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Twinkletail


I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.

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Twilight is excited when her brother and her sister-in-law invite her to go shopping with them! She starts to get a bit bothered, though, when they start treating her like a child.

Thanks to Steel Resolve for helping to get the idea rolling.

Written for One-Shotober.

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Comments ( 33 )

Good story. I really enjoyed it!

Yes :rainbowlaugh:
I call that it's a girl

Heh... This was another good one.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I saw the ending coming, but good nonetheless ^_^

this could work vary well as a comic strip :rainbowlaugh:

I'm going to say it, because I will despise myself if I don't get this thought out of my head.
*inhale*
Then Twilight remembers where babies come from and what the parents had to do to make one.
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Why didn't you place this as a comedy?

GAAAASP!

Has anyone else realized that the foal will be calling three of the Princesses 'Aunt' and one of them 'Mom'?

So. Awesome! :rainbowdetermined2:

Do people have something against using the Twilicorn tag when they're going to use Princess/Alicorn Twilight? :ajbemused:

Cute one shot otherwise.

:rainbowlaugh: Bwahahahaha

Good Story!

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I completely forgot it existed! Editing that in now.

3318214 I think you should remove the "Twilight" tag and leave the "Twilicorn" one:derpytongue2:

Made me crack a smile.

Funny and adoreable. Aweseome.:pinkiehappy:

They did that on purpose! :rainbowlaugh:

hopeful spoiler alert for season 4

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Especially cause the search-engine sees Twilicorn also as normal Twilight. If you search for Twilight-stories you get also Twilicorn-stories in the list. The same goes for the CMC-tag and the Mane6-tag. If you search for Sweetie Belle you will also get stories were the CMC are tagged in the characters.
Thus tagging Twilight and Twilicorn is double and unneeded.

I enjoyed reading this story.:twilightsmile:
Good luck best wishes for the future.

Heh. Called it. XD

I love the premise, and you wrote it very well. I thank you for that.

Cute story. Saw the ending coming right away.

Unlike others, I didn't see the ending coming. Awesome story!!:pinkiehappy:

3428972 Your avatar picture is amazing.

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thanks :pinkiehappy:

Actually its a modified screenshot from S03E08 - Apple Family Reunion :scootangel:

I loved it. You Must make a Sequel.

Pretty good story!

Got a chuckle from me.

Happy 200 likes

And then they bought adult diapers ;)

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