alot of things.

Woo first

Nah just kidding

Great chapter

>ImmortalScientist

*Throws blue shell :D

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