PS: Wouldn't it been hillarious, if Spike accidently sent an entire tree to Celestia? That would have been a great trigger . twitchtvfaces.com/images/Kappa.png
You bastard.... Its ok, I can take this kind of cliffhanger alot better than that last one.... Still..... DAMN YOU! *raises fist to sky and shakes it dramaticaly*
Oh gawd, amma kill y'all for this! NO! Spikey, Why??? Oh and... um Twilight too... The buck is this? T-Twilight! no... Err... that was wierd... heh heh ... Derp
Best chapter yet! I'm thinking this will probably end up being one of - if not the - best clopfics of all time. Or actually, it might be more appropriate to call it a romance fic, really, as it's more romantic than cloppy.
Streak, I swear, I am going to take a running leap over the Atlantic Ocean, land in Germany, and punch you in the face. That was possibly the most painful cliffhanger I have ever read!
Awesome story so far... really loving it. However, these two sentences threw me off, if you get the chance to look at them and fix:
"Twilight gasped softly, closing his eyes as he felt his dragonhood come out and quickly begin enlarging. Spike leaned back a bit as well, his upper body supported by Twilight's other hoof as he gave out a long sigh, feeling Twilight's hoof press against his member."
Well, well, well, what have we here? Twilight Spikel, huh? Oh, I'm really scared So you're the ship everybody's talkin' about, ha, ha
You're jokin', you're jokin' I can't believe my eyes You're jokin me, you gotta be You cant love this guy! He's a baby, he's small I don't know which is worse I might just split a scale now If I don't die laughing first
When Mr. Dragon says This ship should be banned You'd better pay attention now 'Cause I'm the Dragon Man And if you aren't shakin' Then something's very wrong 'Cause this may be the last time now That you hear the Dragon song, ohhh
[Rarity] Ohhh
[Dragon man] Ohhh
[Rainbow Dash] Ohhh
[OOGIE BOOGIE] Ohhh
[Pinkie Pie] Ohhh, he's the Dragon Man
[Dragon Man] Well if I'm feelin' antsy And there's nothin' much to do I might just read a clop fic That doesn't include you two! And don't ya know one thing That would make it work so nice? A ship between consenting adults, really would suffice.
[Rarity] Ohhh
[Dragon Man] Oh, yeah
[Rarity] Ohhh
[Dragon Man] Ohhh
[Rarity] Ohhh
[Dragon Man & Rarity] Oh, yeah, I'm/he's the Dragon Man
[Twilight] Release us now Or you must face the dire consequences The readers are expecting a happy ending So please come, to your senses
[Dragon Man] You're jokin', you're jokin' I can't believe my ears Would someone shut this filly up I'm drownin' in my tears It's funny, I'm laughing You really are too much And now, with your permission I'm going to do my stuff
[Twilight] What are you going to do?
[Dragon Man] I'm gonna do the best I can
Oh, the Cracking of bones To me is music in the air 'Cause I'm a cock blocking Dragon Man And I wont get out of your hair
It's much more fun, I must confess When cloppins are on the line Not Spike, of course, but adults, my dear Now that'd be just fine
[Twilight] Release me fast or you will have to Answer for this heinous act
[Dragon Man] Oh, brother, you're something You put me in a spin You aren't comprehending The position That you're in It's hopeless, you're finished You haven't got a prayer 'Cause I'm the Dragon Man And you ain't Clopping Anywhere.
While I was reading I was listening tO pandora and ushers scream comes on right as I get to the sexy part. I'm like wow this is probably either the best or the worst song to come on right now.
Twilight! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This so far is all anypony could ever hope for in a story. At the moment I have mixed emotions about this (good ones of course). Happiness sadness love hate (at the antagonist) and passion. Deffinately passion. It's strange yet amazing how you've woven the drama and character developement of a normal fic with the erotic scenes of clop together without the fic being completely choppy.
Dose anyone have a mind that just rewrites a story well mine dose and when that dragon started talking my mind pretty much was just like TACTICAL BUTT WHOOPIN INCOMEING
He didn't stop sending random pieces of the forest to the princess, for he knew if he didn't it would only lower the chances of her coming in time.
