y'know, i can't figure out if Twilight in this story is a girl or a mare maybe use less human terms and more of ponies' terms? oh yeah. you should check your spelling from time to time. found this and it made me crack up :
She was wearing a light-purple skirt that barley reached her knees and complemented her curves very well.
oh yeah... you might want to check on some of your spelling and grammar a bit a few are off and made me confused though some of them might have been fixed... hmmm...
3127594 Well if you see anything that you think needs fixing just point it out, I don't really have time right now to re-read the entire fic to find all the tiny mistakes I made.
3127606 Aight well do to think that i am better at spotting grammar mistakes than you... but anyways... cathc ya later got serious stuff gonna do now won't be online for a LONG WHILE well maybe not that long
heh just wondering...
y'know, i can't figure out if Twilight in this story is a girl or a mare
maybe use less human terms and more of ponies' terms?
oh yeah. you should check your spelling from time to time.
found this and it made me crack up :
3122829
Try checking the tags, it clearly says 'Human'
>> Mynameisamystery
Whoops, fixed the typo. Thanks for pointing that out.
Also, I thought I made it pretty clear that this is a humanverse...
3124012
yeah.. but humans can't cast magic?
>>Mynameisamystery
you've never heard of horned humanizations or winged humanizations?
3127183
eh... to be honest...
NAW
3127210
Well that's the case with this story.
3127338
Oh-kay.....
meh... srry for super late reply
too engrossed in another fimfiction
3127503
No worries man
3127506
meh...
this story seems legit enough
GO FOR IT!!!!
and you better write it well, or else.....
3127506
you betcha
and as i said...
oh yeah...
you might want to check on some of your spelling and grammar a bit
a few are off and made me confused
though some of them might have been fixed... hmmm...
3127594
Well if you see anything that you think needs fixing just point it out, I don't really have time right now to re-read the entire fic to find all the tiny mistakes I made.
3127606
Aight well do
to think that i am better at spotting grammar mistakes than you...
but anyways...
cathc ya later
got serious stuff gonna do now
won't be online for a LONG WHILE
well maybe not that long
3127183 I'm fairly sure that is a version of anthro, seeing as it's not human but not pony, just somewhere inbetween.