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That book will revolutionize every fetish in Equestria.

This humble reader demands more.

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Oh don't worry. There will be more. Each chapter focuses on a different fetish. First was just anthros. Second was racial transformation. I've already stated that next up will be futa. And... after that you will just have to wait and see!

Please don't let Granny Smith get involved! BTW, can the next chapter have Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy doing some boob action?

the premise is good similar to a goddess within but you write literally nothing about the sex dude I barely got hard before it ended so you need to work on that if you want this to be a good clop fic

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Sorry, everything has been planned out ahead of time, to the point where all I'm willing is to add little suggestions like that boob thing you mentioned. But don't worry. Granny Smith's getting something special. Two words: Age Regression.

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Sorry, first time. Really not sure how to go about it. I've been... er... studying some other clopfic around the site, soo... yeah, maybe next time I'll do better. Never been all that good at creative writing and what not...

2854364 if you want I can give you recomadshens for the more developed writers work

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Eh, why not.

2854402 try this http://www.fimfiction.net/story/73070/a-dragons-journey

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Uh... no thanks actually. Not my cup of tea, if you know what I mean...

2854590 and why not?

2854702 Well you did choose a very long story that's far more SFW than NSFW most of the time. An excellent story to be fair.

Considering how strongly this is about sex, the sex scenes are none-existent for the most part.

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Yeah, you're not the first to say that, and chances are you won't be the last.

I'm not experienced at this, this being my first (well, technically second) attempt at a clopfic. And I did post in the forewarning that there would be the possibility of bad writing due to inexperience.

2855355 but when they are they are fantastic

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Thank you very much!

2855837 I'm not sure if you're referring to this or A Dragon's Journey. I was referring to this.

2859070 what I was trying to say is he uses the sex seens in a dragons journey as reference they may be few but they are fantastic

2859845 Oh, full agreement. That particular comment about the sex scenes was meant for this story only. Hell, I have A Dragon;s Journey as one of my top ten clopfics, and if it didn't have clop it would make the top ten SFW fics easily.

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2853164 YAY

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Glad you like it!

......Tomsketchit, I love you so much for this. *mwah!*

I have a suggestion for a straight chapter. Cadence and Shining with hyper on both sides. I don't like talking too dirty unless its a private forum. Even if its not hyper, anything with Shining and Cadence is a win.

2882656 Thanks for the suggestion! I have nothing against hyper. I am definitely going to add that in. Not in the main story, mind you, because that focuses solely on the main six. But they'll be there. You'll see.

2872570 And I love you too, random commentor!

Really happy for the Sparity, it's beautiful whether in pony/dragon form, dragon/dragoness form, or implied mare/stallion form. Probably not critical, but I have to ask: It showed that when Rarity was transformed into a dragoness, she all of a sudden made her go into heat like immediately, even more so since Spike was in the room. And well we know--12 rounds of fucking , w/o any protection whatsoever (no condoms, no contraceptive spell, not a single precaution), so it has to be said--when will we see Rarity with her new eggs?? And at a related note, since she was a dragoness in heat during all of this, does that mean that before all of this, Rarity was already going through her estrus cycle when it happened?

If both are true, I can't wait to see how all of the ponies (and dragon) take it when they discover that Rarity and Spike are about to be Mommy and Daddy in a few months!!

Okay, first let's get you changed back...

*Zap*

Twilight, she's still a dragon

Huh? Well, let's try again-

*Zap*

Um, Darling, is something wrong?

Hehehe, just give me a moment *Page flipping* Uh-oh

Not a phrase we want to hear here, Twi

*ZIP*

Wah! Twilight, what was that?

*Sigh* Well, there is one way to keep somepony from changing with this spell, and, um...

Well, congratulations, Rarity, you're going to be a mother...Of a clutch of 12 eggs...

*THUMP*

And she's out! That was a good one, Twilight!

Rainbow...I wasn't kidding

.......*THUMP*

I loved it all I can't wait to see what is next and I loved blood brandy' s idea alot raritystarry: