A dragon, a dark king, an ancient prophecy and two souls from a race that has long since faded from Equestrian History. The actions of all of them will determine the fate of the land
3649838 It's like your first boss battle. It's not gonna be much of what you'd expect until later in the game. And plus, i've been busy focusing on work, so i have little time to focus on my stories
3649897 Ah. well thank you. Though I have a hard time writing for Trixie As haughty as she is, I can't think of proper shit for her to use or say to a human. Plus, she's being manipulated and under the power of the amulet again so that makes me feel like she's just a generic villain. The chapter mainly focuses on Toya and Barb growing close as companions and friends, perhaps more [possible spoiler?] and that the enemy they're up against will increase in power and numbers unless they stop him soon
4/5 but you need more detail in the fight and the dialogue less blocky
3649838 It's like your first boss battle. It's not gonna be much of what you'd expect until later in the game. And plus, i've been busy focusing on work, so i have little time to focus on my stories
3649872 don't worry about just throwing my 2 cents in
3649897 Ah. well thank you. Though I have a hard time writing for Trixie As haughty as she is, I can't think of proper shit for her to use or say to a human. Plus, she's being manipulated and under the power of the amulet again so that makes me feel like she's just a generic villain. The chapter mainly focuses on Toya and Barb growing close as companions and friends, perhaps more [possible spoiler?] and that the enemy they're up against will increase in power and numbers unless they stop him soon
3649921 good idea but it is a tad forced
3649929 It's one recruit plus the skeletons he already has. It'll progress steadily
...Red Knight, I already hate that guy.
He sounds like one of your typical saturday morning cartoon villain.
3650065 again 2 cents