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Night Music


Here I am, back at it again, doing absolutely nothing.

Comments ( 32 )

Excellent, save a few grammar mistakes... Needs longer chapters or faster/more updates Keep it up though!

3259322 I'll try to make the chapters faster, but I have school. Weekdays i can make a chapter every 2 days, week ends i'll try to make 2 every week end, unless something comes up.

3261959 Hey man, if you have other things like school that you need to tend to, by all means. That's what you need to be successful. If you can't update I'm sure the others will understand. I assume because of your writing you are in high school. So far I've just started high school and it is a pain in the ass, take all the time you need! :twilightsmile:

If anyone, can tell me if I make grammar mistakes that would be most appreciated. And I hope veryone enjoys this chapter. :twilightsmile:

3282040 :rainbowderp:... I'm not going to say anything :twilightsheepish:

Boy, that escalated quickly.
I mean, that really got out of hand.(Hoof, if you wish):twilightsheepish:

Is this real life? Is this just fantasy? Caught in a landslide, no escape from reality.

Oh yeah, and if you want me to, I can proofread the story for you. Just an offer. :twilightsheepish:

3322679 Could you tell me how proofreading works?:rainbowhuh: Still pretty new to these things. But sure if you would help me become better at this, then I would be glad to take all the help i can get.

3323017 Well, I'll go over your work and correct any grammar or spelling errors. Not quite an editor, which is what some people do, which would be editing the story itself, and grammar. But since I like the story the way you write, I wouldn't be much use there. But I can certainly help you out with the grammar. :twilightsheepish:

3323177 Ok so how do I allow you to read the chapters early? do give you the password for them?

3323182 In my personal preference, I get people to email them to me.
Edit: Got school, message me, talk after school.

Wait, I forget. I proofread this? I don't have record of it.

3365412 Ya sorry :facehoof:, forgot I put that in there, kinda got tired of waiting :applejackunsure:

I shall remove it, again so very sorry :twilightsheepish:

3366348 Absolutely no problem, darling. :raritywink: (Kinda feels gay, saying that to another guy) But anyway, If you could perhaps email me the next chapter, I shall proofread it and ship it back. :ajsmug:

3366406 I kind of want to work on it a little more, since it only has two-hundred and forty words, if that is alright with you :fluttershysad:

3366421 It is your story, and you shall do as you please with it. I meant once you were satisfied with the chapter, then send it my way, I'll take a look at it. Maybe, just maybe, I'll grade it. :raritywink:

3366466 Ok, thank you very much for being so lenient with me. :pinkiesad2:

3366477 Absolutely no problem, always happy to help a friend!

Night Music here,To any of those who read this, I am going to change the rating to mature, I had thought about it for a little and I think I should, most of the stuff I might write are going to get:raritydespair: let's say... adult. So yeah, if you have any questions :trixieshiftright:, please comment them. And just to let some know, I might:trixieshiftleft: MIGHT being the key word here, write a clop chapter, but let's not get our hopes up, I am writing this at school and home, so school is a no-go for that kind of stuff:twilightblush:. If anyone would like me to put their O.Cc in the story please let me know, and please tell me what you would like to do in the story. Anyways :heart: you guys, and thank you for reading my story.

You didn't happen to read "Discord is Bored" by: TheLocoPony before writing this did you? cause that sounds alot like bob XD and the little voice in Night Music's head reminds me of sub

3480036 :rainbowhuh: never heard of it, might have to look at it. honestly, I kind of have a thing for inner conflict :twilightblush: but not that kind of thing :twilightoops: just it seems more appealing to me to know that the character has more in-depth feelings about something going on :twilightsheepish: but anyways, I might have to go and check that out, and see if I'm anywhere near copying them, because honestly, I don't want to get yelled at for copying someones work that I had no clue about :raritydespair: I have had that happen in the past.:ajsleepy:: so thank you for letting me know :pinkiesad2:

Oh i wouldn't have said you copied it :derpyderp1: rather that it was a nice reference to it and if you like inner conflict then i think you will love that story (series?) as it's very comical and all about discords insanity :rainbowlaugh: and has an interesting spin on the events that occurred in equestria.

Did Luna just quote Rainbow dash?! O_O

3800291 I need to see this :rainbowhuh: which chapter?

Huh, this is actually better than I initially thought it would be, sure it's a little on the short side for my tastes, but that's only because I don't like finishing stories or chapters quickly. Anyway, keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

Celestias horn glowing green? Shes been replaced by a changeling.

Where does the Human Tag come in at?

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