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Rarity Belle


A Dutch gentleman of leisure, living for pleasure, since mirth is my measure. Writing stories that are (mostly) unique and psychological of nature and visiting conventions whenever I can.

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This story is a sequel to Celestial Tortures Book I: Monster


With Discord imprisoned deep within the stone that Celestia cast upon him, a new evil seeks its way to take the throne. An evil that is all darkness has come to be. A thing only to be fueled by the very desires of the younger sister. Not only the land is going to be at stake when the true colors of princess Luna will be revealed, the love of her sister will be there too. Celestia is truly about to enter, her worst nightmare.

The past is -just as her one and only love- sealed in stone and always hunting her on the spot. Not even the strongest unicorn in the land would be able to help her out of the situation. For the first time since her birth, Celestia is going to stand alone for the fight. A fight that is much, much closer to her heart then she would have liked.

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Second installment of my trilogy of villains and possibly one of my favorite overall. I spoke about 6 months of making, did it in 5. The cover image was found somewhere online a long time ago so I have not even a single clue who possibly could have made it. All credit still goes to the original artist!

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 21 )

3035248 Thanks dear, it's good to be back with a 'normal' story for once.

I got a question to ask.When this trilogy is done are you gonna do one of the future. Like it resolves all that has happened now or the past I hope you get what I mean?

3035741 It is an interesting question that you ask there for certain and one I haven't truly thought about. For this trilogy (Monster, Nightmares and Changes), as literally my headcanon for what happened before the show started. The first one consisting of the relation between Celestia and Discord as the second follows Nightmare Moon/Luna and Celestia. The third one, might be obvious, but too rich to spoil.

Maybe, you know, I have part of the epilogue for Changes done and that, that is really good sequel material. And I think that what you mean is, if I am going to make a story in which everything that happened here, packs out in some form or way into one majestic, regal and just epic clash between everything, for everything. (Maybe not that big, but you get the idea.)

Was this making any sense to you? Cause, to me it did not.

3035847 Good, is the insanity on my mind good for something. And, you know what, I still have some projects in the make and those will eventually be done. I think I am going to do it.

(Take note that the word 'think' in my dictionary is something used to make promises which may not always come true. Time shall tell.)

3035861 It's cool if you don't. I just thought you might do something like that or give you the idea of it. I don't like to force people into things cause I don't want it to happen to me.

3036130 Hmhmhm, I understand that dear. It is a project that may or may not see the light of day eventually. Maybe a project to put on hold for a long time. We shall see what the course of events is going to be.

I like where you are going with this Miss Belle. *nods* I am eager for new chapters

3039297 I'm glad that you enjoyed it so far dear. Though if I may ask, do you have a favorite part in the chapter? Or did you see any errors so soon?

3039699 I enjoyed teh entire chapter. Very well written, in my opinion. *nods* Also, I have seen in the writing that it seems you have placed this one at least oen thousand years before the events of MLP:FIM. *smiles* It is good to see one's view on what happened that point in time

3039831 (Excuse me the late reply, been rather busy.)

You are correct, this story does (much like the whole series) takes place before the events of MLP: FiM. And you can say this is kinda like my headcanon of what happened all that time ago.

nevertheless, I am glad that you enjoyed it and keep an eye out for upcoming chapters.

3070831 *nods* Will do Miss Belle. *nods, sits and waits for chapters*

I like where this is going. Job well done Miss Belle, I am looking forward for new chapters.



Don't end a chapter in a cliffhanger or else you will suffer ._.

3101710 I thank you kindly my dear.

And between you and me, I love to end chapters on a cliff hanger. But don't worry, I hope to have the next chapter up somewhere next week.

3102363 Thank you for the information Miss Belle.



Some chapters I'll expect a cliffhanger... Amusing, I think I'll keep this information.

3102515 You are welcome darling.

Love the new chapter!

3125632 I knew that the long wait would pay off for me! Now, the rest of the story.

And so the shit hits the fan.:twilightoops: Wonderful chapter love.:pinkiesmile:

3284030 I thank you kindly my dear. And indeed, shit hits the fans rather well. But there is more to come, over time.

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