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Tomsketchit


I am a writer dabbling in many genres. I only write what I love, and can only hope for others to love it the same. This is usually no the case.

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That book will revolutionize every fetish in Equestria.

This humble reader demands more.

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Oh don't worry. There will be more. Each chapter focuses on a different fetish. First was just anthros. Second was racial transformation. I've already stated that next up will be futa. And... after that you will just have to wait and see!

Comment posted by MamaLuigi deleted Jul 10th, 2013

:raritydespair: Please don't let Granny Smith get involved! BTW, can the next chapter have Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy doing some boob action?

the premise is good similar to a goddess within but you write literally nothing about the sex dude I barely got hard before it ended so you need to work on that if you want this to be a good clop fic

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Sorry, everything has been planned out ahead of time, to the point where all I'm willing is to add little suggestions like that boob thing you mentioned. But don't worry. Granny Smith's getting something special. Two words: Age Regression.

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Sorry, first time. Really not sure how to go about it. I've been... er... studying some other clopfic around the site, soo... yeah, maybe next time I'll do better. Never been all that good at creative writing and what not...

2854364 if you want I can give you recomadshens for the more developed writers work

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Uh... no thanks actually. Not my cup of tea, if you know what I mean...

2854702 Well you did choose a very long story that's far more SFW than NSFW most of the time. An excellent story to be fair.

Considering how strongly this is about sex, the sex scenes are none-existent for the most part. :unsuresweetie:

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Yeah, you're not the first to say that, and chances are you won't be the last.

I'm not experienced at this, this being my first (well, technically second) attempt at a clopfic. And I did post in the forewarning that there would be the possibility of bad writing due to inexperience.

Gak

Very good for a first time writer!

2855837 I'm not sure if you're referring to this or A Dragon's Journey. I was referring to this.

2859070 what I was trying to say is he uses the sex seens in a dragons journey as reference they may be few but they are fantastic

2859845 Oh, full agreement. That particular comment about the sex scenes was meant for this story only. Hell, I have A Dragon;s Journey as one of my top ten clopfics, and if it didn't have clop it would make the top ten SFW fics easily.

......Tomsketchit, I love you so much for this. *mwah!*:heart:

I have a suggestion for a straight chapter. Cadence and Shining with hyper on both sides. I don't like talking too dirty unless its a private forum. Even if its not hyper, anything with Shining and Cadence is a win.

2882656 Thanks for the suggestion! I have nothing against hyper. I am definitely going to add that in. Not in the main story, mind you, because that focuses solely on the main six. But they'll be there. You'll see.

I think it went a bit fast. I think Twilight's reaction to Rainbow groping herself should have been: *telekineticly pulls hoof away* "What on Equestria are you doing?!" Not immediately helping out. Remember, Twi's spent most of her live in a sheltered environment and the most she knows about sex she probably got from books.

Oh and, to make Lyra really jealous, she should have had hands.

I'm a big straight Dash fan and was hoping for a bi-Dash for this story. This is a small bummer, but I will let it slide so long we as there a health balance of straight and lesbian sex.

Don't worry cannon Dash. I know you like guys, even if the others can't see it. :fluttershysad:

Edit: Also, next time put butt-sex waring. Not a fan, even if it was semi straight. Not my fetish, and kind of killed my mood. Still, I understand that you clop writers like mixing it up. I hope the next chapter is hot.

I love the fact that Pinkie has a Pinkie Sense for Surprise Buttsex:rainbowlaugh:

Last of the Mane 6, sure, but you still have the two princesses.:raritywink: Also, if Applejack has no one left then...oh no. NOT APPLECEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I read a story where she a sense for any sex. She also gets woken up during the night from it.

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Don't worry... it's not exactly Applecest. :ajsmug: :eeyup:

I'm not saying what it is though.

No spoiler! :trollestia:

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My apologies. I hadn't realized I may disturb or turn people off with butt sex. Honestly I'm not much a fan of it myself, but I'm trying to push my boundaries a bit.

Also, I do have a clop I'll be posting soon (possibly today, if I can get off my ass long enough to finish those last few parts) that will have all straight sex... including a straight Dash scene.

I myself don't care whether they are lesbian, bi, or straight. So sorry for that, just how I felt like portraying them for this particular fic.

Thank you very much for your opinions, and sorry for the long winded reply.

There, between her legs, was a dribbling, foot-long stallion cock, complete with a heaving set of balls.

And thus, Futashy was born.

3082294 Not at all. So many people write Dash as a lesbian or bi that at this point I no longer care. Still, I'm sticking to my head canon.

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...Great, now I'm doomed. If it's not applecest, it's something close to it.

And here's Applejack, to complain that she hasn't gotten any fun yet. It gets lonely on the farm, y'know.

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Don't spoil the supri- oh who am I kidding that was friggin' obvious wasn't it?

dude this was your first!:rainbowhuh: holy crap i am defanetly looking forward to future installments whether it be this story or another

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Thanks! Glad to hear it.
If you thought that was good, then you should check out the first request in my 'Random Tales of Clop' compilation. In my opinion, it's a much better story!
Also, don't worry... you've definitely got some things to look forward to!

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That's all one really can do, isn't it.
Sorry, just occurred to me that it would sound cool to say that.

Really happy for the Sparity, it's beautiful whether in pony/dragon form, dragon/dragoness form, or implied mare/stallion form. Probably not critical, but I have to ask: It showed that when Rarity was transformed into a dragoness, she all of a sudden made her go into heat like immediately, even more so since Spike was in the room. And well we know--12 rounds of fucking :pinkiehappy:, w/o any protection whatsoever (no condoms, no contraceptive spell, not a single precaution), so it has to be said--when will we see Rarity with her new eggs?? And at a related note, since she was a dragoness in heat during all of this, does that mean that before all of this, Rarity was already going through her estrus cycle when it happened?

If both are true, I can't wait to see how all of the ponies (and dragon) take it when they discover that Rarity and Spike are about to be Mommy and Daddy in a few months!! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild::rainbowwild::raritywink:

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