• Published 14th Aug 2013
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Night time for Spike - Optimal



Spike, having entered his teen years, is growing restless being cooped up in the library all day. So when Twilight goes to bed, Spike sneaks out for some fun...

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Comments ( 22 )

Damn... I certainly wouldn't mind Octavia and Vinyl trying to... 'tame' me. It'd be fun!

Needs more sex.

"Alright you noisy bitch, time to get oiled up."

-Spike

Please dont make this about some dominatrix bitches or make spike bend them under his will :D

3982323 Well there will be some bondage elements, I don't really wanna just write vanilla sex for every chapter. Without revealing too much though, Vinyl and Octavia might find subjugating a dragon blood a little harder than they imagined.

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No one says about vanilla, but dont go too deep into dominatrix, pls imho

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Damn right, Both of them want to be the dominant in their relationships, and even though both of them are boasting and bragging about actually getting to be with a dragon-born and actually submit to their dominance, Tavi and Vinyl are gonna get a rude (well, not that rude :raritywink:) awakening....

......it's not nice to try to contain or control a dragon. Eventually the dragon is gonna get what he wants....and tonight, whether Spike's gonna own to it or not, he's gonna make them submit. Oh, he's gonna show them both who's the real dominatrix in the bedroom. muahahaha:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Spike is a Dragon, Octavia is going to have her hands full trying to bend him to her will, it would be awesome if Spike managed to pull it around and make her bend to his will :moustache:

Just hurry up with the update dude. I want to see if these can tame Spike or end up ravaged by the dragon.

Dude I am just happy to see a update. But you better not have the dragon break... DRAGONS DON'T BREAK, WE DO THE BREAKING!!!! :moustache: lol. I want Spike to thow Oct against the glass window that overlooks the club and make her break as Vin watch in surprise lol.:trixieshiftright:. Don't forget to throw in alittle liquor play with them two (make them wet... get it lol):pinkiehappy:

I can't help but wonder if the CMC will get suspicious upon finding Spike isn't in the library...

As for the Viewtiful Spike thing...could be interesting

Ok so he is going to give it to vinyl scratch and octavia, but THEN is he gonna throw the D the CMC's way. I mean you already set it up so they can say "we went to the library and you weren't there" and spike would be like "I was having a night on the town plz don't tell twilight"
And so they would say "ok but only if we fuck" and scoots would be like " ill go first just to show I ant no chicken and/or a lesbian" and spike would say "bitch plz it's gonna be a 4 some" and then there is like 4 or 5 thousand words in the next chapter just talking abot there sweet sweet ass's (i hope there's going to be so much descriptions on there body's there sexy sexy body's)

Dude, I hope you know just how much this series does for me. Being very attached to Spike, this has gotta be one of the best clopfics I've had the pleasure of enjoying! Good on ya! And keep it rollin'!

update please I like this store I gave you 8 out of 10

next chapter?

Don't read humanized stories much, unless, Spike's the star and there's sex involved, but this is awesome!
And yes! Spike and Sexy Sweetiebelle would be great to see! Then the she can invite the rest of the Crusaders, since I'm sure they will be asking were he was last night.:unsuresweetie:

Great story! Keep it up!:moustache:

Spike and Sweetiebelle would be an awesome story

Spike and the flower Trio would be good for the next three chapter's.

Spike should do the Mayor of Ponyville!!!

Well maybe not just Sweetie bell but the rest of the CM can join in.

Spike is about 11/14 years old kindy of idk but still good story

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