My Little Warzone: Betrayal Part 1

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IraqLobstah

IraqLobstah #1 · Mar 10th, 2012 · · · Chapter 4: Confrontation ·

War fic....

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Cheers
~iraqlobstah

BlackTextDude

BlackTextDude #2 · Mar 10th, 2012 · · · Chapter 4: Confrontation ·

309254 It may not be your cup of tea, but that does not mean that it is gay. I bid you a good day sir.

IraqLobstah

IraqLobstah #3 · Mar 10th, 2012 · · · Chapter 4: Confrontation ·

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Its called a joke...

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Cheers
~iralqobstah

BlackTextDude

BlackTextDude #4 · Mar 10th, 2012 · · · Chapter 4: Confrontation ·

309283 Nope... media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lh2vmoKyz31qg5c73.jpg

Jewbacca

Jewbacca #5 · Mar 10th, 2012 · · · Chapter 4: Confrontation ·

309254

Well, IraqLobstah, here's the thing.

Most people register a war fic as something that's all action, no story, like Black Hawk Down, mostly action.

However, I focus on the darker side of things. It's not all action, is it? Celestia and Luna develop a drinking problem, actiony, at all? Nope! The warden for a POW camp shoots a mare in the back, brutally murders Carrot Top, and rapes and kills Cherilee. Does that sound actiony? Not to my knowledge.

As far as I'm concerned, that doesn't seem very actiony. Sure, when Molokus fights the sniper, or many other moments, it's actiony. But this is more legitimate compared to many war stories, not even ones based of MLP.

IraqLobstah

IraqLobstah #6 · Mar 10th, 2012 · · · Chapter 4: Confrontation ·

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I actually wasn't trying to say you mad,
i didn't watch the gif all the way to the end and just
thought it was a smiling troll.

MY BAD

Cheers
~iraqlobstah

cuck

cuck #7 · Mar 10th, 2012 · · · Chapter 4: Confrontation ·

I agree with iraqlobsta...if that's OK... 309283. Btw the pics and GIFs was really funny

IraqLobstah

IraqLobstah #8 · Mar 10th, 2012 · · · Chapter 4: Confrontation ·

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I made someone laugh
:D

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Cheers
~iraqlobstah

Doctor Valor

Doctor Valor #9 · Mar 10th, 2012 · · · Chapter 4: Confrontation ·

When I first read the title, I was like "Warzone 2100 crossover?!", but then I was like "Nope, coincidence".

I'll read this nonetheless

Jewbacca

Jewbacca #10 · Mar 11th, 2012 · · · Chapter 4: Confrontation ·

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You've probably already read what I have, but understand this.

Read my other fic, The Return of Nightmare Moon, despite it's lack of quality compared to this. IT's the only way you'll know what the Union, and the Aerisans are...

Doctor Valor