• Published 25th Nov 2013
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I think I love you... - FinnPony



Rarity gets to know with Rumble's big brother Thunderlane, and soon notices that one certain stallion keeps spinning in her thoughts, and decides that she has to do something about it.

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This calls for celebration!

The night was getting darker by the minute, and Thunderlane saw light coming from the windows underneath him. They looked like small dots under him, but soon he saw the light from the big windows of Carousel Boutique in the distance. He smiled and increased his speed. He and Rarity had some plans for that evening.

Thunderlane had his saddlebag with him, and in it was a expensive wine bottle he had bought for that special occasion. He and Rarity had been together for whole month, and they thought that it would need a celebration.

He landed to the doorsteps of Carousel Boutique, and opened the door. He didn't need to knock or ring the doorbell, because Rarity was alone in the house. She had sent Sweetie Belle to his place, to be with Rumble. They too had been together for more than a month now, so their older siblings decided that they should have some time for themselves too.

"I'm in the kitchen!" Rarity shouted to Thunderlane, when she heard the door opening. Soon Thunderlane emerged into the kitchen, holding the wine bottle in his mouth and five roses in his free hoof. Rarity smirked at him playfully, and took the bottle into her magical grasp. She uncorked it, and placed it on the table.

Thunderlane looked at the table in awe.
It was dressed beautifully. There was a red tablecloth, and in the middle of it was a white wax candle. Rarity had made tomato garlic soup for them. It was Thunderlane's favorite. She had also put some fresh French loaf into a breadbasket. In all its simplicity it was still amazingly good looking.
Thunderlane was eager to get to the table, but before that he leaned closer to Rarity' who was placing the roses into a vase. He kissed her on the cheek. Rarity giggled and leaned her head against Thunderlane's neck. They then turned their heads and sank into a deep kiss, that lasted for couple of seconds.

"Do you like them?" Thunderlane asked, while watching Rarity adjust the roses in the vase.
Rarity smiled, and said: "Like always."
They snickered a little and Thunderlane nuzzled Rarity's cheek, before sitting down to his chair. Rarity soon joined him, and placed the vase to the table too. She then dimmed the lights with her magic, and they were ready to begin.

"Happy one month anniversary," Rarity said gently, while staring into Thunderlane's eyes. She leaned into her hooves, and watched Thunderlane pour them some wine. He then took the glass into his hooves, and raised it towards Rarity. Rarity took her own into a magical grasp, and lifted the glass to meet Thunderlane's.

"Happy one month anniversary honey," Thunderlane said when their glasses clinked against each other. Rarity sighed happily, and said: "May nothing come between us.."

"Never," Thunderlane added, and they took a sip from their glasses.

They both started to eat slowly, chit chatting about their future.

"Have you ever wanted a foal?" Rarity asked casually, but Thunderlane almost choked to his soup. He coughed for a minute, hitting his chest with his hoof. Rarity looked worried, but soon Thunderlane managed to get his coughing under control, and he asked carefully: "Isn't it pretty early to be thinking about that?"
Rarity chuckled cutely, and took Thunderlane's hoof into her own.

"I didn't mean it like that silly. I just wanted to know," she said, looking at Thunderlane with her azure eyes. He thought for a second, and then answered: "I have never really thought about it."

"I bet you would be a excellent father," Rarity said, and rubbed Thunderlane's hoof with her own. Thunderlane chuckled, and asked: "What make's you think like that?"

"You have raised Rumble so well," Rarity said and took a sip from her wine. Thunderlane chuckled, and seemed to be in his thought. He then looked at Rarity, and said: "I know you would be a excellent mother."

Rarity let out a small happy squeal, and Thunderlane lifted his glass to his mouth with both hooves. Then before he could even lay down his glass, Rarity was kissing him again. She slipped her tongue into Thunderlane's mouth, and he welcomed it with his own. Rarity pushed so much forward, that Thunderlane's glass started to tilt. Soon it slipped from his hooves, and dropped to the table.
Rarity felt something plash on her coat, but didn't take her lips of from Thunderlane's, who looked at her with apologetic look in his eyes. Rarity instead just stared at him with love in her gaze.

