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Ah! Why you do this to me??!!damn i gotta sleep ill have to read tomorrow
Dark. Grim. Scary. Reading this gives more scary images than playing Silent Hill.
I like it.
Didn't had nightmare though. Half-expected one.
741696 You cant get nightmares from fear, you get it from traumatisation, which cant happen through stories, movies, shows or games.
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I call bullshit all over this. I know I had C's Garden and Rainbow Factory related nightmares after reading them, as well as a number of horror movies.
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Didn't know if I wanted to read Cheerilee's Garden, but after your comment I have to give it a go. Especially if it's as bad as Rainbow Factory.
As for your other comment, it's true. I've gotten nightmares from horror movies in the past, especially the Hellraiser Series. Cupcakes and Pattycakes are the only fics that gave me Nightmares. The later not because of gore, but because I could see Flutters doing that to somepony.
Because fuck circumstantial evidence, I'll just take your word on it.
MRI Machines, now able to detect Dissociative Identity Disorder
Canterlot, now with 2 extra days
Because every law enforcement agency just gives out forensic medical reports to members of the public, rite?
I'm sorry if i seem like a Nazi the way I'm going about this.
Don't get me wrong, I actually like this story. The above are just some things that really bug me.
Heil Celestia!
Princess Luna is stepping up tremendously during this investigation. Always the one to take initiative, and the reason why she is my favorite princess. Also, the imagery is gripping and haunting with your description of the basement and it's appearance. I just wonder what is in the book.
She's got the journal...
Run, Scootaloo,run!
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That's because they're Magical Resonance Image Machines, silly!
Everything really is bigger in the city, even the weeks!
I'm pretty sure the original text specified that there were six wings with each being a different color, making at least six pegasi. And what about the foals? I know the original text specified that there were foal skulls/heads in the basement.
5108824 Again like i wrote in a comment before, alternate cupcake universe with different details.
By the way, reading about the killings in the basement, and the fact that the murderer died there too, really makes me curious if someone already wrote a fic about a "Paranormal Investigation of the cupcake murder house".
Think of Ghost hunters, ghost adventurers, grave encounters and Paranormal activity here.
I'm sure it's a perfect location to become haunted by the spirits of the victims and the killer.
You have numerous lines of dialog that need separating.
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Adding to my reply last time. OMC! Cheerilee's Garden was horrible, although nowhere near as Marey Sue, convoluted, and horribly written as the sequel to that fic. Although Cheerilee's Garden would've been a whole lot more scarier if they kept things somewhat within her character without going too OOC.
Enjoyed this chapter immensely.