Very sweet story ^w^ I quite enjoyed it. I would also love to know how the others take the news, but I can live without it because this was just a great story and even without that it feels nicely wrapped up otherwise. :3
459269 Thanks, and yes, there will be no Sequel. MAYBE an Epilogue... maybe, I'm kinda leaning towards the no on the aright now, but a litter later on we might see.
459033 Romance Reports is good, but it doesn't have Spike x Twilight. (aka best ship / my OTP) And the quality of your writing is amazing!
459369 I guess StreakTheFox will have to answer that, but Spike isn't a child in the present either. Even though they call him a baby dragon on one or two occasions, his is clearly not a baby in the human sense of the word. He acts more like a early - mid teenager, and sometimes seems more mentally mature than even the mane6, who are clearly several years older.
Based on Twilight's flashback in Cutie Mark Chronicles, I'd say she was 5-6 when she hatched him, so that would make her 5-6 years older than him. It can be assumed (and I believe was said by Lauren Faust) that the mane6 are young adults, presumably in their late teens or early 20s. If we assume that Twilight is around 20 (and she may even be older - especially in season 2, since at least a year has passed since they moved to Ponyville), then that would make Spike at least 14-15. (aka raging hormonal teenager... which would explain his obsession with Rarity I guess)
You completed it..... I can die now.... *Sinks back and melts into couch* Gurgle. OH WAIT I SHOULD PROBLY ACTUALLY READ THAT LAST CHAPTER HUH? *Dives in*
-AFTER READING- That... was so damn sweet. *sniff* I agree, no sequel. BUT an epilogue would DEFINITELY not go amiss. Bravo either way tho. Excellent fic, and I can say you managed to pull off what you set out to do splendidly.
......such a lovely ending, to a lovely and gripping tale. I loved it that this was the first thing I did after waking up - which I did, about 13 minutes ago. And I loved this story to its potential. You nearly caused me to shed a tear. Can't wait for your next tale. :)
To be honest, I didn't enjoy this ending so much. I mean I love happy ends, but this one just felt a bit rushed. She woke up in the hospital, and anything will be fine in a few weeks. That feels a bit hollow. I would have loved to see the reactions of her friends, or how Celestia appeared to rescue her, maybe a little aftermath. Forget about the sex, would've been nice but that story doesn't need it. But, how about Spike taking care of her until she recovered, or they tell their friends that they're a couple now, maybe a scene where they start reading a new book, or finishing the old one.
I don't know I'm just not satisfied with this, even thought it was good.
Normally I'd say rewriting the whole chapter to make it a bit slower and bigger would be the best, but there are many other readers here who like it like it is. Also, rewriting can be a pain in the ass, so I'd say add an epilogue if you still have the necessary content to fill it with.
Don't forget. I love that story, but I personally thought that the last chapter was a bit weak and this story deserves a bit more than a quick happy end.
Just fantastic! If I might be able to speak my own voice, that I, too, would like to see an epilogue with what happened after Twi got out the Hospital or something. Maybe even a side series! (Hears a gun cocking behind his head) Okay, maybe not.
Molestia, well no, didn't like it that much and stopped after chapter 2. Mindless rape is just something that I don't enjoy. However, I liked Ponyscales and Apple Surprise a lot.
I would LOVE an epilogue to this. I feel the story does well to have this be the final normal chapter, but an epilogue showing those few unanswered questions already mentioned would be great. Thanks for writing this awesome story!
Oh, incidentally I wanted to point out that there's a couple instances where I don't think the character would use the exact wording you gave them. For instance, the doctor saying anyways instead of anyway seems a bit off compared to the rest of his dialogue. There was a similar instance in the last chapter with something Twilight said. Anyway, just try and be mindful of it.
Such a sweet ending, but now I gotta wonder how their friends will take the news? I can see humorous reactions but probably still sweet.
Great Story I hope to read more of your work.
No, no sequel. This was a great ending and I've thouroughly enjoyed this ride you've taken us on. Kudos on your great Spilight story.
This is your best story. :3
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Very sweet story ^w^ I quite enjoyed it. I would also love to know how the others take the news, but I can live without it because this was just a great story and even without that it feels nicely wrapped up otherwise. :3
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Thanks, and yes, there will be no Sequel. MAYBE an Epilogue... maybe, I'm kinda leaning towards the no on the aright now, but a litter later on we might see.
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uh watts? is this story in the future or something?
awesome story!
This is awesome.
So much friggen D'aww! I swear, you're trying to break my ability to sense cute
Excellent story, as always
459033
Romance Reports is good, but it doesn't have Spike x Twilight. (aka best ship / my OTP)
And the quality of your writing is amazing!
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I guess StreakTheFox will have to answer that, but Spike isn't a child in the present either.
Even though they call him a baby dragon on one or two occasions, his is clearly not a baby in the human sense of the word.
