Who are you?
"Doctor, you need to control your temper." said Celestia as she sat next to the Doctor.
"BUT I'M A STALLION!" whined the Doctor as she stomped around the room.
"What, you're the Doctor? I thought the Doctor was a stallion?" said Derpy as she looked at the Doctor.
"But....but.....forget it." stated the Doctor as she sat down next to Celestia.
"Actually, it's good for you coming back. There has been some strange things happening around here." Celestia said as she went to a chest," I found this outside in the garden a few days ago."
As the Doctor turned around, she saw what shouldn't be here, "That's...part of a Dalek."
"What is a Darlek?" asked Celestia as the Doctor messed with the Darlek part.
"How did they get past the riff and into here?" bewildered the Doctor as she pulled out her sonic screwdriver.
"Umm, Doctor. Didn't you say that the master had bonde hair?" asked Derpy as she stared out the window.
"Last time I say him, yes." said the Doctor as she set the Dalek eye piece down, "Why do you ask?"
"He's outside with metal boxes with those eyes." pointed Derpy as the Doctor got to the window.
"Doctor, you ignored my question." Said Celestia as she walked to her.
"And I won't tell you, and now I run. Derpy, lets go!" said the Doctor as she ran to the door.
"But Doctor," said Derpy. But she was interrupted by a blast opened a hole into the throne room. The room was covered in smoke and dust as a laughter filled the room.
"Well, if it isn't the Doctor." laughed the blonde as the dust and smoke settled. "And now I can....where is he?"
"Where is whom?" asked Celestia as she walked to him.
"How dare you walk to the Master like one of your subjects!" announced the Master as he walked around. The turned to the Dalek in a look of discuss, "I thought you said he was in here."
"He is. He's right there" said a red Darlek as it pointed to the Doctor.
"That's the Doctor? Looks like a girl who has an obsession to him." mocked the Master as he walked away.
"Still blonde and stupid. How you were able to leave Galafrey still bewilders me." said the Doctor as she walked to him.
"How did you know that name?" asked the Master as he turned and stared at her eyes.
"How could I forget it. It was the planet that died by me." said the Doctor as she walked to him.
"So you are the Doctor. The tell me what your name is." mocked the Master as he walked around her. He brushed his tail against her as he walked around her, "You have changed Doctor. But this isn't your first change."
"What do you want Master?" snapped the Doctor as she turned her head to the Master.
"The way that was said, oh, chilling yet refreshing. But might as well tell you so you don't ruin the moment. I'm here to eliminate you and who better than one of the enemies of a timelord than a Dalek."
"Kill the Doctor?" said Derpy as she sat at the though of the Doctor dying.
"Not a bad Idea, but that is near to impossible...well, WAS." said the Master as he walked to the Daleks.
"What do you mean?" asked Celestia as she walked in front of the Doctor.
"Well, it means simply this: I can kill the Doctor." laughed the Master as he pointed to the Doctor, "Now Daleks, Kill the Doctor."
"We take no orders from a timelord." said a blue Dalek as it turned to him.
"This is an example of what will happen if you refuse." said the master as he pointed his sonic screwdriver at the Dalek."
The Dalek shook as the Master buzzed his sonic at it. The Dalek was spinning around, specking gibberish. Then it stopped in place and it's eye went out. "Please. Help Doctor." muttered the Dalek as it blew up.
"Why did you do that?!" yelled Celestia in rage as she ran to the Master.
"Celestia, NO!" yelled the Doctor as she tried to stop her.
"I wouldn't waste my breath on this" the Master was tossing the air around like he was looking through a filing bend, "On this Equus ferus caballus."
"A what now?" asked Derpy as she stood bewildered by that word.
"I am a princess, not a horse!" shouted Celestia in the royal Canterlot voice.
"I never thought she actually used that." said the Doctor as she walked to the throne room doors.
"Daleks, tulit eam!" yelled the Master as he pointed to the Doctor and Derpy.
"RUN!" yelled the doctor as she ran out the doors with Derpy.
"What did he say?" asked Derpy as she was pulled along by the Doctor.
"He said get her, and by her, he means me."
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Not bad so far, but I think you could have just written those as a single chapter.
i like the story.. i just hope the doccor becoming a girl really is the main conflict of the story
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I'd go so far as to say that if you combined both chapters, it would be half of a short chapter. Don't just blitz through the story, friend.
3006623 I for one prefer the opposite approach. Have the gender change be a big part of the story, but not have it be the driving force.
3006794 it would make for an interesting story though
How do you all like the story so far? I'm getting a lot of what the center point of the story should be. He being a girl is a conflict, but not the center point of the story.
3007286 It shows promise, but I think you could put some effort into having it flow better.
I see, I need to connect bits and pieces together better. On it!
Thinking about it, wouldn't the Doctor remain a mare until at least her next regeneration?
3011679 I sense a book series about to rise from this.
I like what I can see of your post-regen Doc. Do you have a full body pic of her done up?
3011903 A profile pic, that's it...and a few expressions. I made a tumblr for him...her...it'll take a while for me to get use to his regeneration into a girl.
3012887 Can you send me a link to it?
3014145 Will as soon as I can find the right sketch book.
3016297 I was more asking about a link to the tumblr you mentioned.
3016579 On my profile for here. There is a link to it there. I'll be making a comic start for it soon.
Good so far. Love your profile pic.
3100032 Thank you.
I love to here feedback from the readers.
3103019 and i love to give it
Poor Doctor, just can't catch a break.
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this turning into a good story I await your next chapter when you write it