Wheeeeeeeeeee!

will read after sleep

EDIT:read it any ways

VINYL SCRATCH IS IN THIS OHMYGAWD.

Also, you misspelled 'Advantage' in the description.

>>16407891640789 That's embarassing.  Fixed.

HEY THERE

I think this is the first totallynotabrony fic I've commented on.

And I didn't get first.

Oh well.

THAT SAID

Dis story, me likey.

It makes me want to fall back into a field of poppies.

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>>16408191640819 Thanks, although I hope those aren't opium poppies.

So have you just been hanging out on the front page all day?  I've seen you around.

>>16408521640852 I'll have to go and check "Journal", but I'm fairly certain those are opium poppies, because Kurt Cobain was a heroin addict.

I'd fall back into a field of normal(if there are any) poppies for this fic, though.

But yeah, I've been doing that for a week or so now. It does wonders for me, I've gotten like 30 watches from it.

I had a single question. It was a very important one. “Does the word ‘MasterCard’ mean anything to you?”

She frowned. “I think he works at the ID office.”

Ha, I loved this part.

Also, he refers to the winged ponies as pegasi before he learns that that is what they're called. How does he know?

>>16408971640897

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>>16408971640897 Well, what else do you call an equine with wings?

Pretty good first chapter. cant wait to see if Pinkie will throw a party for Miller. Keep up the good work

>>16407871640787

hey dude. Miller is totally like my last name name.

What's this? Human to Pony done right?! It's a Christmas Hannakuah Winter-Solstice Hearths' Warming miracle!

>>16408971640897

The idea of referring to a horse with wings as a ‘Pegasus’ dates back to the Greeks, and it remains prominent to this day. Our culture has molded us to the point where ‘horse with wings’ is associated with the name ‘Pegasus'. Or at least, that's what my 7th grade history teacher said. Poor guy had to quit when his wife got the better paying job.

Interesting.  I will have to see where this goes.

Former Human... now I think I have to go back and read the before story. I like it. I've been wondering if I should do something like this eventually. I'll be looking for more.

Say ... it's Miller Time! /Linkara

>>16409371640937 Paul.

69 hours hey? not sure if didn't know or wanted to put THAT.... and knowing the dreams series.... I think it would be the latter.....

I am enjoying the story so far but I have to ask why in the picture his wings are so far back? Its kinda funny to look at

Not bad, looking forward to more

Haven't read yet. Hopefully will later.

*Grins* Looks to be interesting so far, I like how the character is handling the adjustment, it feels very ntural and tells a lot about him without being overly verbose. (Unlike me )

>>16424911642491

Agreed to both

Only you can get featured for over a day and not have over a thousand views.

oh... interesting...

This will be interesting and I am thinking Vinyl Scratch will be the "persistent mare"

I would told that somepony would find me when the first payment came due.

I think you mean I was told but anyways... the main thing that really stood out to me was that Miller knew where he was, Equestira, despite never having heard of it before and there wasn't a reference to tell us how he figured out where he was. Seeing as he figured out that he was in Canterlot from the paper work I'd say that's probably the most logical place for him to realize where he is.

Anyways, I'm looking forward to reading this tale. The description sounded pretty good to me and from reading this chapter I'd say it holds some promise.

I, uh... yeah, cool... I totally didn't need sleep... thanks...

>>16473841647384 The nurse said, I see you aren’t carrying your Equestria-issued ID that tells us for sure which pony you are.

'Cause this is Miller!

Miller's night!

I wasn't too sure about this, but skimming it seemed encouraging.  I've now faved for the purpose of receiving updates.  I look forward to seeing how it fleshes out!  

>>16408191640819

Inb4 epilepsy warning

>>16490241649024

>>16408891640889 >>16459411645941

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NEW CHAPTER! YUSH

By any chance, will there be a romance tag anytime soon?

nice! date with vinyl and you didn't even try! ... sounds like a setup now...

>>16565271656527

He is still kind of looking at a certain photo time to time so I guess it's a bit early for a romance tag, no?

>>16565621656562

Awww... was so excited I forgot about her

(If you can't tell already, I am a HUGE sucker for romance )

Help, I need somepony. Help, just not anypony. Help, I need someone. HELP. Great job, keep goin and stay golden^^

>>16565271656527

He has a wife.

You disgust me.

Now go to the Corner Of Shame

>>16567391656739>>16565271656527

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Go to the corner of shame!

YES, YES!

This is magnificent!

i think u know EXACTLY what she means

>>16567391656739    Fiancee.

>>16568191656819  That cone makes him look like a Unicorn.

Stupid fucking shit fuck ass balls magic

>>16578691657869 Magic ruins everything!

Huh, this is getting good!!! >:D

>>16567391656739>>16568191656819

Okay...

So,.. When does Miller meet Valiant so they can team up to fight crime and promote Democracy?

From the original description and a previous comment of mine, I'm still saying Vinyl is the crazy mare. Can't wait to see how the story progresses!

>>16407881640788

That happends to me ALL The time.

Woo new chapter! Keep it up!

Oh dear.

Awaiting further releases.

Love it. <3

Keep them coming!

This is a really good moment to go "I'm not a pony, Scratch".

