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Aon only knows Respect, the Law of his people, and how to kill. A born and bread warrior, now in a world of happiness and friendship. Aon goes from top level military asset to personal assistant and has to adapt to the simpler lifestyle. The story of a warrior from another world that is saved from an untimely death and his life debt to repay his savior. Will his thirst for blood consume him? Or will he have a change of heart?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 24 )
Comment posted by Fugly Duckling deleted Aug 9th, 2013

Just a question what is he going to do for ammunition 'cause i dont' think he has molds or even metal and what kind of guns pew pew lasers or splsh splsh plasma. Oh, or even superheated pieces of metal flinging out of a rifle with mass effect fields the possibilities SO ENDLESS MUAHAHAHAHAHA :pinkiecrazy:

2960621 Aon is stuck with what he has. That is why he was concerned about his axe.2960621

Thank the gods im kinda tired of them making the guns EVEN MORE godlike then they are with them becoming buckshot bullets, explosive rounds, I even saw one where a bullet was like a bean-bag round ugh such B.S :facehoof: not you of course my beloved realist :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Xavven deleted Jul 30th, 2013

2960621 you my friend are loco in the coco :twilightoops:...... but then again so am I :pinkiecrazy:

i cant wait for more chapters lolz i alsolove how they dont know what guns are and that they only took his axe

2960621 he could take out a bullet and show a scientist how to make it and poof they have more ammo

very good story so far. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Omg I can't wait and I also can't wait until get find out what guns are so excited

Yes thank u know I can't wait to keep going

Awwww, and it was just getting good

2960690 when will next chap be out I really want to keep reading

3063266 I don't know. But I'm working on it.

3063334 :yay: thank u I can't wait to read more I want to know twilight sparkles reaction to finding out what a gun is. Lolz do u have any heads up to her reaction

Big thing, seprate your writing. New speaker new paragraph.

i am enjoying the story so far. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

3063574 Thank you. I'll be sure to keep that in mind when I edit. :)

Umm... Where did that dragon came from? He just comes out of the blue and trashes the town with no apparent reason. That scene looks like it's just some sort of an excuse for Aon to use his gun. :ajbemused:

I keep reading Aon's name as Anon. Dammit WHY? :raritydespair:

3067111 Have no fear. All will be explained.

Well that was a nice chapter! Sorry I havent been keeping up with the story I've just had marching band as well as trying to digest Game of Thrones A Feast for Crows. Again im sorry for not keeping up and I hope there's a chapter soon this cliffhanger is killing me.

Chapter 4:

It wasn't Magic, it was science!
---LOL... weapons are a science of their own! xD

Interesting story, but it needs an editor.

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