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Twilight finds the sports section of an ancient newspaper. The pony on the front page looks strangely familiar...
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Twilight finds the sports section of an ancient newspaper. The pony on the front page looks strangely familiar...
Oh dear
I think you, or someone else might of, idk, wrote a story about Celestia growing up in school? And how she was always bigger and another pony she had a crush on asked her to join the hoofball team. This sounds like the second chapter of that story, kind of. (you have to many stories for me to look though them to see if you were the one who wrote it)
I'm trying to determine if this is related to that other story you had so, so long ago.
>>1833322 Here Comes the Sun is what you're thinking of.
>>1833361 Maybe related, maybe not. I just liked the idea.
LOL yes, I think I remember you talking about and/or posting art for this a while back! ![]()
Celestia as a football player? Alright I'll bite... *many minutes later after three rereads and weird looks from Paladin's headcanon Celestia* Huh... interesting, short of course but interesting. Yes I could see her play football, a Princess has to have something to do out side of classes and politics. Well done my friend.
Good story, just kind of hard to follow in the short word-length though. My mind skipped over Celestia's interception, so I was kinda confused since Hoofington was already on offence and then I had to re-read and all that. Just a nitpick, I guess.
And at the end of the day Twilight gives a grand total of ZERO, count em, ZERO fucks.
Teenage Celestia! Never gets old. And I see what you did with the announcers there. Clever. Very clever
we don't see much teenage Celestia. Still I was expecting something more, this story was a little flat
Well then, I now know that being in a sports bar does have an actual effect upon people.
This fic, I like it!
(This is the part where many would expect me to smash the story on the ground and demand another, but that is quite rude, impossible- digital information and whatnot- and would destroy the story)
Suffice to say that I would be quite happy if another story like this, perhaps in the same "universe" as it, was produced, but will also remain quite content indeed if this stays the bit of randomness which it is.
you should make a sequel where Twilight asks Celestia about it
that would be priceless!![]()