Ok... What dream is Spike referring to? Prince Manlestia? Twilight, Darling! She is a the closest thing to a goddess you have! Don't wish for things that might actually happen!
You sure do overuse some words such as magic and book in some chapters. Also, I don't know of is just me, but it seems as If your over doing some things. Just a thought...
I guess this is where I say: "I find this difficult to masturbate to"? Nope wrong phrase...
... oh yeah!
"ITS A TARP!!!"
you've got a good one going here , its a shame that youre in bootcamp and unable to complete your stories inb4 4 weeks at the least However I look forward to what shall come of it later.
And so it came to pass that the dragon, who was always just so curious that it caused him eternal misery, would steal the book away from Twilight Sparkle and read it for himself........... Imma laugh if i fucking call this shit.
You're her assistant... so she can fire you if you dig through her stuff... and the only thing that bothered me is that in almost every fic I've read they have to push the "my little pony" reference in
Rofl ITS A TRAP SPIKE
am i picking up some hints of spikelight here? lol :3
This'll be good. Continue!
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The story is "The Dragon in Twilight" , the author is StreakTheFox (Notorious for good clopfics), and just look at the picture.
I knew this was Spikelight the instant I read Chapter one.
Ok... What dream is Spike referring to?
Prince Manlestia?
Twilight, Darling! She is a the closest thing to a goddess you have! Don't wish for things that might actually happen!
Hurry up and make chapter 4.
This cannot wait.
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The day a writer truly becomes an author is when they learn how to properly use criticism to grow.
You sure do overuse some words such as magic and book in some chapters. Also, I don't know of is just me, but it seems as If your over doing some things. Just a thought...
Paragraphs, not chapters -.-
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What part of a Dragon in Twilight did you not get?
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Or DO wish!
12353 im not new to streak so i know of his fics :/
DAMMIT STREAK, IT'S BEEN WEEKS, WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU!?!?
We need a continuation here now!
IT BEGINS
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PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASE DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING! Be honest when you say it's on hold. I will pay you in kangaroo souls if you finish it.
Will rarity apear in your story? (sorry I know that this fic is about spike and twilight) I am a Rarity fan, I would like her to atleast apear
FINISH IT PLEASE
Please finish it
A guess that's what you'd call...
*Puts on sunnies*
A Spike trap...
*Yaaaaaaaaaaay*
Don't leave us hanging, brony.
I know that you are doing something right now, but the suspense is too much!
Anyways, keep up the good work, Streak!
(Hehehe, Spike's in for a treat.)
I'm liking this!
Tell me, do you intend on making an actual story for the story within this story?
Or, in plain speak, do you intend on making the book Twilight is reading into an actual story? I think it has potential.
I guess this is where I say: "I find this difficult to masturbate to"?
Nope wrong phrase...
... oh yeah!
"ITS A TARP!!!"
you've got a good one going here , its a shame that youre in bootcamp and unable to complete your stories inb4 4 weeks at the least
However I look forward to what shall come of it later.
I wanna read another chapter.
See ya in a few months, Streak! :D
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A tarp? Really?
UPDATE THIS!
This looks really interesting, hopfully ya get back from boot camp soon
WHY WON'T YOU UPDATE THIS
Hopefully he will soon.
Me and a few others just got him to agree to continue it.
I can't wait to see the results...
i demand threeway! lol jk
Where is the clop?
And so it came to pass that the dragon, who was always just so curious that it caused him eternal misery, would steal the book away from Twilight Sparkle and read it for himself........... Imma laugh if i fucking call this shit.
Would see really set a trap for her assistant?
Naw....
Then again... "Twilust" ...
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I'm with you there.
Dont do it spike, its a trap!!!!!! Be awesome spike and just walk away!!!!
240340 yeah three way does twilight spike and a book together count as a threeway
2825000 you forgot commas. I'm OCD towards spelling, grammar, and punctuation :3.
anyway, -Admiral Ackbar voice- IT'S A TRAP! spike, pull out, you'll scar yourself! don't give yourself a r34 mind like I did!
You're her assistant... so she can fire you if you dig through her stuff... and the only thing that bothered me is that in almost every fic I've read they have to push the "my little pony" reference in
3727464 yeah the mlp reference is annoying when its in every story
FORTY KEKS
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So she didn't use a sex doll?
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