Join Fluttershy and her friends on a journey of social, psychological, and emotional exploration in a harrowing tale of self discovery and clandestine relationships. You may never feel the same way about illicit love.
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I OCD'd and fixed paragraph lengths in chapter 2 in the end after all. I think it's better.
Oh, Fluttershy. I think this'll be very interesting to follow. Fluttershy's turmoil- I love it so far!
DAMN YOU AND THE CLIFFHANGER!
I just want for Shy to be happy
Very good story, eager to read more, fluttershy and sweetie belle.
Hm, yes, cliffhangers. So very enjoyable.
I do hope things end, at the least, amicably for the two of them, though that would depend on which themes you're going to explore with this...
On another note, I thought your poetry was rather apt. I don't think a spontaneous poetic outburst by a character should be perfect. I, of course, cringed out of reflex when I saw the oncoming italics, but was pleasantly surprised.
Glad to hear the lyrics were palatable.
Thanks for all the comments!
Brilliant
this is beautiful and i love it
Drat it all, I hate cliffhangers.... I guess I will have to deal with it, im loving this story progression keep it up.
Ugh, cliffhanger... Even with a fairly educated guess as to how this is going to pan out, those are always painful. I guess I can't complain though, given the things I've written in the past...
Anyway, nicely done. I must say I'm really enjoying watching this unfold from a (somewhat) less explored angle of the whole foalcon experience. Keep up the good work.
Notice I've added an (((Optional Listening))) playlist to the story description for those who might like to hear songs that have served as my muses (or else are simply Flutterbelle-themed).
Dawwwww.
Cuddle ponys. Cuddle!
You know, I actually thought that was her singing. But since it was a poem, I think less of it. It reads much better as a song and just imagining Fluttershy's voice singing such a sad and haunting tune...
I would suggest turning it into a song. Better yet: commission someone to make it into a song!