This is great work.  

She knows too much! O_O

*Chick Click!*

We must dispose of her...  >:(

busted!

I don't know how he's going to ask for help. " I'm an alien please help", that might work

Well anyways, another great chapter and keep them coming.

MOAR

FOR THE LOVE OF GOD MOAR

>>16666451666645

I swear I had to re-read Vinyl's description three times to convince myself it wasn't Vampire Cheerilee.

... I suppose it would've been quicker to just continue reading to the part where she actually said her name, but who ever said I was a sensible person?

This ^^^

What the hell is he gonna do now?

>>16767871676787

Alright you do the snuffing and i'll work on the cover up. It won't be easy considering she's famous but with a good amount luck we can pull it off.

>>16841471684147

I can bride a changeling for 50 bits.

The only problem is,

Do you have 50 bits???

>>16844921684492

S@#%!!!

I must complement your knowledge on manufacturing processes. Most people don't know the difference between "stick" and MIG welding. (Although gas metal arc welding is more widely used that MIG.)

I'm the EDITOR, and I still have to ask to see where he's going with some of this.

Hope I'm catching all the errors fine.

Hope everypony's enjoying as much as I am.

>>16924031692403

I know I'm enjoying it!

>>16924031692403 Typical TNaB style - I don't know where I'm going!

>>16924941692494  ADVENTURE!

Could steel have been the one with the knife we might not ever know until nextime on dbz kai.

Good chapter! Can't wait for more!

yes... very confused is i. what will happen next? lol... don't answer that.

If I was there and some pony attacked me with a knife I would have completly lost it and probably  beat the crap out of attacker pony

I hate people/ponies who use weapons

>>16929491692949

No, you would probably be stabbed to death.

This seems to be a sequel? What is the first one called?

>>16930501693050

Nope, this is an original work, no prior story involved.

And it is glorious!

Are we going to see Mafia!Octavia with a bladed bow and a nasty surprise in her cello case?

Octavia said, “He’s with me, Iridium."

Been playing some Borderlands 2, have you?

>>16954471695447 No, actually Iridium and "Polsfuss," the name of the club, were a reference to Les Paul.

EVERYPONY'S A KUNG FU FIGHTER!!!

>>16924031692403 You know you're doing a good job when even the editor doesn't know where you're going. eh, >>16924941692494?

Excellent as per usual.  I wonder what the future has in store for him?

Dun dun dah! This just keeps improving with every chapter. I'm curious to see how this will continue. You've got a few threads going on here and you're balancing them really well.

To tell you the truth, I haven't seen many HiE stories where there's no plotline ruining an otherwise normal life. That scene just seems to have ruined an otherwise pleasant life, filled with a job, and countless other niceties. This I assume, since it's Equestria we're talking about.

>>16963291696329 I'm sorry, I'm a little tired right now and my comprehension is bad.  Could you put that in a form that's easier for me to understand?

>>16963521696352

Such a nice life ruined by a crime syndicate. So sad, would rather it be not.

Waíse Néiat, as Christopher Paolini (author of the Inheritance Cycle [Eragon, Eldest, Brisingr, Inheritance]) would put it in the ancient language.

>>16963951696395 Well, every story needs some kind of conflict.  I just took it a little extreme.

>>16964081696408

I would have made the hospital bill somewhat persistent, or given two mares an interest in him instead of one. Both would put him in an awkward position, and thus exists conflict, and yet a nice Equestrian life survives. He'd also get an ID, after he divulges that he does not yet have one. Such a perfect beginning. Such a shame to ruin it.

Brush the attack off as a one time occurence, and change the description, if you think my ideas are worth their electricity consumption, that is. It's your story though, I'm just calling it as I see it, and I would never force you into this.

aww yeah! in the MLP world, if you know how to throw a punch, you're practically a martial arts master. Amazing job, keep goin and stay golden^^

Things are getting crazy, who was the attacker, where is steelie? The most important question yet, who is the persistent mare? I keep thinking its Vinyl, but Octavia is trying now... I'm sticking with my guess of Vinyl. Taking all bets (not from author, editors, etc).

>>16924031692403  

I'm the EDITOR, and I still have to ask to see where he's going with some of this.

Heck, I'm the writer on my own fics, and there are many times when I look back at what I did and ask "Where in the heck did that come from?  Gee, I can hardly wait to see how it ends...."  Of course, that's how I wind up with a 10k love story turning into an 80k monster from heck, but it's fun!

Keep it up!

Steelie is sleeping with the fishes, ain't he?

lol kirby picure

Creating murders to kill haters.

The mapmaker should be fired.  The proof is in the pudding(head):

I didn’t think I weighed that little, but—handwave—magic!

He's human, and we're human, so this doesn't mean much to us, but he might be considering the ramifications of everyday figures of speech by now.  I know it's cliche, but he had already begun taking notice of this in previous thoughts. Magic damn it, I'm not sure what he would do in this situation!

Hmm, having a cutie mark that depicts a drug is even more suspect than constantly red eyes, not to mention harder to hide (unless you're Babs Seed.)

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A thought:  If crime is one's special talent, is there any hope of redemption for them?