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Yep. Rainbow got her wings back, as expected.
But, aw, dat ending. Poor Rainbow, torn between her life's dream and her newfound love.
You're evil, you know that? Making me wait one more chapter to see how this gets resolved? Still, I'll be patient.
I look forward to the conclusion of the Cupcake Chronicles!
531367 Blame 8 seasons of '24' for making me so damn awesome (apparently) at making cliffhangers.
Ah, but this is the penultimate chapter, is it not? Glad that you gave her the wings back.
I can't wait to see the end, kind sir. Though actually, you're pretty mean for cliffhanging us, as the other man said.
Eh, I don't mind though.
I look forward to the end.
AWESOME! Just Awesome! Well written and a great twist. Sir, I applaud you.
Outstanding.
Now Rainbow has to choose between the Wonderbolts and Applejack?
Daaaamn.
Another amazing chapter! I love this story
The end of the chapter: awwwww
Can't wait to see how things turn out: with AJ, her parents, and the Wonderbolts.
DAT ENDING
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
i love this story
i love it so much
Yay! Everything as expected! (imagine if it had been 'her friends looked at her in disbelief; she was dead' )
Anyways looking forward to what's next. After all, she does need to mend things with her parents.
So theres only 1 chapter left to the cup cake chronicles? I cant wait to see it. And its sooo great to see that she got her wings back! Yes!
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Thank Celestia... it didn't end in the way i was expecting, but damn... forced to pick between love and your dream to me the choice is clear
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oooooooooooooh.... if you start pulling cliffhangers like 24 i am going to throw my computer out the window.
532219 Don't worry. No matter what, I'm not going to start doing cliffha
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This is the first time, I think, that I actually out-loud "squee"d when I saw the chapter update. And then I read it, and it got better.
This chapter is one of the better done ones, in my opinion. In the conversation between Celestia and Stormcloud, the dialogue came off naturally and I could actually feel pathos for him.
Also, totally called it.
"Prediction B: Rainbow has wings again.
Prediction B2: The wings are pink." Maybe I wasn't completely right, but the idea's there. Let's get some fanart going.
I'm of two minds about the next chapter: I want to know what happens next. I'm also a bit sad, because it means the end of so much awesome.
Small critique, probably only important to people who know French. "Protege," spelled as such, strictly speaking does not mean anything. "Protégé" means a male person being sponsored by an important person. The correct spelling for a female is "protégée."
So much happy right now.
So then... anymore cliffs you wanna hang us from?
532913 Don't tempt me. XD
Yay! Rainbow has her wings back! Plus, they are pink, and having them return defies all logic. *sigh* Just like Pinkie.
I think Pinkie should have some kind of appearance, or at least a portion of conversation in the conclusion. Maybe a teary scene where Rainbow recalls all of her good Pinkie-related memories. Something sad.
Um, if you don't mind, that is...
I was somewhat skeptical that Rainbow would get her wings back but I guess I was wrong.
Part of me is disappointed at how cliche it is but then again the way in which Pinkie is incorporated in her wings makes it less so. So overall, I'm ok with it.
As for the rest of the chapter, can't wait to see how her parents resolve their issues and what Rainbow decides.
533670 I battled internally with the ending for months, mostly because of the cliche.
Which is also why I left the rest of the scars, as to make the wings seem more like a gift, and not have it seem like the torture never happened.
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Oh yeah, forgot about that. That's also why its not so bad.
It would be really cliche if it was "Oh, everything bad is now magically ok again."
i can't wait for two things.
one, she meets with her parents again]
two, she proposes to AJ or vice versa
As usual, I love it. But I don't want to end! I don't care if EVERY chapter end in a cliffhanger... just PLEASE don't end it!
536600 The main storyline will be finished. Not sure if I'll ever return with side stories, but I do have other pony tales to consider.
Huh, I thought her wings would be full pink.
Also, how far away from ponyville is cloudsdale? Because, if it's not very far, Dash could still live with AJ and be part of the wonderbolts. I get that the training would probably take up most of her time, but I doubt that Spitfire and the others would be incredibly offended if Dash made sure she still had enough time for romance.
That said, if Dash somehow betrays her very essence of Loyalty and chooses the wonderbolts over AJ, I might have to reach through the internet and start gibbs-smacking some ponies.
P.S. This story is amazing and I love it to death.
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Gibbs smacking... that would be funny to watch
537024 I wanted to give the impression that the Wonderbolts were going on an Equestrian-wide tour, and wouldn't be back for several months.
Well... I don't know. I mean, it began AMAZINGLY, but then you added this thing about Pinkie again and ruined the overall tone of the story. Another thing, you didn't make it long enough! You went through Pinkie's return way too quickly,and even though I didn't like it the length definately didn't do it justice. And finally, the transition after the fight brought it back to the origional tone, making it just plain awkward.
You sir have way with words, i cant wait to see how this story Continues.
539814 I can't please everyone. I have thought very carefully about the direction I wanted to take and finish this story with, and I knew some readers were not going to like it.
542521 I do like where you seem to be going now, but I just believe Pinkie should have stayed dead and gone and RD should have stayed wingless.
Best. Fimfiction. EVUR! immensely well written, distirbingly realistic dialogue, amazing storyline, just...just....ALL OF MY LOVE!
561593 I didn't really point out where Pinkamena was when she was writing the last entries. She was in her room, while Dash was presumably unconscious from the torture. And she locked the journal in the lockbox whenever she wasn't using it, so others wouldn't find it.
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Oh okay then. Lol sorry about that. xD
567932 Going in, I knew not everypony would be pleased. I really can't overstate how conflicted I was with how I wanted to end this thing. I can only hope that the Epilogue will satisfy.
Rainbow gets her wings back... that, I didn't see coming.
Aww Rainbow really loves AJ..
I am overwhelmed by the feels!
I like to think of the evil Pinkie as Nightmare Party.
Pinkie Pie risked her soul to fight the monster inside her. She gave up the secret to killing Pinkamena without hesitation, even knowing that it would be the death of her,even knowing that she would never see you again. She saved your life too; she took a part of herself and gave it you. Because of her, you now have back what you lost; what you wanted most in all the world.
Oh, Dashie...
She loved you more than Applejack.
Was Mr. M.A Larson involved in this? I seems like his gig, having characters sprout wings... Great story!
5116746 I know I've read this story several times and when she gets her wings back I always cry
5686327 ditto. I love this story just not the original cupcakes
separate lines of dialog.
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Pinkie healed you, the good mare finally fought her way out.
The truth hurts, doesn’t it, Stormcloud?
Eugh, a wonderful story with such a cliche ending. Lets see what happens next few paragraphs but really don't like the fact Rainbow got her wings back.