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DUN DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUN!!!!!
I personally would have preferred this without the corny overused appledash stuff.
bleh was good fanfic til this appledash gunk came up
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I'm not a fan of f/f but I can go with it.
317388 I agree
Oh why so much hate? This is just an extra. Nothin out of context NOW SHUT UP AND CLOP
311409
This. The rest of the story is great, though. Onward to the next chapter!
I'm fine with shipping, but still not a fan of clop scenes. But I love the fic so much! You sir are a good writer. I think. I kinda flunked English class, so I'm not the best judge. Grammar is better than spiderses so I'm happy!
HEY!!!
it said ''romance'' did it not?
you should expect this sort of stuff!
thou I hoped it would be Luna X RD...
but anyway.... SHUT THE BUCK UP!!!!
I read halfway through this chapter before scrolling down to comments.... can I just say something D:
Rainbow randomly admits feelings for Applejack, a few minutes after she realizes this, she runs out and tells Applejack, they kiss, blah blah they both confess, they're sleeping in the same bed the next day and now you're already getting to the smut. >.< And this happens in... a day? Things are kinda getting a bit rushed in my opinion.... but oh well! Can't complain about some nice smut :D
311409 Yeah, some people forget that being good at one genre is not the same as being good at another genre. Romance is just as different to tragedy as Comedy is to Dark.
1149573
You are correct, the relationship feels rushed. even the sex scene is rushed, cus AJ has 0 sexual constitution in that scene.
my reaction to that scene,
"AppleDash clop? Not my favorite, but acceptable"
Kiss, Kiss, Kiss, Kiss, Lick, Orgasm
end of scene
"Wait! Is that all?! DAFUQ!"
Wait a minute, shouldn't the journal be given to Twilight ?
The story was great until all that appledash s**t came up . Hopefully it will get better
From a sensual, passionate, and raw romantic session of love making between Rainbow and Applejack to end with a suspenseful glance at the journal of killings by Pinkamena Diane Pie . Another well-done, and great chapter.
2859762
Did you not see the sex tagging?
This story tells love and affection differently than I've read in the past, this is the only story I've EVER read that moves from inner conflict, to external conflict, to... ugh... Sex in less than half a chapter, it's, in lack of a better word, surprising. I felt it was somewhat rushed but at the same time for some odd reason, perfectly paced...
5 / 5 stars...
More like inedible. This story would have been better if you bucked the shipping.
4203721 the tags gave it away, you were warned
4090668 i bucking agree. LOOK AT THE FRIGGING TAGS FOR LUNA'S SAKE!!!!
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Seriously I find it funny how many people were stupid enough to not know this was AppleDash with clop scenes. I mean it's like some people have no idea what any of the tags mean.
I did not see the surprise clop coming. Now i know that next time before I read, i should read the tags first.