Oh awesome! New chapter of this! You know, cliffhangers tend to those their effectiveness over time when the time between chapters is so long you forget what happens. Good thing I thought to reread chapter 4 first.
...Yeah, here's my reaction when the chapter was almost done: "Buck. The chapter's almost over. Buck. Buck. The situation's getting bad. It's gonna end in a cliffhanger. Buck. Buck. Buck, I just know it is… *ends* FFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUU-"
Needless to say, I want more. I don't suppose you could try not to leave us on such INTENSE cliffhangers when you're gonna be super busy and all from now on, okay? Anyway, the chapter was really, really good. I forgot how much I enjoy your work and this story.
But in the end.. Wait, that's it? THAT'S IT??? WWWWHHHHAAAAAAAATTTTTTT??????? Must... not... be cliffhanged... Uuuuugh *faints from being left hanging*
Sigh, you'd think that spike would know the value of getting all the fact first before coming to a conclusion.... living with Twilight for as long as he has.
That's why the story doesn't feel as dramatic for me, the conflict here feels to fabricated.
335235 Good point, but allow me to put a counter. Since he lives with twilight, he also knows just how much twilight can analyze and over analyE things, and may be trying to avoid that.
Over analyzing like Twilight does is one thing, but ripping apart life you've lived since birth (Twilight is almost like a mother to him) based on a few lines in a book is something else entirely, I could understand him getting mad because of what he read in the book, but going so far as to attack Twilight and run away from 'home'? that's going WAY too far for something he got from a fictional piece of work (not to mention it being only a few paragraphs at best)
other than that, the whole 'everypony hates me' etc isn't based on facts either, they've all been nothing but nice to him. (if sometimes a little demeaning) and how do you square the knowledge that Twilight recently gave him a goodnight kiss with his apparent feelings that ponies hate him? it's not that it's the worst I've ever seen from a story (not by a long shot) but doesn't exactly make a convincing argument for his anger either.
glad to see the this story updated, idk why but i had fears that it was on hiatus or canceled and you just haven't told us yet but i,m glad that i was wrong
this was my first ship fic ive started on so naturally i want to see it finished
Let me be honest with you... I either want to see Twilight fuck him in the next chapter, or force him to read more of the book with her and then fuck him. I love the story, though I think all this wouldn't have happened if he'd just looked at the description on the backside of the book.
335341 I concur. Twilight should hunt Spike down and force him to read more so he won't be mad at her or Twilight/Rarity can tell him it's FREAKING FICTION OR He can just read the god damn back of the book OR he sobers up with his rage and thinks 'Wait........ they're all nice to me! Maybe I should go apologize to Twilight so we can have make-up sex.!' Something of that caliber.
335251 I love all of your work! you motivated me with my own story---not as close as awesome as any of yours---but i'm getting there! feel free to look at it! here's some DUBSTEP.
I know this is a bit late, but I think Spike's behaviour is quite in character here. In 'Owl's Well That Ends Well' he went from being extremely jealous to running away from home, because he thought Twilight didn't want him any more as an assistant. Now he thinks she secretly hates him after he himself discovered deeper feelings towards Twily. It makes sense that something like this would get him so angry.
Yes! You've updated this! Yeeeeeeessss!
Hmm, pretty out of character for Spike but the story has me intrigued enough to ignore his behavior. Kudos.
Oh awesome! New chapter of this! You know, cliffhangers tend to those their effectiveness over time when the time between chapters is so long you forget what happens. Good thing I thought to reread chapter 4 first.
...Yeah, here's my reaction when the chapter was almost done:
"Buck. The chapter's almost over. Buck. Buck. The situation's getting bad. It's gonna end in a cliffhanger. Buck. Buck. Buck, I just know it is… *ends* FFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUU-"
Needless to say, I want more. I don't suppose you could try not to leave us on such INTENSE cliffhangers when you're gonna be super busy and all from now on, okay? Anyway, the chapter was really, really good. I forgot how much I enjoy your work and this story.
Oh what tangled webs we weave...
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Cant believe no one has done this gif yet. Oh well, FIRST!
Love it. The plot is just getting thicker and thicker!
But in the end..
Wait, that's it?
THAT'S IT???
WWWWHHHHAAAAAAAATTTTTTT???????
Must... not... be cliffhanged...
Uuuuugh *faints from being left hanging*
When Spike said, "YOU'RE NOT MY MOM!" it made me laugh and wince on the inside.
