Meet Prince Solaris, or "Diddy" as his father calls him. The child of Princess Celestia and Discord, a grand destiny awaits the young boy, one that will one day shape all of Equestria. A villainous agent of destruction...a shining paragon of justice...who can say?
For now, he will simply be known as the Troublemaker, That Child, the Bane of Galas, and My Sunshine...
This is a story about the last two designation, a story about a mother and her child and their bond.
A story about a certain Gala's aftermath.
Art by lirazio.
Chapters (6)
Well, you've got a few errors, and thankfully, the Grammar Nazi in me is alive today. First off, capitalizing draconequus is not necessary.
You should add something in between that quote. Such as, oh, I don't know...
Whatever floats your boat, that's just my example. Remember to delete that end part, by the way.
This isn't too bad, but it's better if it's...
"It would do you some good" would be better :P.
This makes no sense. Just placing two quotes and some periods doesn't really look good either.
Something like that works.
Anyhow, aside from my evil editing, this story is awesome so far! Dislestia fics are rare to begin with, but ones that involve them married and starting a family, the kind that are my special weaknesses, they never show up, so I applaud you for writing this! I'm looking forward to more! ^_^
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. I'll be sure to consider/implement them.
Thanks for the comments and the advice
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I recognize that Draconequus doesn't need to be capitalized and neither does Alicorn but my shift key doesn't get enough love. I normally write on a tablet, which auto capitalizes beginning of sentences.
3256556 It's no problem.
Ok, where is the next button... Dang it! what the heck! Elements i command thee to find =, or make, the next button! This story is to good to go with out one!
P.s Great story man, will be waiting.
yep totality discord's son
yep... that made me do a spit take.... and i didn't have any water... that was damned hilarious!
OH GOD YES! I love this kid!
Discord's children are always hilariously mischevious - it's hard not to inherit traits like that when your old man is the most Chaotic being in all of the land.
I wanna punch my screen right now. Nopony badmouths the Dislestia kid. NOPONY.
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Dat reference. I love you even more now.
Someone is going to need a hug.
3301508 here's some advise typ in Ausra's wrath on toutube sub text heads will roll
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Reference? Where?
I really need to watch The Princess Bride one day.
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I'm sorry? I say that because I'm a little confused. What was it that hurt you? Was it the atrocious grammar? The horrible dialogue? The OC? Were characters OOC?
I'll change, I swear! Please don't leave me
3306973 SOLARIS FUCKING WATCHED AND HEARD A PONY CALL INSULT HIM LIKE THAT LIKE JESUS CHRIST AND THEN CELESTIA WAS CRYING AND THEN HE JUST LEFT TO GOD KNOWS WHERE AND YOU CAN'T FUCKING WRITE THAT UNLESS YOU HAVE NO SOUL
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Then you're gonna love the next chapter...maybe.
It's nice to know I can actually incite emotion through my writing.
3306991 Hun, it's called 'feels' its supposed to do that. Besides, it is probably Prince... Fuck how did I forget his name... Solaris! That dropped the rope and teleported out. Overlapping details. Is magic.
3307072 meh, souls are overrated anyways.
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Are you kidding? How am I gonna use the Soul Edge without a few?
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Just buy some of the devil, he usually gives a good price if he likes you.
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Yeeaah...see, I kinda won a golden fiddle from him and I bet he's still pretty sore about that. Oh yeah, and then there's the Christian thing...yeah, Satan and I don't really talk.
On the plus side, Jesus has this really awesome investment deal. I'm sure it'll pay off as soon as I'm dead
Okay damn... That's hard...
Urk, my feels...
*falls over grasping heart*
But then that ending...
Great Job ! My Favorite Chapter so far !
I wish I could like this again. This is probably the first time I've been able to call Discord adorable.
That was a great chapter, flustered Discord is best
What I'm really concerned about is why Luna didn't join them... Hmmm?
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Chapter 4:
3422113 FOOL. Discord is always adorable.
It takes a either a really great writer or an incredibly terrible one to make me want to both laugh and cry at the same time. You fall into the former category.
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Why, thank you
3424988 You're welcome
I love the dialogue man. Can't wait to see how the kid turns out.
OH GOD THIS WAS SO WORTH THE WAIT
YOU BROKE ME I'M DEAD *flails and faints*
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Can't wait for the next chapter of Ray of Sunshine.
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squee. Hopefully my motivation will come back around.
It's over! It's over!? Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
And then suddenly, A tear burst from my eye...
Followed by a thousand others...
The feels contradict each other. I cannot compute. (I keep all emotion out of reading until I reach the end, so I'm so confused...). Staring blankly at the screen for a few minutes... Commence.
i was not prepared for these feels
So...
Many...
Feels...
I NEED MOAR! GIVE ME MORE MOMLESTIA! I LOVE YOU! WRITE MOAR!
Prince of mischeivs indeed.
The feels, oh all the feels... I love how Solaris is characterized; you really captured how a child thinks, and that made the emotions ring all the truer. Now excuse me while I cry in a corner and deal with all these feels.
Please dir sir, more?
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We should form our little army of feels and Momlestia. We need. More. Momlestia. The feels. Are. Inescapable.
Now excuse me while I take out all my feels on my pillow.
-Some time later-
The feels were too much for the pillow.
Also, good job on the story.
4448208 A fantastic idea. Wanna start a group? Wait, no, I think there's already a Momlestia group. Huh.
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There is?
I better go join it.
4449768 You should.
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I forgot.. I'd already joined!
Whoops.
Going out with style. I respect that. :) Love the story.