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Great chapter. That said, you're evil leaving us hanging on that cliffhanger from last chapter.
And in that moment, Stormclouds jaw not only hit the floor of the factory, but extended all the way to solid ground. Making one pink pony jelious that he can now hold more sugary confections in his mouth than her.
Have to agree with Macilnar. Great chapter, still on pins and neddles from last chapter
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Sorry! I always like to end my chapters leaving the readers wanting more. Chapter 7 is in progress right now!
New update. Yay.
This is my fav fic this far.
Kudos for you for writing it.
And too many cliffhangers.
too many ... :D
What?!
So now we have the cliffhanger from the last chapter and now this one too? Can't...take...it...AAARGH!!!
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I'm working as fast as I can! Glad you all are wanting more ASAP!
469081 So long as you don't go killing AJ or RD I'll be happy.
So another though minor cliffhanger?
I'm still waiting on Pinkie's apparent return.
One aspect does seem missing from the flashbacks of Rainbow Dash's early years in Ponyville.
WHERE IS DASH'S OBSESSION WITH THE WONDERBOLTS?
By the time Twilight arrives to oversee the Summer Sun Celebration, Dash is already fully obsessed with joining them, yet you have Dash in the same timeframe yet no mention of the WonderBolts at all.
Moreover that obsession is a factor earlier in your story, what with the Hoodie and honorary membership, so it just seems strange to be no mention of it in this chapter/flashback.
ooooh shit, son. Its 'bout to go down in ponyville! Yeuh!
*See's update*
Finally! Now to see what was up with the Pinkie ghost from the end of the last chapter.
*Reads*
You evil bastard :p
Anyway, I'm kind of curious as to why her dad didn't go try to see Dash as soon as he knew where she was. Unless he just decided on accepting that she was happy or something. Idk, but keep up the good work.
You've got an untamable herd of wild update chasers mate. Congrats :) Nuki made a good point though. Not a word about the wonderbolts over the past few chapters. Granted, her obsession is finally sated in the future, but her past self should be all about the blue wonders.
Ha! Can't wait to see stormcloud's reaction! it'll be priceless! Wow, I sound like a dick, don't I?
2 Cliffhangers at the same time?
ALL of my curios(ness?) Belongs to you my good sir!
The flow of the story is getting better. I've noticed improvement in the last couple chapters when compared to the beginning. I'm glad I'm sticking through the story
I see Cloudchaserd, and I get all happy, cause she is my favorite pony (ponycrush) then I read more, and I see "he thought to himself". DAFUQ
Cloud Chaser's a girl ...
Urrrgh the suspense! I bet StormCloud will just ZOOOOM to Ponyville and start looking for Dash.
I thought cloudchaser was
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when dash was doing her first day of work and said " best job ever." DWAAAAAAAAAAAA. that was pretty adorible. wait... I got this reaction from a cupcack alt... with 6 chapters previous was the journal...
Oooh. Double burn!
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Well take into account that ponies don't have sirnames or the whole malacry some people try shoving into fics with middle / last names (especially the ones who do so horribly and with little forethought of "I like how X name sounds", without seeing if the name's meaning actually ties in with said pony).
And that ponies are named (usually) over a physical/ mental/ magical attribute/ability, Future Special Talent, Cutie Mark Image, or something descriptive about them, or in the case of Earth Ponies. Thematic names (and yes there are exceptions to the rule. But those exceptions are exceptional for a reason).
And the amount of words in any given language.
Then it makes sense that at any given point in time. You'd have repeating names somewhere. With what makes that pony unique being gender, town location, quirks, or unique traits about them.
And just when things look bleak, we get another flashback,