OH SHIT
THIS CHAPTER
Sigh, you'd think that spike would know the value of getting all the fact first before coming to a conclusion.... living with Twilight for as long as he has.
That's why the story doesn't feel as dramatic for me, the conflict here feels to fabricated.
Still wanna see where it goes though.
335235
Good point, but allow me to put a counter. Since he lives with twilight, he also knows just how much twilight can analyze and over analyE things, and may be trying to avoid that.
Just a thought.
335251
Over analyzing like Twilight does is one thing, but ripping apart life you've lived since birth (Twilight is almost like a mother to him) based on a few lines in a book is something else entirely, I could understand him getting mad because of what he read in the book, but going so far as to attack Twilight and run away from 'home'? that's going WAY too far for something he got from a fictional piece of work (not to mention it being only a few paragraphs at best)
other than that, the whole 'everypony hates me' etc isn't based on facts either, they've all been nothing but nice to him. (if sometimes a little demeaning) and how do you square the knowledge that Twilight recently gave him a goodnight kiss with his apparent feelings that ponies hate him? it's not that it's the worst I've ever seen from a story (not by a long shot) but doesn't exactly make a convincing argument for his anger either.
Who wants to join me in hunting down Spike and gutting him for breaking Twilight's heart?
Ooo this is getting great! Hope to see some Spike X Twilight action soon.
old as fuke
Drama. So much drama. I want more.
glad to see the this story updated, idk why but i had fears that it was on hiatus or canceled and you just haven't told us yet but i,m glad that i was wrong
this was my first ship fic ive started on so naturally i want to see it finished
and before i forget.... awesome chapter
yay! you updated
but oh the Drama! the Drama
Let me be honest with you... I either want to see Twilight fuck him in the next chapter, or force him to read more of the book with her and then fuck him. I love the story, though I think all this wouldn't have happened if he'd just looked at the description on the backside of the book.
Buck spike, don't judge a book by it's cover...or about five sentences of it! I mean srsly he should read the whole book first!
buck rarity
When will the next chapter be released?
335341 I concur. Twilight should hunt Spike down and force him to read more so he won't be mad at her or Twilight/Rarity can tell him it's FREAKING FICTION OR He can just read the god damn back of the book OR he sobers up with his rage and thinks 'Wait........ they're all nice to me! Maybe I should go apologize to Twilight so we can have make-up sex.!'
Something of that caliber.
Could this be????? gamesprays.com/files/resource_media/preview/mlp-twilight-raisins-meme-6010_preview.jpg
335251 I love all of your work! you motivated me with my own story---not as close as awesome as any of yours---but i'm getting there! feel free to look at it! here's some DUBSTEP.
Another excellent chapter.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
MOAR, GIVE ME MOOOARRRRRRR!!!!
Sad, sad chapter. Spike is pretty much hurt.
335075 Some of us may weave tangled webs but i say buck that I just burn any webs or bridges i come across
359799 Kill it with fire!
really sad chapter but i love it!
I MUST HAVE MORE! AUGH! PLEASE.
This is why I don't like to read incomplete fics. I wouldn't want it rushed... but gawd damn I need more of this as soon as possible.
By Celestia this thing is good!
An epic plot, tragic intrigues, and.. ehm.. "good" parts...
Please compleate this so that I can die in peace!
When I read this I was like miss understandings my old friend
SPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not at ALL what Twilight was expecting...
"Twilight's heart beat ferociously against her heart"...um, you mean, chest... unless... TIMELORD!!!
I... I survived! I'm still alive! I survived the shitstorm! WOOHOO!!!!!!!!!!
Now I just need to fix the fan... continue whilst I do this.
lol, I fell out laughing when he yelled your not my mom, awesome spike just awesome.
Wow I never thought Spike would do that to Twilight!!!
335341
I know this is a bit late, but I think Spike's behaviour is quite in character here. In 'Owl's Well That Ends Well' he went from being extremely jealous to running away from home, because he thought Twilight didn't want him any more as an assistant. Now he thinks she secretly hates him after he himself discovered deeper feelings towards Twily. It makes sense that something like this would get him so angry.
340301 DESPAIR
The plot thickens.
So much feels
...Damn.
stupid book
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wow... well all i can say is that the guy writing this knows what he is doing! I love it and cant get enough!
Gezzzzzz
What the buck just happened...
Wait...i can't clop to this!