I can see it now... Princess Celestia in the middle of Day Court, only for it to be interrupted by a ton of random twigs. Princess Celestia expecting a scroll, when she first sees the green smoke, only to be shocked by the sticks. Princess Celestia quickly dismissing whatever pony came to see her, and possibly waking up Luna because it’s an emergency. Princess Celestia enchanting a scroll with the locator spell, then sending it off, realising Spike and Twilight must be in a rather precarious state judging from the sheer amount of wood sent her way. Princess Celestia teleporting to the duo’s location, only to be shocked and dismayed by her student’s state, before immediately teleporting the three of them to Canterlot Castle Hospital. Princess Celestia, alongside Luna, Cadence and Shining Armor, get the details from Spike, then hope against hope that the purple mare isn’t already gone. Princess Celestia sends a messenger to Ponyville, to alert the town - and Twilight’s friends - about her being in critical condition, and the events that led up to that.
Yay! An update! Let's see how this goes!
A-aw!!! AW!!!!
You....!!
YOU....!!!
*sigh* oh well. That was an excellent chapter. Well-needing of a giantahumongous cliffhanger. :3
I love this story @_@
Cliffhangers. <3 Gotta love em.
YOU ASSHOLE.
CLIFFHANGERS ARE THE BANE OF OUR EXISTANCE.
You cliffhanging bastard you! An excellent twist, as always :D
if you killed twilight....imma kill you
*double-checks for a tragedy tag* ....whew @.@ Don't scare me like that! D:
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Oh, that's wut I was forgetting... lol
Well, hello from germany too!
PS: Wouldn't it been hillarious, if Spike accidently sent an entire tree to Celestia? That would have been a great trigger . twitchtvfaces.com/images/Kappa.png
"Create a BIGGER cliffhanger, of course!"
Streak's face if he was Miyamoto:
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"Experiment"? Oh twilight you kinky
Cliff hanger hanging from a cliff and thats why his called cliff hanger.
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Are you planning on correcting this? it looks rushed.
Way more interesting storywise though.
dagnabit ok celestia save twilight if nothing else i know you can do it.
.....you bastard... y u no not do a cliffhanger!
DAMN YOU AND YOUR CLIFFHANGERS!!!
You bastard.... Its ok, I can take this kind of cliffhanger alot better than that last one....
Still..... DAMN YOU! *raises fist to sky and shakes it dramaticaly*
You're evil
But I still love you
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Ack! Don't even joke about that! ;n;
YEEEEAAAAHHHHHH more soon please and if twilight dies you will tooo...........seriously Just Kidding............Or Am I??
i always knew twinkle spinkle was a pedophile!
"Twilight gasped softly, closing his eyes as he felt his dragonhood come out and quickly begin enlarging."
Seems legit.
Still, if my Twi dies, let's just say that there will be one less clopfic writer.
Edit: HOW THE BUCK IS THIS A COMEDY!?!
Oh gawd, amma kill y'all for this!
NO!
Spikey, Why??? Oh and... um Twilight too...
The buck is this?
T-Twilight! no...
Err... that was wierd... heh heh
...
Derp
Best chapter yet!
I'm thinking this will probably end up being one of - if not the - best clopfics of all time.
Or actually, it might be more appropriate to call it a romance fic, really, as it's more romantic than cloppy.
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Spike is not a child.
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Romance Reports was, and still is the best romance/clopfic of all time.
No contest.
Streak, I swear, I am going to take a running leap over the Atlantic Ocean, land in Germany, and punch you in the face.
That was possibly the most painful cliffhanger I have ever read!
Awesome story so far... really loving it. However, these two sentences threw me off, if you get the chance to look at them and fix:
"Twilight gasped softly, closing his eyes as he felt his dragonhood come out and quickly begin enlarging. Spike leaned back a bit as well, his upper body supported by Twilight's other hoof as he gave out a long sigh, feeling Twilight's hoof press against his member."
i dont get cliffhanged because i wait until books are finished to read em BEYETCH!!!!!!!!!
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Same here.
qwgeqygftyefwgtdftascftdwct Wat.
So sex scene, "Reason You Suck" speech, epic battle and Twilight at near death?
Well Streak, you did it. You got the Chaos Seal of Approval. Thank my thumbs and my favorite.
how about that!! howdy nighbour!! a tnx from holland ^.^
*When the dragon confronts Twilight and Spike*
Well, well, well, what have we here?
Twilight Spikel, huh?
Oh, I'm really scared
So you're the ship everybody's talkin' about, ha, ha
You're jokin', you're jokin'
I can't believe my eyes
You're jokin me, you gotta be
You cant love this guy!
