Hah. And this is why it's often worth it to stay up late. Man, this is turning into quite the interesting story. I can't wait to see where it leads... Unfortunately, I would imagine that waiting is exactly what I shall be doing for quite a while. Hope you're having fun at home, Streak.
Twilight's part was a bit unrealistic. I am a girl, and I masturbate quite a bit. It isn't that hard to stay quiet, seriously. And I'm pretty sure most girls don't "spray" when they orgasm, unless it's pee. Also, if you describe Twilight as a virgin, then there's no way her whole tail would fit in her vagina without hurting and it would take forever to get it in anyway (have you seen the size of that thing?).
100352 Maybe not most girls, but from what I've heard there are actually girls who are capable of "squirting" when they cum, and claim that it isn't pee. Personally, I prefer straight out peeing though.
As for the tail, I was always under the impression that the ponies' tails were made entirely out of hair, except for the base. If so, it should be able to compress to a fraction of its full size. Normally, I imagine getting it in would be a tedious process, but Twilight Sparkle IS the most powerful unicorn in Equestria... or at least Ponyville. She would probably have some magic trick up her sleeves to accomplish it more easily.
Too bad Twilight came so quickly. I guess she should have... *le sunglasses* Held her horses. YYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
This must be greatest clopfic that I have ever read! I jsut read it, and I'd really like to see what happens next. Sad that it is on hiatus, but eh, after all, I can wait!
Spike: What? Me: What country you from? Spike: What? Me: WHAT AINT NO COUNTRY I EVER HEARD OF! THEY SPEAK ENGLISH IN WHAT?! Spike: What? Me: ENGLISH MOTHERF***ER DO YOU SPEAK IT?!?! Spike: YES! Me: SO YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT IM SAYIN TO YOU?! Spike: YES! Me: WELL WHAT IM SAYING, IS THAT THERE ARE KNOWN KNOWN'S AND THERE ARE KNOWN UNKNOWN'S!!!! BUT THERE ARE ALSO UNKNOWN UNKNOWN'S, THINGS WE DONT KNOW WE DONT KNOW!!!!! Spike: What? Me: Say what again..... SAY WHAT AGAIN!!!! I DARE YOU I DOUBLE DARE YOU MOTHERF***ER SAY WHAT ONE MORE GOD DAMN TIME!!!!! Spike:........ Me: *shoots wall next to him* IM SORRY DID I BREAK YOUR CONCENTRATION?!?!?!
I must ask, is there a sex scene in the twilight books? I haven't read them and don't have rock solid determination on reading em anytime soon.
So this is a clop fic about a clop fic that is based on a romantic, sexual, paranormal story? Clopception.
I say dear sir/ma'am, if a twilight fan that is also a brony reads this story and isn't grossed out by the clop, much rejoicing would be had in both fandoms.
I PULLED A FUCKING SPIT-TAKE READING THIS HO SHIT LULZ
IT UPDATED THANK YOU BASED STREAK
Hah. And this is why it's often worth it to stay up late. Man, this is turning into quite the interesting story. I can't wait to see where it leads... Unfortunately, I would imagine that waiting is exactly what I shall be doing for quite a while. Hope you're having fun at home, Streak.
I love this story~ Even when you write it late and make a bunch of mistakes.
I can't wait to see the mutual romance continue to grow. :3
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Thank you ever so much for helping me fix all the major errors in the IRC chat.
I really appreciate it
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Welcome~!
Absolutely brilliant!
I can't believe you managed to write that so quickly!
When's the next chapter going to be out?
Oh that's such a sweet story
That tail thing was an interesting idea. Normally not possible, well... magic
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Next chapter needed.
Well, she was partially right, noPONY saw her do that.
I couldn't stop laughing.
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Well said, lol
Twilight's part was a bit unrealistic. I am a girl, and I masturbate quite a bit. It isn't that hard to stay quiet, seriously. And I'm pretty sure most girls don't "spray" when they orgasm, unless it's pee. Also, if you describe Twilight as a virgin, then there's no way her whole tail would fit in her vagina without hurting and it would take forever to get it in anyway (have you seen the size of that thing?).
