They're gonna mess up my FUCKING TOMATOES.
Dennis had a hard, boring, and grey life. His parents died when he was 17 and he wouldn't understand the fact that they were gone. He just wanted something to escape all of that, he wanted something to escape his past, he wanted to feel the feeling of love again. But you know what they say. "Be careful what you wish for."
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Great story. but it seems alot like My Little Dashie.
2996170 To be honest. This story was inspired by it, but I'm not trying to make it seem like its copying it in anyway so, please don't think that I'm trying to copy Rob's story.
I think you can start the shitstorms appearing now
2999355 Any ideas? One of them runs away or ALL of them run away or they get really pissed off and don't talk to Dennis anymore? lol
2999894 I was thinking of the government getting involved
3000004 I could do that
3000011 EXPERIMENTS YEY!
3000052 Well I'm not gonna torture them.
3000052 I don't think I'm going to be able to add Government because they get taken and how is Dennis going to find them? I'd have to end the story there if I added government.
3000055 awwwwwwww :(
3000156 ah ok
Well do what you want to do its not my story anyway
3000172 Thanks for the Ideas though
very good story so far.
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So long as you don't use the heart exploding twice meme, you shouldn't be worried about that.
3008542 Yep.
3008549
I don't mean to pester or judge, I mean because this IS a good story, but it just feels a tad bit rushed.... You know? I'm still going to read it no matter what. Very good story.
3008663 I'll try to slow it down because I actually want this to be a long story.
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It just seemed 'weird' that after a day with him, they all said "I love you Dad"
And I cannot wait to see what you do with the nightmares.... Seems like a good story-building aspect.
3008692 Yeah, I will add more nightmares and this might change the way Luna sees Dennis.
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Ok now my curiosity is definitely peeked. I wish to know more.
Did u take that from the YouTube video : how animals eat their food?!?!
Lol
3052295 Yeah. Needed a way to get the girls to laugh, and food + YouTube Video + Little Girls = Hilarious! Praise my math thank you.
By the way hope you guys liked that song.
cant wait to see whats next
cough' my little dashie' cough
I smell smexy times ahead
Do they know the birds and the bees?
Listen to me. THIS IS NOT A CLOPFIC! (That goes for Rainbow and Redcake. Everyone else you're just fine.)
Great story.
3089244 Tanks.
3089321 Are you going to be writing any stories soon? (Remember that message?"
Thanks for showing me the song never heard it but i really enjoyed it.
3095100 yeah i read the note but u don't really need to kill him.
I know what you are going to do next but making him commit suicide in my opinion is not a very good end to a chapter.
However this is your story so in the end you call the shots
3095113 and yeah maybe in the future some editing would be good
3095113 I was going to make it to where he pulls the gun but, then again. That's pretty fucked up. And this story wasn't supposed to be Dark. So I'm editing the story and extending it.
3095126 ok :)
3095133 Yeah. Kinda don't like my fans not being happy when I end a story so.
I need moar!
Remember not everything has to be perfect....
The cuteness... It disturbs me...
3171239 Agreed. But still. You'll have to figure it out. NEXT CHAPTER BEGINNING NOW!!!
3171488 Keep reading... there's more to come.