He's a baby, he's small
I don't know which is worse
I might just split a scale now
If I don't die laughing first
When Mr. Dragon says
This ship should be banned
You'd better pay attention now
'Cause I'm the Dragon Man
And if you aren't shakin'
Then something's very wrong
'Cause this may be the last time now
That you hear the Dragon song, ohhh
[Rarity]
Ohhh
[Dragon man]
Ohhh
[Rainbow Dash]
Ohhh
[OOGIE BOOGIE]
Ohhh
[Pinkie Pie]
Ohhh, he's the Dragon Man
[Dragon Man]
Well if I'm feelin' antsy
And there's nothin' much to do
I might just read a clop fic
That doesn't include you two!
And don't ya know one thing
That would make it work so nice?
A ship between consenting adults, really would suffice.
[Rarity]
Ohhh
[Dragon Man]
Oh, yeah
[Rarity]
Ohhh
[Dragon Man]
Ohhh
[Rarity]
Ohhh
[Dragon Man & Rarity]
Oh, yeah, I'm/he's the Dragon Man
[Twilight]
Release us now
Or you must face the dire consequences
The readers are expecting a happy ending
So please come, to your senses
[Dragon Man]
You're jokin', you're jokin'
I can't believe my ears
Would someone shut this filly up
I'm drownin' in my tears
It's funny, I'm laughing
You really are too much
And now, with your permission
I'm going to do my stuff
[Twilight]
What are you going to do?
[Dragon Man]
I'm gonna do the best I can
Oh, the Cracking of bones
To me is music in the air
'Cause I'm a cock blocking Dragon Man
And I wont get out of your hair
It's much more fun, I must confess
When cloppins are on the line
Not Spike, of course, but adults, my dear
Now that'd be just fine
[Twilight]
Release me fast or you will have to
Answer for this heinous act
[Dragon Man]
Oh, brother, you're something
You put me in a spin
You aren't comprehending
The position
That you're in
It's hopeless, you're finished
You haven't got a prayer
'Cause I'm the Dragon Man
And you ain't Clopping Anywhere.
FUCKING CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!
While I was reading I was listening tO pandora and ushers scream comes on right as I get to the sexy part. I'm like wow this is probably either the best or the worst song to come on right now.
Twilight! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This so far is all anypony could ever hope for in a story. At the moment I have mixed emotions about this (good ones of course). Happiness sadness love hate (at the antagonist) and passion. Deffinately passion. It's strange yet amazing how you've woven the drama and character developement of a normal fic with the erotic scenes of clop together without the fic being completely choppy.
All my love to this story.
so far one of the best iv read
What's with you writers and Celestia bringing back Twilight, Stop using the Dragonballs to bring Goku back
reminds me so much skyrim
783318 are you a black high school goth girl Jeff the killer fan that wears glasses?
703362 prefer sexy face attempt go
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I was reading the first verse and thought wow this remind me oogie boogie's song and then say the caption oogie boogir. sooo good job
It seemed hopeless to get free, and in only a few more seconds, a sickening crack was heard as the dragon's arm bent a full ninety degrees.
Ow...I clutched my arm when I read that. Geez, that put an image in my head.
Dose anyone have a mind that just rewrites a story well mine dose and when that dragon started talking my mind pretty much was just like TACTICAL BUTT WHOOPIN INCOMEING
I can see it now...
Princess Celestia in the middle of Day Court, only for it to be interrupted by a ton of random twigs.
Princess Celestia expecting a scroll, when she first sees the green smoke, only to be shocked by the sticks.
Princess Celestia quickly dismissing whatever pony came to see her, and possibly waking up Luna because it’s an emergency.
Princess Celestia enchanting a scroll with the locator spell, then sending it off, realising Spike and Twilight must be in a rather precarious state judging from the sheer amount of wood sent her way.
Princess Celestia teleporting to the duo’s location, only to be shocked and dismayed by her student’s state, before immediately teleporting the three of them to Canterlot Castle Hospital.
Princess Celestia, alongside Luna, Cadence and Shining Armor, get the details from Spike, then hope against hope that the purple mare isn’t already gone.
Princess Celestia sends a messenger to Ponyville, to alert the town - and Twilight’s friends - about her being in critical condition, and the events that led up to that.
Badass.