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Maybe not most girls, but from what I've heard there are actually girls who are capable of "squirting" when they cum, and claim that it isn't pee.
Personally, I prefer straight out peeing though.
As for the tail, I was always under the impression that the ponies' tails were made entirely out of hair, except for the base.
If so, it should be able to compress to a fraction of its full size.
Normally, I imagine getting it in would be a tedious process, but Twilight Sparkle IS the most powerful unicorn in Equestria... or at least Ponyville.
She would probably have some magic trick up her sleeves to accomplish it more easily.
dovahkiin dovahkiiiiin
ey man i love u
Shit just got real.
REALLY glad you updated this.
P.S. if you read this while speaking like William Shatner you will die laughing.
this is an awesome story!
No more?
I'm severely pleased with this writing. Bookmark content for sure.
*Reads the part with the tongue play on pony*
NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Relevant Username.
Owlicious will get doozy after a time :D
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Clopping to a clopfic in a clopfic, eh?
Lol
Now Rarity is... FOREVER ALONE.
I came here, was awed by the sheer awesomeness of the writing, then came again.
MOAR.
Um...if you don't mind...
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"Twilight's part was a bit unrealistic. I am a girl, and I masturbate quite a bit. It isn't that hard to stay quiet, seriously."
Unpossible! People scream randomly and gush fluids in porn, so it must be true.
glad that i found this little gem of a story ...tracking now
cant w8 for the next one to come out
Love this story always thought star crossed lovers was a great plot and now makes me squee with joy. kind of a shame you put it on hiatus though
This is sick and disgusting............ tracking
This makes me feel dirty... but why do I love it so much?!
oh noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!1 spiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiike!!!!!!! me gusta
"give it to me rubin!" i laughed so hard!
oh noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!1 spiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiike!!!!!!! me gusta
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Let's see. On Hiatus. Hmmmmmmm. Oh yes.
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Take it off hiatus. NOW.
Too bad Twilight came so quickly. I guess she should have...
*le sunglasses*
Held her horses.
YYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
Let's see...
Hiatus???
<b>NO MO' HIATUS.</b>
The sex scene in the book made me laugh sooo much. And then the ends of the chapter somehow manages to be heartwarming anyway. Awww...
Tracking.
By Celestia, my body is ready for more!
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Dude update this at once, god damnit!
This must be greatest clopfic that I have ever read!
I jsut read it, and I'd really like to see what happens next.
Sad that it is on hiatus, but eh, after all, I can wait!
Spike: What?
Me: What country you from?
Spike: What?
Me: WHAT AINT NO COUNTRY I EVER HEARD OF! THEY SPEAK ENGLISH IN WHAT?!
Spike: What?
Me: ENGLISH MOTHERF***ER DO YOU SPEAK IT?!?!
Spike: YES!
Me: SO YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT IM SAYIN TO YOU?!
Spike: YES!
Me: WELL WHAT IM SAYING, IS THAT THERE ARE KNOWN KNOWN'S AND THERE ARE KNOWN UNKNOWN'S!!!! BUT THERE ARE ALSO UNKNOWN UNKNOWN'S, THINGS WE DONT KNOW WE DONT KNOW!!!!!
Spike: What?
Me: Say what again..... SAY WHAT AGAIN!!!! I DARE YOU I DOUBLE DARE YOU MOTHERF***ER SAY WHAT ONE MORE GOD DAMN TIME!!!!!
Spike:........
Me: *shoots wall next to him* IM SORRY DID I BREAK YOUR CONCENTRATION?!?!?!
And now I will continue reading so fast, I'll disappear!! Both of you, Pervs!!
Swag.
How did you even see that?
Like a boss
WHY.
I must ask, is there a sex scene in the twilight books? I haven't read them and don't have rock solid determination on reading em anytime soon.
So this is a clop fic about a clop fic that is based on a romantic, sexual, paranormal story? Clopception.
I say dear sir/ma'am, if a twilight fan that is also a brony reads this story and isn't grossed out by the clop, much rejoicing would be had in both fandoms.
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501763 i was just watchin that show
2384812 What the hell is that show, that was f*cking hilarious
2495934 Pulp fiction. by far one of the greats in movie history
1127287 again :3