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Bootsy Slickmane


Retired writer and graphic artist.

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Pinkie Pie wants some help at Sugarcube Corner, and Rainbow is just the mare for the job. But things don't go exactly as Rainbow expects once she arrives.


Trust me.

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Comments ( 33 )

heh heh heh nice story

Wao that unnerved me! I was scared something horrible was going to happen a la cupcakes :pinkiecrazy:

Got to love that she pulled out the surprise party supplies. If anyone could make such weird treats it would be Pinkie. Does she have donuts that taste like gems or a pie that tastes like butterflies?:pinkiehappy:

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I can't imagine why. :trollestia: Seriously, though, I was inspired to write this after seeing Cupcakes HD (which isn't for the weak of stomach :twilightoops: ).

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And maybe some gumdrops that taste like... balloons?

3261847 Indeed, I was also anxious that Pinkie had put the actual Pony namesakes into their respective cakes!! But thankfully that was not the case...:trixieshiftleft:

At first I thought, "Oh no, plagarising Cupcakes I see."
Then awesomeness happened.

If this counts as an alternate ending, it's a good one. :3

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One day I thought to myself, "what if I made a story that looked like Cupcakes at first glance, built up some moments that looked like they'd lead to some horrible reveal, and then nothing happened?" I'm actually not sure what this is, but my best estimate is that it's a weird little slice of life story masquerading as a parody masquerading as a horror story. Thanks for giving it a fair chance, and I'm glad to see that you liked it.

I gotta say, this one made me hesitate for a while just based on the title and cover but I'm really glad I gave it a shot. This was really really solid. It felt a bit squished in spots (Mainly the treats thing, it felt really compressed and I would've liked more back and forth and maybe more about each individual treat. Not a big deal though:twilightsmile:) I love the apple tree cookie, that would be odd. I did find myself idly musing on whether they ate bark or not though:twistnerd:

I laugh especially as Present Perfect just did a blog talking about the effect Cupcakes has had on the fandom and then this pops up. Excellent timing and bravo.

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Thanks for giving it a fair shot, and I'm glad you liked it. I might go back one day and expand it a little, maybe try to make it more amusing.

3256687>>3257503>>3260344>>3261847>>3264879>>3267388>>3297162>>3301882>>3416180>>3431571 Im as teh repier ofs cumentz. Feer meh.

3256687>>3257503>>3260344>>3261847>>3264879>>3267388>>3297162>>3301882>>3416180>>3431571>>3645572 I reply to all commentz. Fear meh.

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Well you got me to come back here, and when I saw your Avatar I died from the adorableness. I'd be angry but cute fluttershy blocks negative emotions.

3648869 Your being able to comment negates your claim to death. And besides, the entire point of my collage to to kill my friend with adorableness. Today, however, I couldn't find enough adorable MLP pictures, so I mixed in some kittens.

"Pinkie, when was the last time you saw somepony eating a tree?"

"Well, last week I did see you and Flut-"

:rainbowlaugh:

Also, I thought that there was LSD in that cupcake...

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Heh heh.

It was some strong stuff, for sure.

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Now we know why Pinkie loves frosting...

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Powdered sugar and cocaine do look a bit similar....

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Hmm, that reminds me of this:
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Also, for some reason, most of the pics tagged "cocaine" on derpibooru depict Pinkie Pie...

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Nice comic.
And why am I not surprised?

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I guess she just looks like that... And Rarity probably does meth...

Nice cupcakes parody, man. Not your best work, but it lasted as long as the joke needed to. Good to see how you've improved since this.

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Oh yes. Sometimes, it's interesting to look back and see how far I've come.

5194143 having only two stories released, I can't do that:twilightsheepish:

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Just wait a year or so, and then you'll feel nice and old while looking back at your early work.

Comment posted by Phoenix Frost deleted Oct 28th, 2014

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Haven't seen the movie, but I've read a thing or two, so I think I have an idea. And I go back and do little revisions now and again, but it usually isn't major. I did do a moderate revision to one of my older stories recently, though, but that's fairly rare. And yeah, I generally write shorts, but I have quite a few longer stories in the works. I've never unpublished anything either, no matter the reception.

Comment posted by Phoenix Frost deleted Oct 28th, 2014

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Considering the spoiler nature of all this, we may want to take this to private messages, or at least the collab group. But yeah, that's a cool idea.

5194762 good point, luckily what I've said here is on one of our stories that has come and gone in popularity. Nonetheless, COMMENT DELETING TIME!!!

Neat little bait and switch. Well done.

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