This story is a sequel to Requiem For A Soldier
Shield Heart, Commissioner of Ponyville, now finds himself in a battle against his worst foe: Boredom.
He's used to a life full of excitement, danger, trouble and fights. But Ponyville doesn't have any on these problems, which means he'll have to get creative and do something to keep himself busy. Of he's not able, he might go berserk on the whole town!
Twilight, Cadence and the rest of the gals will need to work together if they are to restore this broken man back to what he once was, and certain circumstances will make it near impossible to control the blond soldier!
They will also need to learn of his past through his odd acquaintances he's made and have taken residence in the lovely town. Maybe then they can see just how fractured his mind really is.
If you want more in this universe, try my other story: The Bow and the Headphones
Cover Art doesn't belong to me, it belongs to: Kleekay423
Rated Teen for some foul language and some violence.
This is definitely a lot more palpable than RFAS, grammar-wise. Did spot one thing-
As much as I love flattery, miss, I seriously suggest you stop.
Interested to see where you're going with this.
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There, it has been fixed.
Off-topic, did you read all the previous chapters on RFAS?
2846176 Actually, I read to the fourth chapter then completely forgot about it.
I tend to do that with most fics, so it's nothing personal.
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Don't worry
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puesto que somos mexicanos (paisanos) XD lo pondre en espaรฑol
genial historia espero con ansias el siguiente capitulo
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Madre Santa! Ya te leรญste los seis capรญtulos? Dame chance porfas, prometo que el siete va a estar cargado de acciรณn.
no te preocupes soy pasiente toma tu tiempo
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Ya esta el Nuevo capitulo para que me digas que tal
perdon por tardar en responder y en leer estoy en examenes
pero buena historia accion por todas partes
espero que el personaje no se ablande
ahora al siguiente capitulo
al cuerno con ser civilizado duro con el lider
y crepusculo un auxiliar mmmmmm no me convence
seria bueno un capitulo al estilo de duro de matar o arma mortal
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Entiendo por lo que estas pasando, yo tambien estoy en examenes. Pero no entiendo eso que Shield se ablande, te refieres a que no sea tan violento? porque dudo que eso pase, Shield adora la violencia obscena.
Deja responder tus dudas mas recientes:
1. Shield quiere torturar al lider, pero como todavia sigue bajo suspencion tiene que comportarse segun quiere la princesa o sino no recuperara su puesto.
2. Twilight no quiere ser una auxiliar, pero piensa: como te haces amigo de un psicopata que torea quimeras por pura diversion?
3. Perdon por destrozarte los animos, pero esta historia se enfocara mas en los problemas de adaptacion, lo mas probable es que dedique una historia de mas accion, pero no me quiero zafar mucho de lo ya pensado. Ojala no estes tan decepcionado. Sorry
NO QUE VA ME ESTA GUSTANDO LA HISTORIA CREO QUE ME EXPRESE MAL AL REFERIRME QUE NO SE ABLANDE DIGO QUE NO PIERDA SU CARACTER AGUERRIDO Y AVENTURERO UN POCO SARCASTICO (ME AGRADA) Y ESPERO QUE SE REFORME Y PUEDA ADAPTARSE A LA SOCIEDAD YA QUE HASTA LA PRINCESA SE PREOCUPA POR EL SOLO NO QUIERO QUE EN EL PROCESO PIERDA SU ESENCIA
ADEMAS HASTA LAS HISTORIAS MAS VIOLENTAS TIENEN ALGO DE AMISTAD ,AMOR , ARREPENTIMIENTO Y REDENCION ES POR ESO QUE ME GUSTA TU HISTORIA QUIERO VER (QUE MEJOR DICHO SERIA LEER) COMO ESCUDO SE ADAPTA Y HACE AMIGOS (ALGO MAS DIFICIL QUE SUS AVENTURAS XD)
OK SALUDOS Y SUERTE
SOLO UNA SEMANA MAS DE EXAMENES Y SERE LIBRE
bien esto se a a poner bueno rareza tiene caracter me agarada
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Pues alguien tiene que tener los pantalones para controlarlo. Y sabemos que Rarity si tiene un temperamento, y esta hasta el tope de que Shield le de el avion cada vez que ella quiere que haga algo relacionado con su propia casa. Gracias por poner un comentario en cada capitulo, creeme que me da energias para continuar.
De casualidad has leido the Magic of Music? Si no no te preocupes.
O.o tiene una hermana interesante
por fin se acabaran los examenes
pero solo falta mi maximo reto geometria analitica thund thund thund
(si lo se me gusta exagerar XD)
el lunes se hace
hey y como vas tu
a buen fin de semana
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Pronto veras porque Shield se pone tan especial con su hermanita.