"Sorry Rarity," Thunderlane said, when they broke the kiss and he saw the deep red patch on Rarity's white coat on her neck. She just giggled, and said: "Don't worry honey, I will take a shower before going to bed."
Suddenly a playful grin appeared on Thunderlane's face. She looked at him a bit suspiciously, and asked: "What are you thinking about?"

"I just thought that it would be a shame to waste such a expensive wine like that," Thunderlane said, still grinning and leaning closer to Rarity. She too leaned closer to him, and asked with sultry tone and half lidded eyes: "What do you have in mind?"

Thunderlane pressed his mouth against Rarity's neck, and started to suck it lightly. Rarity let out a small gasp, and closed her eyes. She then let out small moaning, and wrapped her hooves around his neck as Thunderlane sucked the sweet wine from her neck. She ran her hooves trough his ice blue mohawk, and moaned. Of course her coat didn't get any cleaner with that, but it sure felt great. It wasn't first time Thunderlane did that to her.

After Thunderlane was done, he moved his mouth to Rarity's and they locked their lips again for a passionate kiss. Thunderlane placed his hoof to the back of her head, and pulled her deeper into the kiss. Meanwhile Rarity took a hold of his other hoof.
After the kiss was done, Rarity was red around her cheeks, and so was Thunderlane.
Rarity's cheeks got even redder, when she pressed her snout against Thunderlane's and asked: "Are we ready to go to bed?"

"Isn't it a bit too early to go sleeping?" Thunderlane asked, and pecked her lips. Rarity blushed a bit more, and she stared seductively at Thunderlane's golden eyes. He stared back into her azure eyes, while petting her purple mane.

"I didn't say anything about sleeping," Rarity said, and now it was Thunderlane's time to blush scarlet red. His wings to unfurled quickly with a audible puff, and he stared at Rarity with wide eyes and open mouth.
Rarity just giggled, and pressed her lips against her lover's.

Author's Note:

Maybe a bit rushed but it's done. I will continue with them in some other story for sure.

Comments ( 15 )

3604602
Glad that I'm not the only one!

3687412
Oops. I'l fix that right away.

3837344
That's exactly the one I was describing! :yay:
I just added couple more details to it.

This is so good! :pinkiehappy:

Tämä on tosi hyvä! :pinkiehappy:

4439993
I know! Also thanks for the fav and watch! :pinkiehappy:

just need to know before i read this, did you deal with spike? or just completely forget about him like a lot of authors do?
or was he in the story before this?

4440298
Relationship between Spike and Rarity is explained in the other story that is mentioned in the description. I kinda forgot to mention that mane six is about 20-25 in my stories so Spike's a teenager now and has kinda grown out of his crush...

Dammit haven't even read this but I know how it ends because of shadowy love

Grammatical errors and all. Still a great fic

Not bad, I'm already starting to like this ship a lot. I really think Rarity and Thunderlane make a perfect couple. I wouldn't even ship Thunderlane with any other pony from the show, just saying.

The fic was a really fun read, it's already in my favs.:twilightsmile:

With a bit of a polish up with this story, it could be a really good Rarilane fic, it's rather well detailed and cute. It's a shame you been gone for so long though, I'd love to read more of this pairing and others you had planned.

"Have you ever wanted a foal?" Rarity asked casually, but Thunderlane almost choked to his soup. He coughed for a minute, hitting his chest with his hoof. Rarity looked worried, but soon Thunderlane managed to get his coughing under control, and he asked carefully: "Isn't it pretty early to be thinking about that?" Rarity chuckled cutely, and took Thunderlane's hoof into her own.

Yes seriously Rarity you're moving a little bit too fast 😅

Well those are very cute story I've always thought that would be a cute shipping specially what happened in the episode Wonderbolts academy but it's really really cute story and it's pretty good there was some spelling errors but it was not bad keep up the good work

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