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elamentalwarrior
I'm just a guy who writes stories for fun.
elamentalwarrior
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Yea time for fucking bad ass music
Glad I always check the author's profile page after I finish a story.
Didn't think I'd see this right after I finished the first one.
Anyways, definitely a noticeable fix to grammar and spelling, but I'm still seeing a bit here and there.
I would almost say to slow down, or at least slow your typing, it seems like several of the errors are either by hitting the wrong key or just forgetting to hit one.
But since this IS just the first chapter of several, which are already out, I'll save anything else until then.
(Sorry, bit of OCD in my system.
)
Oh god what has he done i fear for his undead life
May the 8 have mercy on him because Tia sure has oblivion won't
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Check out the complete version on fanfiction.net plus Mayhem my work hold your applause i know he's awesome
I wanna read about them playing Ponylands.(Borderlands)
Please.
Am I the only one who thinks 'oh shit' after reading this?
Hey elamentalwarrior, I know that you completed this story on fanfiction.net. Can't you just copy and past the rest of the chapters from there onto this site?
'Author's Note:
Yup, its a sequil.'
umm just posting that in this sites text box and it underlines it as misspelled
should be sequel
Thanks dude ,by the way how the new armor cumming along?"
really....really you, author did you really spell this intentionally wrong or accidental.... seriously
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no because I auto corrected it to myself when I was reading, but by reading your post I realized his name is likely misspelled .. mayham... not a scary name given its just may & ham, it should be spelled mayhem.
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/mayhem
also the main character is named Havoc so... destructive tendencies not guaranteed
most people as a dragon would get angry and curb stomp dash for unjustified attack while they are a dragon so ... clearly it takes a lot to get under his scales.
you dun goofed up
Never seen a six year hiatus before.