Rainbow Dash invited some of her best friends to a picnic. Everypony was having a grand old time, when Twilight decided to show her friends a new spell she was learning. She hadn't cast this spell before, and she didn't have a full grasp of what it did. All she knew from the book she learned it in, was something about a big scaly lizard, and a dark old cave.
Little did Twilight know, the spell she was about to cast would send her and her friends to a different dimension. In which, they must go on dangerous adventures to find a way back.
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Chapters (3)
Of course she's here for the whole story!! Wouldn't have it any other way!
3305928 Not really writing a clopfic... If thats what you were refering to, it was a bit unclear.
This is in considerable need of an editor. Also, Rainbow as a rogue seems out of place, with matters of subtlety and quiet and all.
3317346 Yea... Not having an editor is a problem...
About RD being a rouge: what do you think i should do differently? I guess Cloud Kicker and Rainbow can switch...
great start so far and as a suggetion to the races they become fluttershy =elf avien rarity = half elf twi =half dragon (purple/amathyst) rainbow =human/avien aj = human/half orc pinky = human/halfling cloud = halfling /avien
3331284 I honestly hadn't considered making them different races, but now I shall.
I'm loving this, keep it up, and to answer the question.
I think it should be in RD's POV.
3394869 Not that I was waiting for an answer to that question, but I shall now begin writing in RD's POV.
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Yay!!!
Holy crap I completely forgot about this. Also, your is not you're.
6919758 Thanks!
Just fixed that along with a few other grammatical errors.