10599 I plan on going deeper, actually (oh so many dirty puns! hehehe! ) I may just add a part where twilight is reading about how one of the characters is reading something in a story... a story in a story of a story. LOL my brain hurts.
11771 >The most rewarding fapfics have multiple kinds of climaxes. *wink*
btw everybrony I'm putting this on hiatus until I finish getting help becoming a better author. Then I will tackle Lunaughty, and then I will go and start on my most epic story yet, probably gonna last somewhere around 20 chapters too, with about 3-6 thousand words each chapter (hopefully).
12164 I dissagree. The time where I realized I was in need of help was during some reviews of Pony Scales. Though the few critics seemed like lousy trolls at first, I then realized they were right. The story, while funny, was not filling and left a lot of open questions. This was wrong of me, and I hope to be able to resolve this in the future. So yes, some day, I am going to rewrite pony scales. Some day soon, perhaps.
10668 We need to go deeper than that... :D Waiting until Chapter 4, so I read this chapter repeatedly. This chapter is my fav. See ya in January, or February, or somewhere in between.
Hm. I'd read this story some while ago and recall thoroughly enjoying it - however, now coming back to the piece I see not only did I NOT finish reading the entire thing, I also neglected to give it its due - so a thumb and gold star to thee, good fox! Excellent work!
I don't know exactly how I feel about shipping OR clop, but this was... nice; gentle and eventful. Very well conceived and executed, and certainly worthy of all the praise its garnered - please allow me to throw mine on the pile.
Mmn.. Twilight you naughty pony you. Very well done. I can't wait for more. THE SUSPENSE, THE DRAMA!
waiting for more :3
Streak you dirty fox.
DOHOHOHO!
Fuck yeaaaah full-on clopfic. Couldn't resist, could you? ;)
I like where this is going. Muchly.
What did I just read?
Nothing wrong with a full on clop fic :P This is actually a pairing I find rather adorable, also.
"There will be plot"... By which sense of the word?
Clopfic. Awesome! Can't wait for the third part.
HAY YEAH!
btw, you are now my favorite furry/brony.
Yo dawg, I heard you like clopfics, so we put a clopfic in your clopfic so you can clop while you clop.
CLOPCEPTION.
10599
I plan on going deeper, actually (oh so many dirty puns! hehehe! )
I may just add a part where twilight is reading about how one of the characters is reading something in a story...
a story in a story of a story. LOL my brain hurts.
Giggity, giggity, clopfics giggity.
OH BOY! Twilight is my favorite character and clopfics/pics of her are just
Can't wait for more!
fantastic
For God's sake man, update already!
Also, needs longer chapters IMO
i cant wait till its finished
A story about a story changing the story that the story is about.
Yo dawg, I heard you like stories.
10668
A story about a story changing the story that the story is about.
Bookception.
We need to go deeper.
@ the authors note you made.
I see what you did there!
You pulled a Zecora on us!
THESE CHAPTERS NEED TO BE LONGER
So when's the next part?
>I'm not writing porn for the sake of porn
>There will be plot.
>There will be suspense.
>There will be conflict
Fuck yes! Best kind of Fapfic! The most rewarding fapfics have multiple kinds of climaxes.
11771
>The most rewarding fapfics have multiple kinds of climaxes.
*wink*
btw everybrony I'm putting this on hiatus until I finish getting help becoming a better author. Then I will tackle Lunaughty, and then I will go and start on my most epic story yet, probably gonna last somewhere around 20 chapters too, with about 3-6 thousand words each chapter (hopefully).
12164
I dissagree.
The time where I realized I was in need of help was during some reviews of Pony Scales. Though the few critics seemed like lousy trolls at first, I then realized they were right. The story, while funny, was not filling and left a lot of open questions. This was wrong of me, and I hope to be able to resolve this in the future.
So yes, some day, I am going to rewrite pony scales. Some day soon, perhaps.
10668 CCLOPLCLOPOCLOPP
11084 read between the lines, and climb further down the rabbit hole.
Now I'm thinking wrong about this whole show. Not every character, just Twilight.
Why... why must you poison me with these good clopfics???
10668
We need to go deeper than that...
:D
Waiting until Chapter 4, so I read this chapter repeatedly. This chapter is my fav.
See ya in January, or February, or somewhere in between.
THERE WILL BE PLOT...
twighlight you naughty girl you!
It took me awhile to realize pants were the plural form of the verb instead of the noun
Streak you are an insane fucking genious!!!!!
Twilight, you naughty, naughty, pony
yes yes in deed encrypted-tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcS1Wb5Uim5sXFWJBkndNuusvEAhbMLFeE6V0agFZii-5L8SdLCZXQ
Hm. I'd read this story some while ago and recall thoroughly enjoying it - however, now coming back to the piece I see not only did I NOT finish reading the entire thing, I also neglected to give it its due - so a thumb and gold star to thee, good fox! Excellent work!
I don't know exactly how I feel about shipping OR clop, but this was... nice; gentle and eventful. Very well conceived and executed, and certainly worthy of all the praise its garnered - please allow me to throw mine on the pile.
Kind of smells like mothballs in here.
Awesome chapter! Btw, did I spot a Batman reference with that chapter title?
If so,
Twilight should NEVER read ANY story with her own name in the title.
That fake novel she's reading totally came from Shrek, right?
2600138 its in the deleted scenes ofcourse you wouldnt know that because most paople dont check the extras
2495745 *facehoof*
Well, Well isnt this an interesting story.
Ooooooh, I like plot!!
4712038 Don't we all.
2495745 you joke but...
Twilight was clopping to a story as I was clopping to Twilight clopping to a story, well met.
There is some clop-ception going on here: A novel that Twilight clops to in a story that we clop to.
Uh.....
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