The reason your body has been transforming has been Trixie's dong all along!
Yeah.
2. Trixie being the villain was insanely out of the blue. You could have gone a few other routes other than suddenly having a villian and getting rid of them within a few paragraphs. Had Twilight learn a lesson instead of try to wrap it up quick. just sayin.
3285486 3285589 I know that it was a bit rushed, I wrote most of the chapter while I was very tired which was a pretty lame idea. I'll try to think of some ways to stretch out the ending a bit more.
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Yeah.
2. Trixie being the villain was insanely out of the blue. You could have gone a few other routes other than suddenly having a villian and getting rid of them within a few paragraphs. Had Twilight learn a lesson instead of try to wrap it up quick. just sayin.
that felt like it was extremely rushed
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I know that it was a bit rushed, I wrote most of the chapter while I was very tired which was a pretty lame idea. I'll try to think of some ways to stretch out the ending a bit more.
"It's mostly the second half that needs work" xD
3317449 actually, I'm considering changing the ending completely, it's not as though I dislike the current one, but I feel like I could do better
She's a little hoarse.