As every part of his life spins in a different direction, Snails stands firm at the center of an unbeknownst torrent of world-changing adolescence, and contemplates something simple.
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Ah, NTSTS is back. So much for my plans for getting some sleep.
You're writing's great, really captivating, and the concept's really cute too
Nevertheless, tracking! 
I think you should add another space between paragraphs, but maybe that's just me being picky
Ohmygodyou'realiveIjustcame
This is so sweet and wonderful!
You made Snails cute. You are some sort of wizard. Love the whole concept, its sweet, simple, and harckens back to my own childhood in a way. Well done!
... Twails?
I wanna favorite... Where is the favorite button?
Wow.
Real good stuff. No BS.
Aww, so sweet. Snails and Twist is a pairing I could see really happening, although with more development. Good story.
At last a Snails fic
Wow. Not only is this a Twist/Snails story (I've been looking for one of those since October), but it's actually good? My day has officially been made.
A definite thumbs up, which would be five stars if we still used those.
>"Hey Thnailth!"
*unabashed squeal of delight*
Of course, I appreciate a good Snails fic too. :3 Poor kid, his talent is being slow. Yet it's not because he's dumb, he just has to think everything through methodically before he speaks. So... deliberateness, rather than slowness. Well characterized.
Very cute. I have many likes for this.
Add more, don't add more- either way, very good.
I came, I saw, I went dawwwwwwww
Cute shipping + good writing = CUTENESS OVERLOAD. Very well done.
This i sweet. Nice to see Snails portrayed with more going on that what it appears to be. Greenthumbed.
Aw, this is so sweet. These characters all need more love, they are really well-rounded characters, especially for supporting roles, in the show. Well done
I really enjoyed how you characterized Snails. His point of view in the story sounds very believable, and how he interacts with other characters is well done. I also like the way you wrote Snail's relationships with both his friends and Twist; they're nicely done and age appropriate.
I believe this is a good fanfic and I applaud it.
I can kinda relate to Snails in this story. I usually take my time to think about what I want to say before talking and I occasionally have trouble articulating my thoughts into words. Really, I like how small in scope this story is. Snails does not have a big adventure of self discovery nor does the story delve into a complex romance/drama. Those types of stories are more than welcome, but I appreciate how simple and pure this story is. Yet, despite how small in scope and content this story is, you still managed to flesh out Snails's character and show how he thinks and views a situation. Even when you are telling instead of showing what's going on in Snails's head, you write his thoughts in a long, methodical way that matches how he thinks and talks. I don't know if that last sentence makes much sense, but I'm just saying that this short story fascinates me quite a bit and I'm glad I took the time to read it and comment on it(which is the first time I'm commenting on a story on this site now that I think about it). So... thanks :)
Well... This is awkward. Just realized this story is about three years old and the author has been offline for about a year and a half. Oh well, still a good read.
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