Por lo cierto, hice un cambio Importante: A la amiga de Shield que tiene la Oz (Cherry Blosson) ahora tiene pelo magenta y alas cafes.
Nice job on Chapter 9-10 I would like to say keep up the good work.
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Thanks, I really appreciate it when people take the time to drop a comment. Between you and Dark Zero I'm really starting to get my hopes up.
I Know that I'm asking for a lot, but I want to know if there was anything you really liked about the series? I want to know what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong.
I thank you in advance.
3379753 Well if I had to say some things I liked was that the cannon characters seem to act the way they would in the show and I feel the OC(shield) was a interesting character in general.
The story was also a fun read.
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Thanks, I always appreciate feedback. Compliments are good and all, but I prefer if people tell me what I'm doing right so I don't change it. You just calmed my two biggest fears: Getting the characters right and making Shield interesting without being too overpowered. My last try (Equestrian Steel) ended up in a mess to say the least, so I was nervous about whether or not I even had what it takes to write good fiction.
bien su hermana es ruda no es la tipica timida esta historia se pone mejor
tatatan ta tan pase mis pruebas y sino me fui a extraordinario
y a ti como te fue
slu2 y sigue asi
pues la verdad hasta ahora no me has decepcionado es una historia solida y al parecer escudo tiene muchos secretos y un pasado un tanto caotico y oscuro (esa fue la impresion que me dio espero no que no me halla equivocado) creo que dentro de el hay un hombre de buen corazon con un gran sentido de la justicia solo que puso barreras para protejerse (esa es mi impresion del personaje me disculpo si lo entendi mal)
bueno sigue asi y no te dejes caer por los comentarios negativos hay 22 usuarios a los que les gusta tu historia (y con suerte seguiran subiendo )
ok salu2
y suerte
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Que mas esperabas de una niรฑa criada por un soldado que sabe que puede morir en cualquier instante?
Con tu descripcion de Shield... vas bien. No dire nada mas por spoilers.
Cuando pregunte sobre los votos fue porque alguien convirtio su voto negativo a voto positivo, el cual se me hace muy curioso
El proximo capitulo saldra la proxima semana porque ahorita estoy lejos de mi PC, entonces preparate y checa mi blog para mantenerte al tanto
sorry about the delayed but nice work on the new chapter I seen a bit of foreshadowing this to I believe you said your next story(birthday). Just remember the wonder bolt academy ep. with the idea of military in equestria makes the story fit into some of my interests but their was a error I found a small one "Lake books are the least of my crimes against the library" I think it ment to be "late books" but all the other stuff seems fine. sorry about the edit but I feel the story sunk in over time after I read it. From what I read you have given interesting info on shield that of which who he impacted their life and touched bit on why he is the way he act the way he does also I found his lore was fun to read. So far I believe this one fan fiction I would tell other to check out. thanks for the story and keep up the good work.
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Thanks for the review, I have fixed it now that I'm in my computer and not in my Android. I swear that thing is against me. Anyways, I don't care much about edits, but I think you should try separating them from the original sentence.
Concerning Shield's Birthday Blitz, I have decided to put a short (6 to 8 chapters) story leading up to his birthday. And I wouldn't worry too much about foreshadowing, I plan on taking it slow.
Concerning the Military in Equestria, you've probably deduced that it differs by Main City so I'll keep running with that. I always saw the Wonderbolts as simple Parade Soldiers seeing as they got their asses handed to them by Spike. The real Kings of the Skies are the Cloudsdale Warhawks, as they have more intense training and have to face any flying or giant monsters plus fighting airship-to-airship against pirates.
I'll have the next chapter up by next Friday, and I'm sorry about the delay, but I was on a college trip through New York, London and Paris. I'll now return to my schedule.
Edit: If you want to help me in my new story, Techno-Cello, you are more than welcome. I want help!
Well done on the new chapter , I have to say it was nice to see the some of the apple family.
I found one typo : you just added a extra letter "Breauburn! What are you doing here? How's Appleloosa?" said the blond soldier as he tried to shake the surprise from his face. Breaburn is one of those character of the apple family I wish we could get more background on. but all together I have to say its turning into a interesting story.
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Thanks for pointing out that mistake, always appreciated.
I also thought that Braeburn was an underused character, but it was because of this quality that I could turn him into a part of the Commission. I didn't touch the Apple family before because I didn't think I could nail down her accent. Since you didn't complain I will assume that I did all right.
