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I'm a brony. 'Nuff said.

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I'm sure everybody remembers how the CMC were harshly shunned by the whole town to such an extent that it took a heartfelt apology letter to earn their forgiveness. This story is gonna show would might have happened during the entire "apology letter" sequence, which not only has the CMC's friends and family members apologizing for how harsh their reactions were upon finding out that they were Gabby Gums, but also for their hypocrisy which was never fully addressed in the episode.

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Great story! :scootangel: This exactly what I felt this episode needed (though this one fic won't stop Ponyville Confidential being my least favourite episode :ajbemused:). Great work, anyway. Keep it up.:pinkiehappy:

You're right that this is a bit OOC but it's better then Rainbow Dash not being willing to forgive and coming across as a jerk again. :rainbowkiss:

The CMC are so lucky that they got a hug from Fluttershy. I wish we could be in their position. :yay:

Twilight was truely the only one who wasn't a hypocrite since she was against Gabby Gums from the start. Still doesn't excuse poutting up a forcefield though. :twilightsheepish:

That's just like Applejack to not admit to her problems right away. She seems to suffer the most from Aseop Amenisa. :ajsmug:

3087653 Me too though I love "Ponyville Confidential". :pinkiehappy:

3090392 That's why I think it shows great strength of character on Rainbow Dash's part.:rainbowkiss:

3090418 I'll be sure to change that. :twilightsheepish:

Plus, I agree that putting up that forcefield was inexcusable, eventhough I did have the CMC compliment it in this chapter.

3090429 I don't know about that, but I do know that she did admit it in the next and final chapter.

Actually, the force field thing puzzled me. I have to wonder if it wasn't just the Crusaders she was keeping out, what if she was keeping out all of Ponyville?

That article portrayed her as an aristocratic snob who was looking down on the commoner town she lives in. We all know that's not true, but what if Ponyville believed it? The citizens of Ponyville tend to have their collective IQs drop whenever the plot calls for it, so what if a bunch of ponies actually believed that article? This after Twilight has bent over backwards to win the towns respect, all that shredded in an instant.

Everyone was embarrassed, but Twilight got the most viciously scathing article

3228145 That's a very good question.

I'm speechless.

Again, I'm speechless.

nice Fic it would have been better if CMCs told them that Diamond tiara blackmailed them into doing it in the first place oh Well.

Humph. This story wouldn't have changed anything. Black Kyurem still despised the episode.

3310597 "Frankly, my dear, I don't give a d***." -Rhett Butler, Gone With The Wind

No offense, of course.

3310790 But of course. None taken. :twilightsmile:

3311064 Thank you.

By the way, have you checked out my edited version of "The Mysterious Mare Do Well"?:

http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x11kmii_the-mysterious-mare-do-well-experimental-edit_shortfilms

3310597 what did want to have Diamond tiara to be Punished ?

3311799 Black Kyurem wants that little rich bitch thrown in the gutter! :flutterrage:

3311466 It seems to be the original episode. What's different?

3312073 well there's nothing we can do about it unless we beg the author for a epilogue that has Diamond tiara getting her comeuppance. Which would have made the Episode Less painful .

3312095 Here are my edits:

-removed the ENTIRE scene at Sugarcube Corner with Rainbow Dash's friends bragging about their contributions to Mare-Do-Well; due to the hypocrisy on their part while trying to get their point across to Rainbow Dash, even if their actions may still be considered questionable, this was my number one reason to make this edit
-removed Granny Smith whacking Rainbow Dash with her purse to tone down the mean-spiritedness of the situation
-muted the "Lame" line after Rainbow Dash mows the lawn for the same reason mentioned above

Instead of separating characters into separate chapters, how about you combined into one.

THe cynical me would scream at them for being harsh on them...:flutterrage:

3312650 Sorry, it's my choice and my choice alone.

3313778 Uh, not yet. Isn't it just the same episode with the removed stuff you mentioned?

anyways this okay to read there are not many fics that explores ponyville confidential issues. I still wish there was a Fic witch Diamond tiara was exposed as the mastermind of Gabby gums that ink squirt she got wasn't punishment enough .

It was not the CMC I was mad at, I was mad at those hypocrites that bashed them, yelled at them, ignored them, or told them to go away.

I know gossip is wrong, but that is no excuse for them to treat them like that, I was reading another fic where they committed suicide because of those bullies.

3551537 Yeah, that was kinda the point of this fanfiction, to get the CMC's peers to realize how harsh they were in shunning them. Plus, at least Rarity had the decency to straight out confront her little sister rather than shunning her, even if it was before the CMC were shunned by the town. Great strength of character on Rarity's part, in my opinion.

3551537 really show mw the link please.

3573164 go to Google and type in "Gabby Gums: Suicidal Fillies fanfic"

3574012 thanks for the tip it was quick but sad read.

Great job, though I think spike needs to apologise to the CMC for yelling bitterly at them as well as forgiving them, And it would be heartwarming if Big Mac proves to the CMC that he really is sorry with applejack for shouting at them to go away rather than confronting them as much as rarity has done to sweetie belle and that he vows with applejack never to abandon either their little sister or her two friends ever again belle,:eeyup: in fact we need to persuade the hub network to make and apology video for the ponyville confidential by making the ponies apologise to the CMC.

The CMC should also prove that diamond tiara was blackmailing them all long so that all of ponyville including the CMC harshly shuns her even worse than how ponyville did so on the CMC and even longer than how long they did it to them,:eeyup: I also think that Granny Smith would so ground and scold Big Mac and AJ :ajsleepy: for abandoning their little sister and her friends:applecry: what if their parents really are dead and they have to care, love and look after each other.

You may agree completely about what I posted but that don't stop us from loving My little pony: Friendship is magic, right?:eeyup::heart:

You should make Spike, big mac:eeyup: and applejack:ajsleepy: ashamed of themselves for being to harsh on the CMC, but that don't stop us from love MLP: FIM right?

4377589 I'll get around to editing that part eventually.

Blackmail is a big felony, so if Diamond Tiara was doing that on this world, she'd be arrested.

Great job in the editing, can you make the entire town apologize to the CMC as well please?:heart:

4613110 getting demoted to the worst job at the foal free Press after getting dismissed by cheerliee is pretty much like going to jail

Imagine if the CMC did gossip on Princess Celestia, Luna, and Cadence in this episode. What would happen?

Princess Celestia would not be happy to hear about the force field unless twilight sparkle tells her the truth that she did apologize to the CMC about it:trollestia::twilightsmile: and scootaloo and apple bloom were right about that beautiful force field right after twilight said sorry:eeyup::heart:

Comment posted by rainingpies deleted Aug 11th, 2014

Great job in the editing, can you make the entire town apologize to the CMC as well please?:heart:

Comment posted by The Fiery Joker deleted Aug 22nd, 2014

4858727 Thank you. I don't think I will at the moment.

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