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Phil Ken Sebben


I used to write stories but don't anymore. Ha Ha! Permanent hiatus.

Comments ( 36 )
Comment posted by EricKilla deleted Jul 31st, 2013

10/10 Had a good laugh. Great job Brain.

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Glad you liked it!
I'm just loving this downvote bomb I'm getting, haha

"From the writer who wrote "A Lifeboat Made for Two," a fairly interesting read that while short will have you wanting more, comes a story about the darker side of things where rape is the name and whoring oneself out is the game of life to one little orange filly."

"Anon, as the instigator to these troubles: "Woo! That was something, Scoots!"”

“Scootaloo, as the poor orphan whom just can’t seem to find a home or parents in any story ever”

“Food for the Hungry, coming to readers’ eyes soon. Warning: Readers may experience strong need to bleach one’s eyes after ingesting the words written.”

2969375
Don't worry, there'll be some Scootalove coming eventually.
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Thanks for the trailer, HH. When this gets turned into a move, those will be the lines we use.

2969307Pffft, I upvoted because of how silly it is :rainbowlaugh:

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As long as you liked it.

2971220I wouldn't have upvoted if I didn't :rainbowwild: more in the works, perhaps?

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Hard to say. This was completely spur of the moment. I will be writing more, of course, but I don't know if it'll be like this.

Usually I downvote stuff like this. But dude you made me laugh and chuckle while at the same time feel guilt and sorrow for Scoots so thumbs up for you!

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Well, I'm glad you liked it, for one reason or another.

Well that were a interesting read at least, at least he wasn't a total dickward at the end.
But yes 7/10 would laugh again.

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Well, at least you didn't hate it.

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Not much to go off... I'll assume you thought it was hot, haha.

2977203 welll... maybe a little... but im innocent i swear :scootangel: :pinkiecrazy:

Anon here is kind of like a borderline psychopath rapist...

Okay he is!

ME GUSTA! :pinkiesmile:

Oh, and poor Scootaloo.

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I think a psychopathic rapist would have been more violent.

Is Scootaloo your favorite pony by any chance?:scootangel:

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She is, in fact. Is it that obvious? Haha.

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Totally. I've never seen you focus on the other two of the CMC as much as Scootaloo.

I've been reading your stuff since pre-fimfiction. I remember one story where Anonymous got out of prison and ended up in a relationship with Scootaloo (an older version of her). Then there was the movie fic where she's obviously the one that stuck out the most. Then there's this where it's just outright pure scoots without the other two.

Also I can't remember clearly, but I think Hurt only had Scoot (no Sweetie Belle or Applebloom).

So it all kinda leapt out at me suddenly!

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True enough. She IS my favorite. Although, in Picking up the Pieces (the prison one) I haven't really decided if they'll actually end up "together" or not. It's still something I need to think about.

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Picking up the Pieces. That was it.

So that never ended? I couldn't remember it having a solid ending come to think of it. Just vagueness and a fun concept.

You should put that on this site too ya know.

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I suppose it did end, but it was supposed to continue in One Day at a Time.

really interesting, don't know which feel to feel

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I tried to write it so you could tell that Anon was just using her for sex, but still did care about her well being.
So... I guess I succeeded?

Comment posted by Executus deleted Mar 20th, 2016

hello cool guy here i rite sad story this gud 2 yes i give thumb of up

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I'm not sure what you're trying to say. Are you advertising a story?

F-ing bastard anon in this story shall burn in hell.

its rare i give thumbs down but this time its only because anon is a dick. if i was in his place i would give hungry scootaloo food and go rape some random well off pony in every available orifice (female of course).

5015118 If I was in his position I'd give her the food and just not rape anyone. But that's just me.

5023293 same here but if your like him and your just aching for sex that bad there are plenty well off ponies to chose from

If I wasn't familiar with the fandom, decided that it would zoophilist. :pinkiecrazy:
But all is well.

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To be honest, I was somewhat expecting her to be enjoying this somewhere at the end - like, this is something they worked out to the benefit of both parties...

... but no, this guy's just being a dick about it. I get it - an agreement is an agreement, and bits are bits... but still.

Not sure what this was supposed to be about. I could see it being a start to some grander story, sure, but as-is? Um... no.

Another good reason for a category called "What". Or maybe "Caution: fucked up" would be more appropriate. And the weird thing is... I can't see anything else about it. A little sad, but mostly just fucked up. I can't hate him, or care for her, in all of this... This is just fucked up.


I'll refrain from downvoting because it's not badly written... I just disagree with what is written.

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