War fic....

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~iraqlobstah

>>309254309254 It may not be your cup of tea, but that does not mean that it is gay. I bid you a good day sir.

>>309276309276

Its called a joke...

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~iralqobstah

>>309283309283 Nope...

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>>309254309254

Well, IraqLobstah, here's the thing.

Most people register a war fic as something that's all action, no story, like Black Hawk Down, mostly action.

However, I focus on the darker side of things. It's not all action, is it? Celestia and Luna develop a drinking problem, actiony, at all? Nope! The warden for a POW camp shoots a mare in the back, brutally murders Carrot Top, and rapes and kills Cherilee. Does that sound actiony? Not to my knowledge.

As far as I'm concerned, that doesn't seem very actiony. Sure, when Molokus fights the sniper, or many other moments, it's actiony. But this is more legitimate compared to many war stories, not even ones based of MLP.

>>309304309304

I actually wasn't trying to say you mad,

i didn't watch the gif all the way to the end and just

thought it was a smiling troll.

MY BAD

Cheers

~iraqlobstah

I agree with iraqlobsta...if that's OK...        >>309283309283.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Btw the pics and GIFs was really funny

>>309400309400

I made someone laugh

:D

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~iraqlobstah

When I first read the title, I was like "Warzone 2100 crossover?!", but then I was like "Nope, coincidence".

I'll read this nonetheless

>>309943309943

You've probably already read what I have, but understand this.

Read my other fic, The Return of Nightmare Moon, despite it's lack of quality compared to this. IT's the only way you'll know what the Union, and the Aerisans are...

Not bad, but it feels a bit rushed and your too specific with the amount of troops, casualties, etc etc.

But other than that, your doing well!

This story has been around for two months, and doesn't even have 200 views yet...

Not sure if delete, or keep...