By the way, did you see that I have a new story? It's about Octavia, Vinyl and a dude with an electric guitar. Just click here
3502862 Edited: thanks for mentioning the story I have yet to read it I have been planning to. Also the accents were fine I don t know if they were spot on but from my stand point I think you got them.
wowow que genial capitulo lleno de accion me agrada la hermana de escudo
a por cierto escudo podria tener algun amorio con cierta protagonista???????
(me inclino por rareza
despues seria crepusculo
o o puede ser fluttershy
(espero que se escriba asi XD) pero tu eres el autor asi que tu decides XD
ps me gustaria que escudo tuviera un amigo al estilo assassins creed (viva Ezio
XD
)
jajajaja solo es un comentario
ok saludos
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Gracias por tu comentario.
Con relacion al un romance, ya estaba planeado desde el principio. Pero debido a que yo creo que el amor es lento, tendras que esperar varias historias antes de que algo ocurra.
En cuanto a un amigo asesino... Escudo conoce a gente de todos lados.
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Dude, the party's just getting started. Stick around and you may find some really interesting shit. Or maybe you should read this if you want to read about Octavia hanging out with a metalhead who kills people just by playing his guitar or learn how Vinyl Scratch (DJ Pon3) fights using Dubstep. Yep, its nuts.
Nice Bioshock reference!
Then have him help Rainbow Dash (of) Fluttershy
i believe that is post to be or
Can't wait for the next chapter!
and before you ask my main reason for liking it is Shield Heart, The most badass OC since steelhooves imo. 
Really well done 
and btw your spelling/Grammer has improved a bit too, as mistakes if i find them are a lot less frequent. keep up the good work. 
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You're the first one to have guessed it, or at least to have denounced it. I don't know if he's that well hidden or if you were the only one to have bothered to type it down. You have found the Tribute Character in this story, there's still one Tribute hidden in Requiem for a Soldier. Think you can find him?
Great job on the new chapter I have to say u do agree with pinkacalypse your grammar and spelling has gotten better. I do enjoy the new OCs in the new chapter also shield still seem to remain a interesting person with the info given. But every time I hear hawk eye I think of a comic made by marvel. Great job and can t wait too read more of your stories.
Happy Holidays! -Commander Blizzard
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Good to know you're liking the OCs, because you'll get to meet the rest of Shield's team.
When you think of Hawk Eye, try to forget about this guy:
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Instead, think more about this woman right here.
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Minus the rifle, of course. At least for the moment, maybe she will get to shoot one....
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Por lo cierto, me gustaria saber tus razones de un amorio y tambien porque elegiste a Rarity, Twilight y Fluttershy. Es por pura curiosidad.
mm pues rareza es una chica refinada pero en realidad tiene caracter y creo que aun que tenga miedo ella conserva su compostura en otras palabras si hay problemas ella responde
Fluttershy es timida y amble si alguien puede sacar el lado sensible de escudo es ella pero cuando esta en apuros y en momentos de estres creo que es una chica de cuidado en especial si amenazan a sus queridos animales
crepusculo bueno me gustaria ver la forma como ella toda cerebrito y con su logica llega a conocer a escudo y todos sabemos que cuando ella piensa demasiado digamos que las cosas no le salen bien XD
un saludo perdona por tardar pero las terapias lleban mas tiempo (que te acomoden un hueso auchhhhh no se lo deseo a nadie )
y sobre lo otro bueno cai de la bici pero no me dolio hasta que los golpes se enfriaron y te dire que duele como la chi!"##$$%%%&&&///((()))/&%$ hija de %&&&///(()))===??(/&%$#" de re$$%&&//(())====##$ pu#$#%&%&//(/())==?ยก?=)(/&&% jejejeje
ok saludos
ps cuando pienso en que escudo debe luchar cuerpo a cuerpo me imagino esto (es solo un chiste XD)
Y SI EL ENTRENA A PERSONAS CIVILES PASARIA ESTO XD
A POR CIERTO ESTE SERIA EL ENTRENAMIENTO QUE EL LES DIO XD
es solo un poco de humor espero no te molestes
ok saludos(otra vex XD) y suerte
hey amigo buen capitulo y felices fiestas
(no comas demas ehh
XD XP)
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Can't wait for the next one.
Keep at it!
hello shieldHeart I have to say the ending of this fan fiction made my day.
I found one typo in chapter 15 " Mister Shield, please don't shoot the bird in your shoulder." she said as she carefully approached him." but other then that nothing really caught my eye. I can t wait to read future stories by you, I would also like to wish you and your family a marry Christmas and happy new year. 