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Mr. Popo comes to Equestria... Twilight's about to learn what the pecking order means.
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Thanks to Mr101, Berry Punch, TheExhaustedBrony, and Timps for Pre-Reading
Crossover with TFS Dragonball Z Abridged.
One-Shotober Story #2 10/2/2013
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Poor twilight. Least spike is the new kami
Overall I liked it! Though this fic MAY need a dark tag. Still not sure.
Now all we need is a "krillin gets owned" count and it'll be perfect.
Oh god... It's here...
Pecking order, not peaking order. Unless Mr Popo peeks in on her bath or something.
oh my god that was so funny loved it
The pecking order is in effect.
Don't run from Mr.Popo. He will find you.
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3290488 anything with mr.popo needs an dark tag
THAT!!! Was the best thing I've ever read! My sides still hurt from 10 minutes of laughing.
Lol. Just Lol all the way.
This....is....just.......
I luaghted my tits of at this!
oh he so needs to return and meet the elements of harmony!
Oh great she's crying, and the saiyans haven't showed up yet...
Nappa: Yeah We are!
LOVE IT
3290594 Guess Krillin never learned to....
Hahahahaha!
Oh, man, Popo is more dangerous than even Discord.
That reminds me: how about a chapter where Discord confronts Popo?
*Reads title* Huh?
*Sees cover image and:
OH SWEET CELESTIA, NO!!
... I am so f*cking high right now!
I bucking love TFS Popo.
3290612 Popo needs his own tag.
3292139 yes yes he dose
3292161 Indeed.
I can tell you where these ponies aren't.....safe
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First rule of Mr. Popo's training, do not talk about Mr. Popo's training!
3292418 HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Fist off. THANK YOU ALL FOR FOR ENJOYING THIS!!! means a lot to me.
Second 3292000 if i do do that...Krillin will get drag into equestra as well, and the owned counter will go up...lots.
and lastly. not a single comment on how Celestia was hiding under Twiligh'ts bed
Twilight Owned Count: 1
Oh my! Please do go on.
3292591 I'm sure there's not gonna have big numbers enough for the owned count.
3290612 Indeed it does.
MWHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Grammar needs help. Aside from that...
Wait, what's this? A request for grammar help? Alrighty! If you have a Google Docs account, just send me the link and I'll fix it! (Might take a day or two, though. I'm currently job-hunting, and tomorrow night is the League of Legends World Championship Finals.)
This is really poorly written, but it's just so funny thaat I don't care!
He walked right into that one.
Mr. Popo: Hey, guess what?
Twilight: W-what?
Mr. Popo: You're going back!
Twilight: B-but-
Mr. Popo: Pecking order...
*FLASH*
Celestia: M-Mr. Popo, w-where did you send them?
Mr. Popo: I'll tell where they're not... safe...
I'm favoriting this.
One more thing...
Should be it's.
Ya know what amuses me... i fav this last night and now it might make it to the feature box...
Liked and faved just because it's Popo!
Now we need one with Super Kami Guru.
Pfft! Mr. Polo never makes errors. Silly writer should know this.
Blueblood owned count: 1
Plus whatever Rarity did to him, but I doubt it counts since she isn't Mr. Popo.
DBZ Abridged Popo: the guy pisses me off, but at the same time, he cracks me up! Well, nice knowing you, girls! Have fun!
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0: You are an evil genius, you sick bastard (Krillin owned count: 9,000.001).
They all should have learned the pecking order.
MOAR!
making toast
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Bardock: Everything's gone dark..... Is it over?
Mr Popo: Hi
Baedock: ARRRRGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
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Can I just call you Guru for short?
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... No.
Hilarious. ANUTHAR!!!