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Von-Dragonblade


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Comment posted by MasterBrony Forever deleted Jul 26th, 2013

Sound great so far, yay :yay:

I am looking forward to the future chapters.:pinkiehappy:

Human in Equestria romance story with a female Spike. Awesome. I will be watching this.
Though why did you rule63 Twilight?

2939056 Thought it'd be pretty interesting. Plus, i wanted to give Barb a love interest before [Redacted] came along. Spike had Rarity to crush on. So I gave Barb Dusk. And like with both versions, their love went unrequited. Makes sense :pinkiesmile:

needs a claymore like Cloud from Final Fantasy

2977898 I was actually thinking of using a longsword instead. Cloud's able to use it with ease because he's had training. Giving one to Toya? Yeah, it'd slow him down:facehoof:

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Cloud is also technically a super soldier. So that helps.

Anyway, another good chapter. A bit cliche, but not that bad.
By the qay, i have a question. What does Barb(Spike) look like in this story? I am guessing anthro.

2979083 I'm guessing so. As far as i know, some dragon female (when old enough) actually do have breasts. The ones that stand on two legs anyway. So.....yeah. I guess so. Though I have no idea if it classifies as anthro or not :derpyderp1:

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If she looks anything like this picture, or any of the other female anthro dragon pictures, then yeah, I would consider it.

Edit. Fixed the link.

Can someone explain to me why this has so many dislikes :rainbowhuh:, 'cause this is actually pretty good :pinkiehappy:
Keep up the good work, I look forward to more updates :pinkiehappy:

2978994 dude he has a dragon side kick vs the undead and who knows what else and besides who says it has to be made of metal

2979770 I think it had so many dislikes because of the whole HiE thing. Or because it doesn't revolve around the mane 6

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A same, it really doesn't deserve that :fluttershysad:
I wish people would actually read the story before hating on it :twilightangry2:

only thing I see that you may have neglected is heights like is Barb older now or she still fun sized? is Toya taller the Celestia yad yda

3120097 Barb. That's his female equivalent, like Dusk Shine is Twilight's male equivalent

2979083 :rainbowlaugh: ya that pic is kinda gross, but the fem spike gives it a new feel to this fic

only thing that bothers me is you can make the chapters a little longer :pinkiehappy:

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Yeah, I know. But that was really the only good picture of an anthro rule63 Spike that I can find.
There are much better pictures of anthro dragonesses though. Maybe I should look for one that has the closes to Spike's colors.

3122966 actually, there aren't that many good pics of anthro femSpike. the best one i could find, i linked directly in one of the chapters. As for the others...well, i can't link nsfw stuff. so i'm SOL

3122803 Believe me, i would love to and i plan on doing that with the more important chapters. Right now, the current ones are to help prep for the journey ahead :twilightsmile:

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That is the same picture that I linked in my other comment.
Anyway, you are right. There are no good pictures of fem anthro Spike.

3123925 I think the closest one that i kinda like would probably be this one but it doesn't truly have the draconic features that Barb has in the story

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Yeah. That picture sucks.
I found some good close enough pictures, but they aren't Spike. Though a combination of them would kinda be Spike. You want to see them?
Maybe eventually someone will make a good rule63 Spike.

3124138 Hmm. i can see your point on those pictures

What sexist time, or country is Toya from?

3234338 Current times or 2013. He wasn't being sexist. But he isn't all that bright either

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Okay then, so then what country is he from, because, because there are many countries where woman would not put up with the statement he made in his mind about where he is from girls do nothing about sexist remarks.

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Then he must really be wn idiot.
What state?

3234583 He lives in New Jersey, but it's not actually explained. It's given hint as to how some of his peers and teachers act

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: 4/5 but you need more detail in the fight and the dialogue less blocky

3649838 It's like your first boss battle. It's not gonna be much of what you'd expect until later in the game. And plus, i've been busy focusing on work, so i have little time to focus on my stories :fluttershysad:

3649872 don't worry about just throwing my 2 cents in:twilightsmile:

3649897 Ah. well thank you. Though I have a hard time writing for Trixie :trixieshiftleft: As haughty as she is, I can't think of proper shit for her to use or say to a human. Plus, she's being manipulated and under the power of the amulet again so that makes me feel like she's just a generic villain. The chapter mainly focuses on Toya and Barb growing close as companions and friends, perhaps more [possible spoiler?] and that the enemy they're up against will increase in power and numbers unless they stop him soon

3649921 good idea but it is a tad forced

3649929 It's one recruit plus the skeletons he already has. It'll progress steadily :ajbemused:

...Red Knight, I already hate that guy. :twilightangry2:

He sounds like one of your typical saturday morning cartoon villain.

not bad but a little forced

Amazing work, I am loving the story so far.

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