Snowdrop heard the twinkling in the stars in the dead of night. A sound which none other could hope to comprehend and, in her saddest moment, a single tear froze on her cheek. Down in swirled with the snow until it clicked into her hoof... And she heard it. The faint twinkle of a star.
Snowdrop's time came and went like every other pony in Equestria, but she left behind a gift of unsurpassed beauty: the glorious and intricate snowflake. But she left behind something else as well, the ever gentle and timid Snow Sparkle. Sparkle can't hear the twinkling of the snow or the stars, but she can see more than anypony. She can see how they sparkle.
This is a sequel to SillyFillyStudio's amazing video, Snowdrop
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wasn't expecting a rewrite, but if it adds to the story you already had, then that is a good thing.
I like this one page almost as much as the original "Snow drop"
I love it!!
Hiatus? Seriously?
You do know, it is too good to put into hiatus?
Huh. Nice
here's a like and fav from me. Keep it up
Nice chapter.
But the chapter immediately after a prologue is chapter one. It should be:
Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2...
Etc., etc., etc.
4171269 Yeah, I know. But when I posted the chapter, I forgot to give it a name and it posted as chapter 2. I never bothered to fix it
4172573 You should fix it then.
I NEED MORE, I NEED MORE!
...um...hehe
4392677 My computer crashed and all the chapters of Snow Sparkle were on it. I'm getting it fixed, please be patient. I'll get the next one out as soon as possible
4393829 I don't mind.
I am quite good at waiting.
do you know why it decided to crash?
4397271 Because it's old as Tartarus, probably. The times I dropped it didn't help, either
Awwww... adorable and heartwarming. I hope the next update comes quicker.
Poor Snow. Why was she kept there? Why was she imprisoned there, kept away from Equestria and sunshine and happiness and a view of that which she was meant to recreate? Seems rather cruel, don't ya think?
YAYY!! GO SNOW SPARKLE!!!
That ending nearly brought me to tears.
Beautiful ending.
4584946 Yeah, It's really beautiful...
Why does this story have 5 dislike... How ?!
A really good work... Direction favorites stories
... Celestia, bucking, damn it all,that was really good and I tried not to cry... but it was so Celestia damn SAD...
I love this
oh a reincarnation story fascinating.
The part that gets me was how for some reason they believed it was okay to leave a filly without hearing up on a mountain all by herself. I don't understand that, it feels like they were imprisoning her so she could find her "Destiny" rather than it being something that Snow Sparkle chose. I don't like that. While this is all Snow Sparkle has ever known, it doesn't strike me as morally acceptable to leave a child up there all alone. I don't think that Twilight or the other Princesses made a good decision here, not at all. The ending was beautiful, but, I still can't help but feel it was just cruel how Snow Sparkle was made to be isolated, likely against her will.
The cottage and the cabin is cozy sounding, though, I can understand the setting if this was some sort of seasonal thing to where Twilight and Snow Sparkle would come to the cabin and spend a few nights by themselves, but just sending a filly up on the mountain to fend for herself, without her loving parents, or her family? Cruel. Snowdrop wasn't isolated from her family for some reason to "Find her Destiny", which doesn't make any sense.
I don't dislike this story though. It was relaxing to read, but the implication felt like Snow Sparkle was imprisoned on the mountain all alone until she would "discover" herself.