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Craine


An old writer polishing his ways, giving feedback, and helping fellow authors. Nothing more.

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As the old mantra goes; Time heals all wounds. But Time also corrodes. Life, love, promises, all of them suffer for it. Applejack knew this. More than anypony, really. The day she watched Rainbow Dash leave to achieve her life-goal, Applejack might've forgotten. Just for a moment.

'For years, I clung to the memory of it. Then the memory of the memory. And then nothing. I look upon you and feel nothing. I remember nothing but you turning your back on me.
~ProfessorPiggy

Rated "Everyone" because EVERYONE can be a forgetful douche nozzle. Enjoy!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 36 )

I'm curios to what happens next, continue. :rainbowkiss:

I am intrigued.

Have a moustache for being intriguing. :moustache:

Oh, and please continue. :rainbowkiss:

Please continue this, that was great.

Wow... That was impressive.

I'm split on this... I want it to go on, but at the same time, It's perfect as it is.

~Skeeter The Lurker

i think this would make an excellent story. so yes, i feel it would be worth continuing.

Me like very much! :pinkiehappy: eherm....

:flutterrage:MOOOOORE!!

I like this a lot, and I'd like to see it continued if you would, but if not, there's still a like, a fave, and a watcher to be had for you. Great little fic.

This was very good, I like the way you wrote it and how tense it was, well done:twilightsmile:

I would add the sad tag. This made me cry. Meanie. Who am I kidding?! You`re no meanie! You, sir or madam, are a great author! I would like you to make this chapter longer, but don`t add any more.

I totally would love to see you going on with this. It was nice, sweet but also sad. Perfect for continuing :ajsmug:

2805763 :facehoof: Said the same damn thing...

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But seriously, I'm mulling on it. It has potential.

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I'll... see what I can do. :fluttershbad:

2807484 My gratitude... YOU HAVE IT!

2807884 I try. I try.:twilightsmile:

2808090 Honestly, I find it bothersome to extend chapter, simply cuz no one would know I did it. :pinkiesad2: Adding, however? I'm a man of bountiful gifts.

This fic has a sort of elemental simplicity to it which I enjoy because it needs no further explanation - Applejack is married to her farm and Dash is married to the open sky.

It would be a crime not to continue this.

I'd definitely like to see more of this!:rainbowkiss:

Three things
1) rate this teen, for language (or maybe I'm just being anal, I don't know)
2) add the sad tag
3) expand, for happy endings make me happy:twilightsmile:

Moar plz? :pinkiehappy:

That was gut wrenchingly tense (in a good way), but the sappy part of me is cheering for a happy ending. :applejackconfused:

You DO NOT need to continue this. This story was more about the attention received by the golden crest more than anything else. :ajbemused:


Ultimately, up to you. Here, catch.

2845994

*Story hits me in face*

Why you *****! But seriously, that's just one of many reasons I'm still debating... That, and other writing prompts. Busy man, and all that. :moustache:

Continue. Do it!

2843990 TheAstronomer100 please tell me "(or maybe I'm just being anal, I don't know)" is a typo, please.

2847835
anally retentive
It means paying an amount of attention to detail that is annoying to others.
It can also refer to having a need of control over everything.
In other words, a mild form of OCD.

Continue Please!!!!! We're all going to beg you to!:raritydespair::pinkiehappy:

PLEASE CONTINUE!PLEASE:flutterrage::raritycry::twilightangry2::pinkiegasp::ajsmug:

i like it, but it does feel like it needs some continuation. not a grand saga mind you (unless you're feeling up to it) but at least one more chapter for some closure..... i mean the girl just jumped out a window, and i think she lives on the second floor.:rainbowderp:

A little back story would be nice.

CONTINUE. NOOOWWW!!!!:flutterrage:

MOAR! NOW! :flutterrage:
I mean, if you want to...:fluttershysad:
Anyway, good read. Please continue! :twilightsmile:

~Ever

My thoughts: YES! Continue it! If you wouldn't mind...

Did she... jump OUT the window?

holy crap dude I need to read more of this, don't leave the viewers hanging, give us more PWEEEZE! :applecry:

Hiya, see here's the thing, I'm late to just about all the stories I read, but DUDE U GOTS TA CONTINUES DIS ISH...EtZ SOOO GUD ER MER GERD...
*ahem* i mean... Please do continue this, that just make my day! :scoot angel:

...

PLEASE:pinkiecrazy:

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