i'm much happier with this ending. thank you. hey, is there going to be a sequel?!

boom! first comment! fuck yes, finally!

3472734 I knew there was something I forgot to mention, but yes there will be sequels of sorts. Mostly just stories in the same universe revolving around different characters, but if I come up with a good plot I might do another following Twilight.

3472740 sweet! fingers crossed!

3472740 i look forward to it

Eh I'm honestly a little disappointed. The whole ending feels really rushed, and Luna is just a deus ex machina in this ending. Honestly it was kind of boring, and that's a shame because I enjoyed it up to these final two chapters.

3478240 If every pork chop were perfect, we wouldn't have hot dogs.

That was a pretty good first story, a bit clunky but I still thought it was funny.

Not bad for the tyrant overlord.

I can smell a sequel/epilogue coming.

3486267 he he he I got the reference