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Craine


An old writer polishing his ways, giving feedback, and helping fellow authors. Nothing more.

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A forgotten past is a repeated one.

Inspired by a prompt from this guy. Driven by this song.

Rated "Teen" for suggestive themes and mild graphic images. Enjoy!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 36 )

this was a great story. it made me feel so bad for Applejack that she couldn't remember what happened, and even worse for everyone else becausethey had lost one of the most cheerful ponies in Equestria.

*Bangs head against wall* WHY WHY WHY!! AJ!! WHYYYYY!! I lost my best friend in that fire…Why Pinkie!? Why did you leave me!?
It was so sad…you did such a good job!

I was worried for a moment there that RD had murdered AJ...

And as far as shipping AJ with everything in the universe, I think Fluttershy and Big McIntosh are way ahead of her in that department. AJ needs to do some serious catching up.

I was rather surprised to find an Applejack x iron Will...

You could be the first to ship AJ with Sombra, Sapphire Shores, Hoity Toity, Sparkler, Aloe and Lotus Blossom, Berry Punch...

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Challenge... Accepted...:rainbowdetermined2:

Damn, that was good. Painful, agonizing.. But good! :pinkiesad2:

:ajsleepy: You magnificent bastard...

This is actually amazing. I have no words.

That reminded me of that lame ass romantic comedy fifty first dates.:facehoof: Really Dash this is a whole new low for you. you are screwing your best friend who has brain damage to the point that she forgets what happened that day every time she goes to sleep, yeah brilliant Rarity is right Dash is being an idiot for taking advantage of a mare who suffered so much just so she can screw her and applejack wont remember any of it. i did like this story it just i don't like seeing best pony applejack getting used like that.

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I know! Isn't it great! :pinkiehappy:

But seriously, I have a soft spot (and a knack) for raking my favorites over the coals. And getting such a comment from you means I succeeded in bringing said characters to life.

Go me!

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That is a true sign of a good writer knowing how to get your readers emotions up. so no problem.:scootangel:

2879417 Are you going to ship her with Nightmare Moon? I wanna do that! I'll race you...
2881162 I seem to recall you from somewhere. We keep crossing paths so I presume we search for the same thing; good (comedic, romantic, sad, etc) pony fics.
Stories like this is why I follow you: the descriptions and adjectives bring your creations to life better than Dr. Frankenstein. A thousand cheers! If I come back to read it again I will Favorite it. No promises, but I really like this story. By the way: I approve of you whoring out our favorite apple farmer.

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Why thank you.:pinkiehappy: it does seem like we cross paths alot even when this is a big site with alot of stories.:rainbowlaugh: Applejack is best pony she needs more love that's for sure.:scootangel:

Hnnngg them feels.

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AppleMoon, huh? :rainbowdetermined2:

You sure you wanna take this road?

2885080 NightmareJack...?

All my yes.

Also, this fic needs more love. Only 18 likes? Philistines.

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Edit: Well, I don't exactly target specific audiences. I write what I want, dammit!

2885155 As a side-note, I actually didn't really like AJ that much when I first watched the show.

Then she grew on me as I got into the fandom.

Then I read your fics and now she's one of my fave characters.

You, sir, are da man. :ajsmug:

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I've said once, and beside my kindred spirits, I shall say it again.

Applejack is best pony. Period.

2885179 Whoa, whoa, whoa.

Aj is awesome, but, well...

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The universe's official sexiest being would like a word.

:raritycry: This fic is really sad! Why does Applejack have to forget what happened every single day!:fluttercry:

Really well written though.

2885080 I already did a Nightmare and Scorpan clop. I can do Nightmare and Applebutt. Does clop count or is it pure romance?

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Eck... Clop. Well, if you ARE doing that, I'll see you at the finish line with a fresh, one-of-a-kind, sock-your-knocks-off AppleMoon romance!!!! Tremble before the brilliance! Tremble, I say!

2887601 No clop then. Ooh, I'm gonna enjoy this. You're much better than I am, so I tremble.:rainbowderp: Still, I am creative and can work this.:rainbowdetermined2:

This was an excellent effort! A simple story executed perfectly to tug out my heart guts. I loved that in this I end up feeling the worst for Rainbow. This was a like well earned and please keep writing.

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That, I will! That I will.:raritywink: Thanks for your praise.

The premise is just... STUPIDLY contrived, as usually is the cause for amnesia-based plots. And yet, the way you ended it is so powerful that it still makes it worth it. Cut off on the perfect note, nothing resolved but everything explained, just as it should be. It's a tragedy succinct and understated enough that it makes me swallow it despite the premise rather than because of it.

Agh! My feels! They hurt... so... bad!

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Beautiful work, I don't know what else to say that won't make me cry.

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Oh, Mikemarksman. You should know your feels are in grave danger when I tag a fic 'sad'. S'what I do. :moustache:

I feel applejack is the best one to ship with everything in the universe! well done!

3871935 You, I like!

My favorite part of this whole story was how Rainbow dealt with it all. Also, I freaking CHEERED when Applejack lost it. Rarely get to read scenes where AJ loses her cool. This was superb! Just...ahh!

3939400 Hah! The funny thing is, I too rarely see Applejack loose her cool; partly why I made this, partly why I referenced one of the most ridiculous romantic comedies I've ever seen, partly why I love writing her so damn much.

It's so stimulating to talk to a fellow Best Pony lover. :pinkiehappy:

Craine...

Driven bythis song.

Um, Craine? Sorry if I sound like a broken record/cuckoo clock because of this, but the link doesn’t go anywhere.

Why almost every ApplePie fic I read must be so sad?
But seriously, that was a really good fic.

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