Chance is a young wastelander whose entire family has been taken from him. He joins up with The Orphanage, a group of ponies who are trying to make the world a better place. Among them is a teacher named Cheerilee.
Nopony has ever treated Chance like Cheerilee does, caring for him and nurturing as he grows along with dozens of other foals. She makes such an impact on the young colt that Chance will do anything to please her, no matter what it takes.
3rd person crossover between Fallout Equestria and the Vampire Cheerilee series
Commissioned by Piquo Pie for the Everfree Northwest Charity Auction
Edited by maskedferret and Y1
Chapters (3)
ANYTHING, YOU SAY?
Oh, I will enjoy the effin' SH
T outta this! 
RED STRIPED ZEBRA. RAMPAGE. YOU'RE TOLERABLE.
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Goddammit, all those feels! Those fucking feels!
FoE/VC crossover?! Reading now!
Ireaaly want to read Rampage vs vampire Cheerilee now
I have nothing to say but that was good. Vampire Cheerilee is also nice.
So it's finally here.
Can't wait to continue!
r63?
Great so far!
2997216 I'm blaming this on someone else. It's fixed now.
2997334 lol, don't worry. It's the only typo I've seen in all three chapters. Great story, by the way.
Alt titles for each chapter:
First Chance
Second Chance
Last Chance
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That was real good.
Sad, but good.
...Ugh. I'm not even sure what I can say here. Got me right in the feels, and I don't know why precisely...
Well done, good sir. Well done.
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I'm glad. It was awesome working with totally on this
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It's my special talent
Seriously though, glad you liked it.
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Hmmmmmm...
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Continue?
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Actually think that was me
I had been working on my teen rated, non-shipping, fic just prior.
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Glad you liked it.
2998993 Aye, TnaB and another guy and I are kinda working on something together, though it's more of a backburner project than a real deal, I think. We haven't worked on it at all, the past month or so...
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Lol sorry. He's a good guy to work with. Let me know when if it comes out.
Very cool story!
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Sorry, I couldn't get past the third paragraph with this story before I wanted to punch my screen. Run-on sentences, incomplete thoughts, incomplete sentences, and faulty parallelisms were just the beginning. The fact that two editors missed these things, astounds me.
I was really wanting to try reading one of these too; the idea that Cheerilee was a vampire really piqued my interest.
Good luck with it though.
3000612 I've never received a comment quite like this one before. I'm always eager to learn new things, and I would appreciate it if you could break down for me what I'm doing wrong.
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I've sent you a PM.
You are under no obligation to follow my suggestions. But if were me, I'd line up the editors and shoot them with expired jams and jellies.
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The one thing I will say on this is that different authors have different styles of what is acceptable. Some see different styles as wrong, incorrect, or even offensive. I knew when I commissioned this that it would not be exactly what I pictured, but I also realized that I would get some extra out of having one of the original crossover authors contribute. It also helps that TNABis very creative and took several liberties that I was quite happy with.
But I appreciate the maturity with which you approached your criticism, assuming the pm is similar to your post.
I always find it odd how even college professors will disagree. One might say a work should be published while the second will outright tell the same student to never go into writing because they are horrible.
This is beautiful. Thank you for this story.
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I think when Davidism is says "incomplete thoughts, incomplete sentences", it is that the story starts a bit too erratic. Some sentences are less than 6 words long, stating a single fact, then nothing is expounded upon. The feel of it is very amateurish.
There are no run-on sentences, however. Also, because I can't remember what 'faulty parallelisms' from my english classes from over (a minimum) of 7 years ago, I cannot make an accurate statement on this.
Still, that all being said, I fucking hate VC, and it is of my (strongly stressing this word, so no hater-rage, please) opinion that all stories with VC should be deleted and then forgotten.
3055583 I'm very glad that you are able to separate your opinion from fact. You're making the internet a nicer place.
Of interest, what exactly about VC rubs you the wrong way?
Update please?
Where can I read the Vampire Cheerilee series?
6810956 Here it is
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What happen to the list?
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Fimfic stopped allowing unpublished stories. I've updated my earlier comment with the off-site directory