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You lied... it's only 15,311 words...
3007056
Off with his head!
3007066 Op, never mind...
3007069
Aww...
*lowers chainsaw*
3007056 Thanks for the heads-up. For some reason, it stopped the stream mid-sentence and lost the last 5,000 words. They're there now.
[Technical Difficulties]
3007073 ASS AND TITTIES
Sweet mother of Celestia thats huge.
I knew I followed you for reason.
Hot Damn... That is all that needs to be said.
Mother of Mata Nui and sweet spark of Primus....that was hot!!!
Oddly enough, the last scene evoked a literal spit-take from me. That... might have been from trying to laugh and drink at the same time though.
Goooooooood... This is all going as planned...
Nice. And I faved just too see how it goes with Luna.
well that was a rather new take of celestia, I've seen bitchy celestias before, but never bitchy, "holier than thou" Celestias...
Interesting...
Hmm....I wait for Luna. After reading chapter with her I will read with Celestia. Ha! That's my plan.
What about a chapter 3 with Celestia AND Luna as the love interest(s)?
MORE sex stories? You haven't even finished two of your "Ingress" stories yet
Downvoted for shitty OC x Canon character.
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Luna probably had a lot more lovers than Celestia back in the day... why, just look at our own royalty back in Medieval times. If you didn't have a courtesan or three you didn't donk daily, you weren't real royalty. Luna comes back after 1000 years and finds out how frowned upon it all is. No more indentured servants (slaves), no more courtesans (harems), no more "prepare your flank because your Princess of the Night demands it".
It's enough to make an alicorn go stir crazy. And lets not forget she wasn't getting any for 1000 years. That mare's gonna kill the first stallion she gets her royal hooves on. (At least he'll die with a stupid grin on his muzzle)
You seem to have some sort of obsession with these kinds of stories. Oh well, to each their own path.
This was a fresh new take on Celestia
But I like it, I really did
Now then onto Luna. I wonder how you're going to write her Personality
Dat second club scene (with the wonderbolt wannabe) up to the lines "I want you. I want to own you. To make you mine."
Damn Celestia, you scary!
Wait Windshear! You forgot to pay your hospital bill!
Best advice I can give. and I only read the first couple paragraphs before seeing this. Use more pronouns. your writing has 'Windsheer' so often it becomes a broken record. Try rearranging your sentences to use things like 'he', or to have indirect references instead, like 'A ruffle of wings' instead of 'Windsheer ruffled his wings'
3008136 Aren't you just an edgy, awesome cunt?
Kindly don't comment on my stories again. Ever.
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2b fair bro, 'shitty' is just his opinion, and the rest is truth. It's an OC x canon character, which many people dislike. You shouldn't rage about it because a lot of people are going to have similar opinions when confronted with such stories.
And anyway, it's just fanfiction.
3009253 I'm not raging about.
I merely blocked the little shitstain who felt that he had to come to onto my story and disrespect me without even reading the story.
People will either learn to quietly downvote it and piss off, or they'll never comment on my stories again.
I don't mind criticism, but I will not tolerate mindless disrespect.
Especially not from someone who has written 'shitty OC x canon character' stories.
3009268
oic
If i ever make bank I'm hiring you as a personal writer AP.
DAMN. That was awesome to read!
Very well done, my friend! Very well done!
~Skeeter The Lurker
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AnonPeg4Prez
3008136 I think that was the whole point.
3009253 I have to admit I am not a big fan of people just stating stufff like that either. If you don't like OCxCanon then just ignore it. don't read it and walk away.
Heck you don't even have to downvote this story. Its not bad you just don't like it so don't read it and ignore it. I personally don't downvote stories unless I read them and they turn out to have a story line that I absolutely hate... aka main character dies for no reason other than you want to kill her/him.
3009268 as for you ... good job enjoyed it loved the way the characters were designed. We have Celestia who seems to have taken the mask off. I always see her when watching the show as having a mask of her station on. She is that Kind benevelant ruler who helps everyone but that isn't her real face. you never see what she really is like. this though took that mask off and showed a ruler who really has no idea how to react out in the world and slowly starts to understand. So overall I would say 4/5. I think it could have been slightly better don't ask me how because I reall couldn't just point out how but its really good as is.
Looking forward to the Luna side of the story and see how that plays out.
im not going to lie that as pretty freaking GOOD!!!! Make the next one!!!
someone get my a fresh pair of underwhere
I was not expecting it to be a clopfic... much less one with a mildly decent story and good writing to boot. Congrats, I guess.
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really it was rated mature and sex and you thought this wasn't going to be a clopfic you know what sorry but that is a little bit dumb no offense
WiNDsHear aNd CeLEStIa HAVe mOtherFUCkInG MiRICAlEs
10/10 Would read/fav/like again. 20k word chapters usually scare me off, but for an AP fic, I had to put my big boy pants on.
3011154 Not to that extreme. Something can be rated "Mature" and "Sex" without being a clopfic. Just saying.
time for some new bed sheets (seriously I go to bed bath and beyond too fucking much now because of this site)
Well, it is a relief to see Celestia shown in a clopfic as something OTHER then a sex maniac.
That's always a relief.
This is great. I will be looking at more of your stories
3009268 I actually quite like the characters in this story, as it shows Celestia in her "normal pony" state (in a way)
And I think that the OC is a very different character than most characters in similar stories such as this, which, for me, made it more interesting. I liked seeing Celestia and Windshear bump heads at times. No matter what stupid idiots say, I enjoy your writing Anonymous Pegasus, as i always have. Keep on writing, bro, and I cant wait for the update! 
LIKE and FAV!
Amazing thats all I can really say about this. Even without the clop this would still be amazing, its just a nice bonus. Very well done work, can't wait for more of your work.
this is good stuff
This fic was amazing. I DEMAND ANOTHER CHAPTER!
............... if you wouldn't mind....... and if that's okay, please.......
3014919 I feel like a real idiot for loving the story so much and forgetting about the description. For that I apologize.
Amazing story. Even without the clop it still would have been great. It felt really genuine and the characters had depth and charm.
I'm surprised you did Celestia first, though, because the personality was very Luna (although not completely.), and the Celestia from the show is much more serene and seems like she'd be quite a bit more difficult to goad and taunt. Honestly, if I think about Celestia from the show as a lover, I would think Stepford Wives kinda vibe. Uncanny valley level of perfection.
Luna, on the other hoof, is best pony.