The Redemption Saga
King Yemma has Cell given another chance at life. He must live in Equestria, protect it, befriend at least one inhabitant, and defeat an evil far stronger than anything the android has ever faced. Upon arrival, Celestia decides he must live in Ponyville with Twilight and Spike. Can the android's pride and temper handle the ponies of Ponyville? and with nowhere near his previous strength, can the android defeat this evil far superior than him in every way?
Set after the Majin Buu saga and before Dragon Quest. This series will be set around Cell as he is the main character. Don't complain if I focus on the Dragon Ball side of this story more then the My Little Pony side, this is a crossover with a Dragon Ball character as the main protagonist. Cell's design is based on the mangas form of Cell instead of the animes so don't complain that Cells Imperfect Form has three fingers instead of five. I do plan on continuing this after this, when this is done expect a sequel.
Excuse me, what? I couldn't hear you over all my YES!!!!!
>> I'll take that as, you like the story idea.
Well with a starting power of 10,000 I guess you could say it's at least OVER 9,000. Sorry had to get it out there.
1785271 Oh don't worry, I'll have my turn raping that joke
After some consideration I've noticed a few mistakes. With Lunas speech you used "thou" a few times intead of "thee" or "I"; and just a few small grammar things. Nothing too major. Overall, good job.
Da Fuq?
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1785491 Thank you, I want people to point out the mistakes so I can fix them. Glad you've enjoyed
1785856 I believe the correct term is "IMMA FIRIN' MAH KAMEHAMEHA" then again...it's really long
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1787228 No problem Dalek, by the by, have you EXTERMINATEd anything lately?
Oh man, I pity poor Cell. I wonder how the "perfect" android will deal with the random, fourth wall breaking abomination known as Pinkamena Diane Pie?
Hey Dalek, is your version of King Yemma like the one from the Team Four Star abridged series? If so, then he has already explained how his desk was made and how it is nigh indestructible. Cell shouldn't have been able to break it, BOOM a hole in your logic.
1787280 Dalek: AFFIRMATIVE!
I made reference that it was mahognany but that's not Yemma's Malchior Desk. Hmm I completely forgot all about his indestructible desk
1787463 I'd say it'd be the same as Vegeta having his dick stabbed with Trunk's sword but heated up to like OVER 9,000!!!! degrees
1788722 This fic kinda reminds me of the one whre General Grievous from Star Wars ends up in Equestria. If you haven't read it yet, I highly recommend that you read it cuz it is AWESOME! YYYEEEAAAHHH!!!
I think something that may help is to change the scene transition from a scene transition statement to 3 astericks
1788733 Really?...oh my god the poor bastard
I do not pity him as I did not like him that much, I'll check it out later.
1788745 Hmm I'll try that out, see how it looks. Thanks! For that I will not exterminate you
1788748 I wonder what it would be like if Freddy Krueger ended up in Equestria?
1788765 I've seen stories where he did...I'm sure they didn't end well...at all.
make him perfect.....
1789192 Oh not yet...trust me when I say Cell will be perfect but not anytime soon. You'll have to wait a while though
. Besides Perfect Cell is WAY too overused, I love his Imperfect form because it was actually scary and had wailing souls in his aura 
1789218 i guess good story by the way keep up the good work
1789258 Thank you, don't worry I plan to.
1788765 Ok Darth Void I am currently reading a General Grievous story and because it has Grievous in it, it rules!
. And is cell going to absorb anything, it shouldnt count against him if he doesnt absorb an innocent like he agreed.
1789263 I have a friend you should meet Dalek, you will know him by his name
1789427 Oh mwahahaha don't worry, many bad guys will meet their ends to Cell's stinger >:D All he has to do is ask them to surrender at least once. If they don't...Cell won't waste the bio extract >:)
1789480 Good. The absorbing of the evil characters shall give him chaos and crystal powers, maybe even changeling powers
1789496 Btw the way who is this friend you're talking about?
1789525 that would be me.
1789560 Hello...Doctor may we take this conversation onto one of our accounts?
1789588 Don't leave me in the cold!
1789588 I'm glad to see you remember me. Of course. Lead the way.
1789596 Well that depends...our conversation about Cell? Or the conversation about 1st Doctor? If so meet us at his profile
as a quote of Goku "Where is it 'muffin button pressed repeatedly' YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" HUZZA FOR THE MUFFIN BUTTON
but i really like this story and cant wait to read more when you update
1790153 King Kai: Oh my god...
Thanks for the fav, I glad you enjoyed it
1790533 no problem man as long as the chapter's keep a coming than ill be happy
now where are those muffins
1790540 Goku and Derpy: Muffins?! WHERE ARE THEY ?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Don't worry they will, I can't promise that they'll be out every week but I'll try to keep a regular schedule on which stories I'll work on
1790552 ohhahahahahah
that would be awesome man that would be awesome
oh and there over there *points to the mountain of muffins while charging at it full speed* XD
1790560 ...I have an idea
1790562 what what tell me TELL ME
i mean if you want
1790594 A one shot where Team Four Star Goku and Derpy meet...
1790615 FUCKING EPIC
i would loooooooooove to read that
HUZZAH FOR MUFFINS
its still funny that this all started with muffins im i right
also i can wait for more chapters because i have to re-read 'my better life' damn thats going to take forever
1790624 Oh yeah
1790632
indeed
1790638 Lol you have fun with that, I'm still in the planning stages with the next chapter and I gotta finish a chapter of my other story.
1790664 oh ok well have fun with that
and now i want to know what your other story your writing is
1790674 Oh MLP and Ice Age 1
1790735 yeah I saw that and I thought well I have a FUCK ton of reading I'll get around to it' sigh I have a lot of reading ahead of me but am I glad I'm with goku and derpy here on mount muffin
1790763 True, where they rule over the wild herds of muffin creatures as the Muffin Lords
1790777 yes would you like to join