He acts more like a early - mid teenager, and sometimes seems more mentally mature than even the mane6, who are clearly several years older.
Based on Twilight's flashback in Cutie Mark Chronicles, I'd say she was 5-6 when she hatched him, so that would make her 5-6 years older than him. It can be assumed (and I believe was said by Lauren Faust) that the mane6 are young adults, presumably in their late teens or early 20s. If we assume that Twilight is around 20 (and she may even be older - especially in season 2, since at least a year has passed since they moved to Ponyville), then that would make Spike at least 14-15. (aka raging hormonal teenager... which would explain his obsession with Rarity I guess)
You completed it..... I can die now....
*Sinks back and melts into couch* Gurgle.
OH WAIT I SHOULD PROBLY ACTUALLY READ THAT LAST CHAPTER HUH?
*Dives in*
-AFTER READING-
That... was so damn sweet. *sniff*
I agree, no sequel. BUT an epilogue would DEFINITELY not go amiss.
Bravo either way tho. Excellent fic, and I can say you managed to pull off what you set out to do splendidly.
While I still feel chapter 6 could do with a rewrite (feels rushed all across) the story as is is okay, definitely an enjoyable read.
......such a lovely ending, to a lovely and gripping tale.
I loved it that this was the first thing I did after waking up - which I did, about 13 minutes ago. And I loved this story to its potential.
You nearly caused me to shed a tear.
Can't wait for your next tale. :)
bravo! a most magnificent fic!
can we have an epilogue please?
So cheesy... yet so entertaining...
GAAAHHHH WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME??
To be honest, I didn't enjoy this ending so much. I mean I love happy ends, but this one just felt a bit rushed. She woke up in the hospital, and anything will be fine in a few weeks. That feels a bit hollow. I would have loved to see the reactions of her friends, or how Celestia appeared to rescue her, maybe a little aftermath. Forget about the sex, would've been nice but that story doesn't need it. But, how about Spike taking care of her until she recovered, or they tell their friends that they're a couple now, maybe a scene where they start reading a new book, or finishing the old one.
I don't know I'm just not satisfied with this, even thought it was good.
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I can see where you're coming from, and I share some of the same feelings about the last chapter.
Should I do an epilogue depicting those things or add on to chapter 8?
Still leaning towards an epilogue, personally.
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Normally I'd say rewriting the whole chapter to make it a bit slower and bigger would be the best, but there are many other readers here who like it like it is. Also, rewriting can be a pain in the ass, so I'd say add an epilogue if you still have the necessary content to fill it with.
Don't forget. I love that story, but I personally thought that the last chapter was a bit weak and this story deserves a bit more than a quick happy end.
Just fantastic! If I might be able to speak my own voice, that I, too, would like to see an epilogue with what happened after Twi got out the Hospital or something.
Maybe even a side series! (Hears a gun cocking behind his head) Okay, maybe not.
461288
idk if you've read my other stories, but im quite notorious for not making endings that great...
ever read princess molestia and its ending?
464791
Molestia, well no, didn't like it that much and stopped after chapter 2. Mindless rape is just something that I don't enjoy. However, I liked Ponyscales and Apple Surprise a lot.
465383
"Mindless rape is something that I don't enjoy"
"I liked ponyscales and Apple Surprise A lot"
ummm...
apple surprise is about rape o-o with no real meaning to it
465463
You're absolutely right. I mixed that up.
Brilliant!
I suppose an epilogue would be nice though. (the others' reactions might be interesting)
heh i see what you did there, the dragon in twilight dirty dirty streak, dirty dirty
I would LOVE an epilogue to this. I feel the story does well to have this be the final normal chapter, but an epilogue showing those few unanswered questions already mentioned would be great. Thanks for writing this awesome story!
Oh, incidentally I wanted to point out that there's a couple instances where I don't think the character would use the exact wording you gave them. For instance, the doctor saying anyways instead of anyway seems a bit off compared to the rest of his dialogue. There was a similar instance in the last chapter with something Twilight said. Anyway, just try and be mindful of it.
The first few chapters are good ...but then it just kinda... falls flat.
also needs more clop.
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I'm in the same stage as Spike, or atleast if I was a 12 year-old Spike.
(That went awkward.)
*crying* I LOVE IT!!! I demand a squeal!!!javascript:smiliejavascript:smilie('');
I hit the favorite button on allot of stories to keep track of them, but this...I think is is truly a favorite.
Awesome as always Streak.
I'm Super Soni-Chaos Kinesis Gaia, and I have to say, this has been one HELL of a ride!
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Twilight says "Who's my number one assistant...?"
http://ponibooru.413chan.net/post/view/67515
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the dragon "IN" twilight. if you know what i mean.....
717967 My thoughts exactly
Title drop Motherf@ckers!
3364479 yeah b!†¢he$
this really isnt a clop fic!
They ever done it in a hospital bed.
Oh she came for him alright.