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Being reformed means that many habits gained from an eternal existence have been removed. Be it forceful, or willing. Discord may be 'good', but he isn't dead.
Rated "Teen" for crude humor, and suggestive themes. Enjoy with lots of laughs, my friends!
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That was a fun one shot. I really enjoyed how you characterized Discord and his interactions with the Mane6, especially his flirting.
If you decided to continue this, I'd definitely track it.
2401948 At one point I did consider continuing this. But after reading and editing it several times, I realized how good it is on its own. On a side-note, Discord's flirting was inspired by the oh so shameless PinkieCord Fics that have wormed their into my heart.
Just sayin.
That was one of the most hilarious lines I've read in a fic, I applaud you good sir.
I would of love to see more of Discord's gags and jokes if you ever think of continuing this.
Just seeing the title and cover image got that annoying Quagmire song stuck in my head... "Giggity, giggity, LET'S HAVE SEX!"
PLZ MOAR! That was so good :D “And this!” Twilight whisked the parchment to her lap. “Sexual Harassment?! REALLY?!”
“...
...
I regret nothing.”
I actually cried laughing
Perfect!
It pisses me off when somebody brings up oxymorons, and somebody else says "jumbo shrimp."
IT'S NOT A FUCKING OXYMORON YOU MOTHERFUCKER
SHRIMP IS NOT AN ADJECTIVE IN THIS SITUATION
IT IS A SPECIES
THEREFORE IS NOT AN OXYMORON
2403640 Maybe. But what if it was...
this is awesome, THIS is how discord should act after 'reformation'
Fucking love discord
Is amherst a word?
2405407 That's what I said when I first saw it. And yes. Yes it is.
HA! You got me down pat! Loved this!
2424803 Thanks, I try.
This fic needs more love.
2433740 RIGHT????
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So very right.
This is definitely one story that was a very good read.
No dislikes, impressive.
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Well, I'd be disappointed--and partially concerned for humanity--if someone disliked a fic that was designed to brighten the day.
Here, have my like
and 10 mustaches 
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I'll take your mustaches, and raise ya two smiles!
Sexual Harresment? - regrets nothing
Mares got a rump - omg so fucking funny
I laughed my ass off at those parts. Also
What turn me to stone for a week? - bitch
I laughed so hard I CRIED! What an awesome fic! Pff--he's so in character!
....I liked the flirting with Pinkie...hehehe--*shot*
I liked this fic. Very short, soft and... sweet.
Like a certain fruit.
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Your move.
This is probably one of my favorite Discord Fics. Not because it's extremly well written, or it develops Discords character in ways unseen before. I love this because it does what you're supposed to do with Discord. Something that a lot of FIMfic writers forget.
Ya play him for laughs.
Discord is a funny character, ya play him to make us laugh.
Also, that was a good Hellsing Abridged reference in there. I like that.
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I wondered when someone would catch that reference! You just made my day!
2772005 You know, that sparked an idea.
If they make the reformed Discord a bit like a PG Version of Alucard from Hellsing abridged, wouldn't that be awesome?
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If it wasn't obvious, that's what I was going for.
2774781 I realized that.
I was talking about the actual show.
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Honestly, I can only see it in a movie. Or an extended episode. Going that far on national TV would be as bad as "6Teen, or "Stoked". God... The innuendo.
2774819 ...Agreed.
This story has been reviewed by The Equestrian Critics Society.
Story Title: Who Else, but Discord?
Author: Craine.
Reviewed by: MrAlbum321.
Summary: This story is a high-quality one-shot in a sea of high-quality one-shots. This means that the grammar is good, the dialogue is perfectly crafted for good comedic timing, the choice of words vividly describes Discord, his environment, and the characters around him with an economy that is enviable, and it is over and done in under ten minutes, give or take a few. While the quality of the piece does not make the piece stand out from the crowd, at least it can stand shoulder-to-shoulder with the rest of its ilk.
Full review.
Score: 9/10
I really enjoyed this.
FYI, I know you're not looking for a critique, but I will note that "Chow" is spelled "Ciao."
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Wow. Can't believe I missed that... FIXED! With extreme prejudice, FIXED!
That was incredible fun to read! M-O-R-E D-I-S-C-O-R-D!
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Refer to my latest blog-post. I think you'll be pleased.
I'm just dying to know who he sexually harassed
3040146 I think it's Pinkie
3277942 I completely agree!
But you gotta admit, it was torn out of Cartoon Network for it's overtly suggestive quality. Good ratings or not, they just couldn't keep it
3278371 Time and shitty new management, bro. Time and shitty new management.
Discord's life must be really good. Also, sorry, habit of mine...
"The Spirit"
Only critique I've got is how the heck he badmouthed David Blaine? All he did was point out that Blaine as done the same stunt and nobody minded.
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The Amazing World of Gumball is actually pretty damn funny, It's definitely made along the lines of the "Lets make everything weird and nonsensical" bend that CN has been pushing, but if you can get over the weirdness, It's actually quite good. The characters aren't inherently stupid and/or annoying(Lots of characters these days), and they don't give that artificial coolness they try to fabricate (Regular Show, I'm looking at you so hard). Most of the antics come from poor understanding due to childhood innocence or enthusiasm.
Extremely short, but cute story. I'm not sure he'd openly risk being turned to stone again, but I like the idea that he sees his work as gifts, and is genuinely happy.
Kind of wish the sexual harassment thing had been expanded on too. That could've been really hilarious. Though I suppose it's more fun just filling in the blank ourselves. I'd offer some constructive criticism, but the author's note suggests not to, so I won't.
Glad I found this, because this was pretty funny. Nothing beats having the last laugh, and laughing loudest.
Who else but quagmire?
4709019 He's Quagmire, Quamire.
You never quite know what he's gonna do next.
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a woman.
This was very much fun, giggled through the whole darn thing. :D